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Reviewer: twilightwithjacob (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 08:19 AM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
Will you be finishing this? I noticed you are still writing in the fandom, but is this story a priority at all or have you abandoned it for good?
Reviewer: sweet_bella_cullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2012 06:52 AM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
I have read every chapter and love love love the story so far I hope you update soon! ;)
Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
I'm a bit worried that there's no next chapter or sequel posted and this hasn't been updated in months. Major props to you for continuing to write this since *2009* through all of your life stuff. This baby's almost 3 years old. Please finish it, if you can fit it in. My vote, in response to your end note question, is that you could probably post them together or it whichever voice feels better for you to write. Also, if you aren't going to finish the series but you do have the other things written that you said you did, Midnight Sun that stuff and post the drafts pretty please because it's much better than nothing and I'm extremely impatient :)
Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 07:20 PM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
I've been waiting for an imprint since you hinted at it around the Jessica chapters. Very much looking forward to clicking the next button.
Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 06:58 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
In answer to your end note, like most of my reviews are, I stumbled upon this when I found this website the other day. I found the description interesting and created an account just so I could read this story. I'm glad I did. This is exactly what I was looking for when I was reading New Moon. I wished somebody had written this and you did. Thanks for that :)
Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 06:20 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
If it makes you feel better, I've been reading this for two days instead of cleaning my house, doing laundry, etc. as well. That should stand as a testament to how much I enjoy reading this.
Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 06:01 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Dutifully leaving a reviews, as requested. I'm sad to see this story winding down since I don't think I saw the sequel posted and I'm really looking forward to reading more. You're a very talented writer and I love the voices you've given to all of the characters.
Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 09:18 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I started reading this last night and I've just finished chapter 50. I apologize for not reviwing every single chapter. The speed at which I am attempting to tear through this and the companion stories hopefully illustrates that I definitelt consider your work to be well-written, nicely thought out, and good enough to spend my very limited free time on. I came back for more and I'm looking forward to seeing how it progresses.
Reviewer: hillierjennifer (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 06:22 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
This is a really good story. I love how you manage to keep both Jacob and Bella in character and you do really well writing in both POVs.
Reviewer: wickedvampires (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 06:21 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
I am sorry I didn't comment on your other chapters. I just found this story two days ago and got hooked on reading it flying through all the chapters. I absolutely love your story of Breathe Again. After reading all those Edward/Bella versions it sure is nice to have a Jake/Bella version. Anxioiusly waiting for the dinner date. Bella is in for a sexy boyfriend with a smudge of flour on his cheeks surprise. Will she accept the surprise?? I believe so. It will be a great date!! :)
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 07:24 AM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
This is terrific. You're terrific. I hope sometime in the past couple of years since you finished this that you've created your own characters and written something you can sell and make some money from.
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 04:29 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
Just finished reading the Twilight series and kept thinking about what if Alice hadn't shown up in New Moon when she did. So, when I saw you'd written up that scenario, I had to read it.
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 04:11 AM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV
I love Emily.
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 04:05 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Wouldn't they smell dog?
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 03:52 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
So I've felt kind of left out, reading this so long after everyone else, but now I'm glad I can just zip right on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 03:53 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Of course not. And, even though I'm late to the party, you're doing a terrific job with this.
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 04:15 PM · On: Revelation: Jacob's POV
This not only helps Jake understand what's going on with Bella--it helps me, too.
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 03:53 PM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
You rock.
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 03:23 PM · On: Perceptions: Jacob's POV
Poor Jacob.
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 03:15 PM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
This is perfect.
Reviewer: Jeanne Oates Estridge (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 02:53 PM · On: Dilemma: Jacob's POV
I LOVE that the characters stay in character. And that somebody shares my obsession.
Reviewer: stmfw53 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 09:04 AM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
Please just finish!
Reviewer: Jajl (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 03:01 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
Ysar, I started reading and just couldnt stop. If I wasn't in love with Jacob before, I certainly am now! This is so well written and I look forward to the completion of Breathe Again and anything else you choose to add to the series. You rock!
Reviewer: IIimprintedII (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 01:11 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
So I started to read your story a few days ago and I fell in love with it, you could say I imprinted on it (yes, I'm a obsessed wolfgirl). I was Team Jacob anyways but I didn't think it was possible I could love him even more. But with every word you wrote I fell in love with him over and over again. Not only my love increased with every word of your story but also my fear that sooner or later your story will come to an end and I felt like a few years ago when I just finished all four books of twilight and believe it or not I just felt as lost and sad.
Now I'm sitting here in front of my computer and read all the reviews and I realize that you stopped updating the story for a long time now. Yes, maybe it's childish but I love the world of twilight and especially your world of twilight with Jacob and all the other wolves. I don't know your reasons for stopping and it's none of my business and maybe it's selfish but I'm begging you to come back and write again and hopefully never let the story end (ok, this is just too much to ask but I have to try, right?).
So please don't let us readers down.
♥
Reviewer: EmmaBrooke (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 10:20 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV
Just wanted to know that I first started reading this in 2009, and I still love it. I hope everything is alright with you, and that someday you will be able to finish this fic. Wishing you all the best!
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