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Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

I recently found this story series and have read them with an obsession. Please please post soon and kick the evil Edward far way. I can't wait until to write the chapter where Bella and Jacob consumate their love. :o)

Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm glad you are able to update regularly again.  I hope things are going well for you.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mellynn23 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

OMG! You cant do that to me! lol... I guess I can wait to find out, although Im going to be checking like crazy to see when you update. I L-O-V-E your story and I obnoxiously wait on pins and needles for each chapter!

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

I was wondering...or have been wondering for months...when you were bringing Edward back into this story.  I don't know where you are going with this, but I am so excited on how this story just keeps getting better and better.  Can't wait.  Let's go nominate a few great stories with Jake and Bella. Too bad we can only nominate three cause I have about 15 in mind!!!! (including Breathe Again!!!) 

Hugs, Stephanie

Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

is edward coming back and is bella going to leave jacob when he gets back

p.s why did they come emmet come back what did alice see?

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

Good.... freaking..... God...... are you kidding me??????

What a cliffy,

I hate you!

Ok.... I'm calm now....LOL

Great chapter, lots of questions you have to answer!!! Hurry please! 

Reviewer: LucyLu (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

Okay, so I knew you said it was going to happen, Edward was going to come back, and yes, I've been trying to ignore that, hoping you would change your mind...but here I am with the truth staring me in the face, and I just want to scream!!!  And then, in your end note you even mention the fact that most Jacob fanfics are about how Jake gets left behind, and again I want to scream!!!

The thing I have always loved about this story is how authentic and believable Bella and Jacob's relationship has developed. You've done a great job with each character.  I just REALLY want Jacob to be happy and with the chapter, I know his heart is going to break.  It makes me so sad, and a little mad! It is especially difficult after the release of New Moon, it brought all my feelings re: Jacob to the forefront and I hurt so bad for him.  This story has been one of the only places to find a happy Jacob!  Please take good care of him...

 

Reviewer: novelista26 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! REALLY REALLY SOON!!

Reviewer: novelista26 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

OMG YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO ME!!!!

 

LUV IT, LUV THE STORY SO MUCH! I ACTUALLY CHECK THIS BOARD EVERYDAY TO SEE IF YOU'VE UPDATED!!

 

P.S. IT'S ALICE, RIGHT? NOT EDWARD?

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

YAY! loved it. Now i must go  and nominate for my favorite wolfpac fic (hmm, wonder who that could be.)

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

oh tease, so excited the cullens are coming!

Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

What the....

Reviewer: Salem Witch 17 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

This chapter just felt like agonizing punishment. What I am thinking is that Edward is going to come back, screw everything up, and then at the last second you are either going to have her go wtih Edward, stay with Jacob, or have her killed/unwillingly turned into a vampire...great

Reviewer: ChandelierKnight (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

I'm glad some of the vamps are back. I sure hope it's Alice that's behind Emmett. No stinky Edward face! lol Makes me so nervous. I love BellaXJake. : ( But the chapter was good, as they always are. Can't wait until the next!

Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

ysar,

Emmett Cullen was standing in my kitchen.   I gasped really loud!   Then I screamed even louder!   I always say this, but I really should stop reading this in public!!!

 

and that’s when I saw another pair of golden eyes peering around his massive form, immediately locking with mine.   Nuh uh!  Wait!   You said after graduation!   You said after the summer!   C’mon!    It’s Alice, right?  Right!?!   Ok, it’s Alice.    Breathe, Jen, breathe.

 

Thank you for this!  

~Jen

Ok, I nominated you!  Relax!  :D

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

Another great chapter! Thanks for updating. I'm sure you've already been nominated but I'll slip over just to make sure. ;)

Can't wait to hear from Alice? and Emmett what's going on!

Reviewer: momof4luvntwisaga (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

What the hell?  Why?  I can't believe you left it hangin' like that.  Pure evil, but genious- I have to admit.  Who is on the other side of the door...Alice or Edward?  I am totally team Edward, but in this one fic I want Jacob to get her just for once.  Please update soon- this suspense is goin to kill me!!!

Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

Oh no you didn't.  I hate you.  I love you.  I hate you!

Reviewer: yodawg (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

what the hell?!?! i swear to God if it is Edward i am going to kill myself. well not literally but i will be really pissed. i mean she just got over him and his family. why bring them back into her life? it will only upset her more. i do really like the book though. just not this particular chapter.

Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

What did Alice see??? And if he was going to come then why send Emmett first? Guess I will have to wait and see.

Reviewer: superfly99 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

Oh! That was just mean. Now I'm going to be spending time between now and the next update wondering who that pair of golden eyes belong to. Please update really really soon. I can't wait to find out who it is.   

Reviewer: mycullenfantasy (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

Why the Heck did Emmett Cullen jus show up on her doorstep? And who else was there? Great chapter, but I hate cliff hangers; so please, please, please get the next chapter up quickly. I am definately going to nominate this story for the eddie and bellas.

Reviewer: ambientx (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

My stomach did a little flip. Love your writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

it was great.can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

Ooo i hope its alice! I have really missed her :)

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