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Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Ooo i hope its alice! I have really missed her :)
Reviewer: midnightstars (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
OMG. the Cullens are back. Finally. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
AWWW WHAT A TEASE!!!! haha i love it thought good job,cant wait for the next chapter:)
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
your mean! <sigh>
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
AAAAHHHH-Oh my gosh! I totally wasn't expecting Emmett! What's going on? Is Edward back? Where's Jacob? Ahhhh--you're driving me crazy, woman! :-) (j/k)
I feel like a broken record, but it needs to be said again...I love your writing. I love your story, and I love the suspense you are SO GOOD at providing. I can't wait to read about what's going on with Jake during this time! Looking forward to the next chapter!! Awesome.
Reviewer: Baby_twi (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
OH MY, EMMET SHOWED UP AND ANOTHER FAMILY MEMBER TOO!!!
Reviewer: dixie12 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
I can't believe you just left us hangin like that. Great as always...can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: twifan14 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Seriously?!?! This is crazy! I cannot wait until you update! Also, I will most definitely be nominating your story, and other Team Jake fics, because he deserves recognition and a happy ending. :) That should also be a hint to you that even if/when Edward returns, Bella should still choose Jake in your fic, because other wise I will turn into a Bella style zombie. I have faith in you though and I can't wait to find out what happens! This is amazing!
Reviewer: m0ngoos3 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
AHHHHHHHHH! OMG! Finally! omg omg omg I cannot believe you stopped it there! I am going to die from anticipation O_O Please please PLEASE post the next chapter sooooooon :(
Reviewer: gr8fulmom (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
So many emotions...what is going on! The anticipations is killing me ;)
Off to re-read your additions as I obviously read waaaaay to fast out of pure enjoyment.
Thanks Ysar!
Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Wow, what to say.....why would he come back? Is he (the family) going to help with getting Victoria? Will Victoria get to Bella before anyone can help? Will Bella go to Edward?
Reviewer: twinklyspecialkag (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Plesae keep going!! thanks
Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Hmmm, of all the Cullens, Emmett is probably the last I'd expect to show up at Bella's. PS - Bless Twitter. I didn't get a notice from Twilighted that this story was updated, but when I opened Twitter, there was your Tweet! Made my morning!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
GOD YOUR MEAN - I OTHER GOLDEN EYES ARE ALICE I BET! PLEASE UPDATE SOON - I KNOW WE HAVE TO HAVE JAKES POV BEFOR WE GET TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENING AT CHARLIE HOUSE!
Reviewer: melonhead25 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Awesome!
Reviewer: pricel (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
This is, as always, incredible. Blows you away with how well done it is. Usually a Team Edward fan moreso that Jacob but this is so compelling it makes me really favor Jake.
Beautiful cliffhanger. Cannot wait to see the next chapter!
Reviewer: Ashmerlin (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
AHHH! I have no idea what to say except you are evil for leaving it there! I'm divided on what I think of Bella's reaction to the vamps showing back up I don't know if I want her to react out of hurt as the 17/18 year old she is and flay them all alive (metaphorically speaking) or if I want her to just be pissed at Edward and verbally tear strips off him for what he did and how her life was affected by his actions. She definateley needs to tell them about Victoria & Jacob. Also I don't want her to to break up with Jacob even for a short while.
All in all I love this sory you have my vote!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX
Ashmerlin
Reviewer: Chipmunk143 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Ahhhh you evil cliff hanger leaving me in suspense awesome writer you *grins* So imma stay right here until you finish and post the other chappie...so..um...dont take toooo long :) LOL This was awesomely done...when I grow up I wanna write like you :)
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
OMG!!!!! After all this time??? I love it!!! I wonder when Jacob will come back...
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Oh, evil cliffie, ysar! I'm betting it's Rose or Alice behind Emmett.
And of course I've already nom'd BA at the Eddies and Bellies. lol And hey! There is a lot more to the wolfpack than just Jacob, y'know... ;-) It's just that HE gets all the press time.
And, yeah, okay, Taylor has great abs. *smile*
Reviewer: Mszblullen (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV
I ADORE IT!OMG itsperfect! when is bella ever going to open up?? jake's perfect. Hell, if she doesnt want hiM i'll TAKE him;):P great job keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV
I am so enjoying this but have no reviewed every chapter as I am too busy getting to the next one. GREAT JOB
Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean. A good friend of mine is writing a fic, probably about 15 chapters deep now, and I have yet to leave her a review. I'm always in a rush to read it while I'm at work or something!
Reviewer: jakebella (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
i love this story it really makes me happy lol hint hint write more stories plz ur good at it
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Lou Lou (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Moments: Jacob's POV
I read all of Bellas POV first and am now reading all of Jacob POV, I like it better then Bella's. You are doing a great job at capturing his personality, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I have to admit I prefer Jake's POV as well. I don't think we saw enough of his personality in the books!
Reviewer: Lou Lou (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
WoW, Breath Again was fanastic, you did an awesome job. Can't wait to read the rest of the series to see what happens.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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