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Reviewer: Daeuiel (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
OMG I WANT TO KICK MIKE IN THE FACE. :(
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
liking it more and more.
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Moments: Jacob's POV
although I am an Edward fan I am liking this story. Good job
Reviewer: jakebella (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
wonderful story one of my favorite
Reviewer: Treya (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
I smell a trap....I have been wondering seeing that Bella and Jacob are not imprints and you plan on Edward coming back in book two, does that mean you will be writing in three perspectives in alternating format?
Author's Response: No, I'm afraid that would be too repetitive, even for me! I plan on doing multiple POVs in the sequel, but not necessarily alternating the way they are now. Within one chapter we might hear from only Bella, and then in the next we might hear a little bit from each of them. It's just going to depend on whose POV needs to come across at the moment. There will probably still be some overlap, just so that we can see how one's perception of things differs from the other's, but I think writing full chapters of the same events from three perspectives would make my brain explode.
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
I loved Billy's talk with Jake. It kinda made me laugh.
Loved this chapter. Love this story. Love your writing.
XOXO
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Loved it! :)
XOXO
Reviewer: BeHowlin (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
Wow...just wow....Just finished after frantically reading this for two nights and am now comletely sad that I have to wait for the rest. You have made me sooooooooooo happy!!! When I read the Saga, I was happy for Bella and felt like she ended up where she belonged, but it would have never been MY choice. I would have chosen Jake and the wolf life. So I'm kinda living out my personal dream through your amazing story. You really have a gift, I love the way you write. I'm completely new to the fan fic, don''t even know how to work this page yet, but I will definitly keep reading everything you post here!! Just as long as you don't make her end up with Edward again! We know how that ends, I'm sticking around for MY ending!! Keep up the good work, am looking forward to the rest of the story!!!!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Confessions: Jacob's POV
Smiley face fetish - LOVE IT!
This was a really great chapter. Sorry it's taken me so long to read it - everyone has RL fail now and again.
Also, the last line was just, gah, PERFECT! Makes me feel mushy. :)
Much Love!
Reviewer: milkyway (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Disturbance: Bella's POV
oh please. Bella can't be THAT stupid. I love your story but the way she just believes everything Lauren says is so not credible. I know she's supposed to have a low elf esteem and whatnot but that was a little too much.
Reviewer: dc77 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Revelation: Bella's POV
awww I love Emily in this chapter. And love the fact that you are going further with the secondary characters than the books did. I´m completely hooked on your story. Just glad I found it "late" when there are already so many chapters. Great work :)
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
hope to get an update soon of what happens next.
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
alright, as soon as i get accepted to go to the forum, im gonna pepper you with questions, but until then all i got is the reviews.
whys sam being a dick now?
shouldnt atleast someone stay behind on the rez, if even just to act as "cell phone" in case of emergency?
and what happened to all the eddiepernalia? did she just toss it out, did she give one last sobfilled listen to the cd before breaking it in half? maybe she flipped thru the pics with jake, afterall, werent only one or two actually with him in it, and the rest pics from school and her house? im sure he would have felt better knowing that she didnt have a virtual picture shrine hidden under there.
i dont think it was this chapter, but when bella slapped jake when he went oh poor me in full edward mode i threw my hands in the air and said thank god. if only she would have done that to dear old eddie once in a while... i would have. anyway, crank er out chika, i want whats next....
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
he ran away, and jake had to drag him back? and she didnt notice that he wanted to be far far away from her? thats just precious, especially since i didnt really like the girl to begin with. poor embry. maybe he should do backround checks before the tonsil examinations...
Reviewer: Megz_3 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
so when r u going to update the next chappie? You've got me hooked.
While I like both POV's some of the convo lines are a little redundant, i'm sure readers wouldn't mind if you didn't repeat every line.
Is this one almost done? I can't wait for Edward to come back and throw a wrench in their whole relationship, but if not for a while remember to keep uping the antics and challenges for Bella and Jacob
Great fic :)
Author's Response: ummm...it's only been three days..? the next chapter will go up whenever i feel like it's finished.
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
team edward? pshaw! i only liked edward in twilight, and breaking dawn a little bit, but after new moon, and especially after eclipse i was voting Jacob all the way. edward was much too whiny and controlling for my tastes. and too "perfect" as well. i didnt like how he affected bella, taking over her whole life and deciding everything for her.
if you turn this around so she ends up with edward, i swear disappointment will not cover my feelings towards this story. i can understand some waffling, back and forth between the two. he was her first love afterall, and there never was any sense of closure on her part when he left. but to have her with him indefinately.....
please dont disappoint me. :) no pressure or anything, i swear.
Reviewer: mycullenfantasy (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
O.O Finally I'm all caught up! I absolutely love this story, and I couldn't stop reading it. I hope you update it soon. I have a feeling Victoria has something up her sleeve and Sam is making a BIG mistake taking the whole pack. He's not leaving anyone to protect the rez and while Victoria is the big threat she's not the only threat what if the vampire's who belong to those other scents come around? Sam needs to step off his high horse and actually listen to his Beta and Leah, too. Ok, rant over I really do love this story haha.
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
Loved it!
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
I love your bella jacob story it is so good and original. I can't wait for you to continue so I can keep reading I am definetly hooked and additced. Your doing a great job, please hurry and get the next chapter out.
angel 057
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
LOVED IT! MORE! The cliffie is not my friend, but you are, you writing wonder!
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
why do i like jacob's pov so much better than bella's! lol :) I loved the update! Please update soon!
Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean. Bella's are easy for me to write because I was once a teenage girl (about a thousand years ago), but Jacob's are just so much more fun, and that makes them soooo easy for me.
Reviewer: mycullenfantasy (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I already told you my opinion I'm Team Edward but at least when it comes to this story I am 100% Team Jacob.
Author's Response: That's always the best compliment I can get!
Reviewer: mycullenfantasy (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Wait, wait, wait, all the wolves will have impinted!! I'll just say this I'm normally team Edward all the way when it comes to Bella, but I have to say I'm loving Bella/Jake in this story. I really don't want Bella and 1dwarfd together. I Jake with Bella. Oh, and btw I like just started reading this story like yesterday and I am so in love with it.
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, within this story and the sequel, I plan on all the wolves imprinting. That way there will be no loose ends to tie up with some creature named Renesmee.
Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
omg! sam is being so dumb! poor bells..poor jacob having to leave her there like live bait! can't wait till your next update! great story!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: orlijah (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
Yaaaay!! Great chapter.. though I can't wait to read what happens next. I'm worried something bad is going to happen. Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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