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Reviews For Breathe Again
Reviewer: myaeron (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

Thank you for this chapter. Thank you.

Reviewer: myaeron (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV

Seriously, all the Bella & Jake foreplay is making me crazy. Gah!

Reviewer: ChandelierKnight (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

Just caught up with the story. It's truly an amazing piece of work, and honestly the best BellaXJake story I've ever read. You do an amazing job with characterization, especially with so many characters running about! The plot is also very entertaining, not to overused or anything. I'm dying of anticipation for Edward to come back, though I hope he says his bit and moseys along on his way. It's kind of scary you having posted that all the wolves were going to imprint, and Jake not having imprinted on Bella yet... I really hope he does. Anyways, can't wait until your next update.

Reviewer: myaeron (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Retribution: Bella's POV

"Mmmm. Deltoids."

Love it!!!

Reviewer: Readr1 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV

LOL WOW LOVE IT !!!!!! and I want to thank you so much for all your efforts!!!!!! TEAM JACOB all the way

Reviewer: myaeron (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Persistence: Bella's POV

I absolutely LOVE how descriptive you are! Your story is captivating me!

Reviewer: Margaret Moony (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

Hi, I jus read this ALL in one day and I'm excited to see where you go next with this.  I must admitt normally I'm Team Edward but you've got me cheering for Team Jacob.

Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

Update soon!! I need to read a new chapter!!

Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

Love the stories and the side stories that are going along with it I am so looking forward to reading future chapters of this story.  Will bella ever give Jacob the chance to get to 2nd base? and will she survive Victoria?  Also for the first time I have found a story where I am rooting for her and Jacob.  Will she be his imprintee?  only you know and I can't wait to find out.  So please, please, please hurry and post more.

angel 057

Reviewer: gr8fulmom (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

Please tell me you're not done!!! I've been glued to my pc reading for hours!!! Very well written.

Reviewer: gr8fulmom (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Persistence: Bella's POV

I simply can't stop reading!! I haven't been able to even fathom a comment thus far. WELL DONE :)

Reviewer: rock_n_roll (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

Just finished all the chapters of Breathe Again you have up and I enjoyed it very much. I hope you continue writing it.

Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

OOh!  OOH!  OOH! I have to admit that I am completely team edward but this is the first story where I am actually rooting for bella to choose Jacob over Edward and tell him to get lost.  Ilove the way you show how deeply they feel for each other.  I'm hoping that you go for jacob in the end of this but either way please hurry up and post more I am dying to see the out come.

 

Angel 057

Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV

I have to say that this is the first jacob, bella story that I truley love.   It is very well written and I can't wait for you to continue on with the rest of it.  I'm curious to know if bella and jacob will get more physical with their relationship.  of course at a slow rate.

angel 057

Reviewer: Jaxon-Noelle (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

OMG! I'm addicted, and not in a good way. I so want more. Is there going to be more? I really hope so. Wow, I'm totally rambling.

*Deep Breath*

First of all I would like to say that I love what you have written so far. It took me a good 2 weeks to catch up, but I did it and now I'm addicted.

Reviewer: cynthia (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV

team jacob!

Reviewer: piasol (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

Hi! I really love your story! and can't wait for the next chapter! but when do you think you will update?? :D thank you for writing! and p.s; looking forward to edwards return!! :D

xox Pia :)

Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV

So far I have read from 1.-28. and your chapter books are fantastic and I love that it is from both points of view.  It gives a completely different insight and depth to the entire story line.  Can' t wait to finish all of it

Angel 057

Reviewer: GuysGirls3 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

I really love this story and I cannot wait until you update with another chapter!  I would also like to see you write another one shot from Embry's POV now that Jessica has taken over his life!  I think that would be hilarious!!

Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

Plz don't make Jake imprint on Jessica!! lol

I love where this story is going and how everything is working out.  Good job and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Rawrsladie (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV

in your story is jake a virgin? your kinda giving off mixed signals. .. or has he just done " stuff" he hasnt said so i am just wonderinng



Author's Response:

That's all part of the mystery right now.  He hasn't said anything about it, and the only inkling we have of Jake's previous "experience" comes from Rachel's POV in the one-shot "Envy."

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

I've been saving this chapter for my day off so I can truly get fully immersed in the story again. It is so incredibly detailed I have to remember this is fan fiction, not another novel in the saga....but it so could be. (In some instances it feels better!) The characters and plot lines are so rich, it is so fufilling to read. What talent you have, truly.

(PS Voted!)

Reviewer: GuysGirls3 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Moments: Jacob's POV

Just started this series.  I am really liking it so far!  Can't wait to read more!  Hopefully tomorrow.  Is it bad to read while you should be working???

 

Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: michaelsgirl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV

Seriously?? 63 chapters and it's not over?  Not that I want it to be over...not that I even thought I'd like a book about Bella and Jacob, but I really, really did!  Or do!  Darn...I have got to stop reading books that aren't finished.  I apologize for not reviewing sooner...I've been dead set on finishing in between fighting my 10 year old for the computer, and getting my 5 and 3 year olds to give mommy some necessary reading time :)  I've read all of it in oh, 4 or 5 days I think? Thanks for the great "book" and for feeding my obsession! 

Reviewer: JB12 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Disturbance: Bella's POV

Hi, I am a new reader here and I am in the middle of your story. I so love it. This is about the best story I have read, you are so damn talented and this story literally keeps me sane right now. Thank you so much. I am in awe of this story!

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