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Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
IT HAS TO BE ALICE..
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
WOAH! Major Cliffy. Amazing chapter. (:
Reviewer: cdettmann (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Damaged: Bella's POV
You are seriously awesome! I am a MASSIVE team Jacob fan *starts dreaming of Jacob perfect abs..sigh* I started reading this last night and was up till 2am and then neglected my poor lil 2 and 3 year old boys all day reading! My husband disconnected the internet from the wall to get my concentration! lol (I think that was his subtle way of telling me to get off the computer)I just couldn't get enough!!! Can't wait to find out what happen next!
Keep on writing... you have talent <3
Reviewer: IsabelleVB (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
OMFG. is all i have to say. (L)
Reviewer: carlybabes (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Oh man. That wasn't a nice way to end things. Nice chapter though!
Reviewer: his bella (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Wow. I about threw up in shock when Emmett showed up at the door. Didn't see it coming at ALL. Well done! I love your writing and this is one of my FAVE fanfics- ever. I wish all your loyal readers (me included) could somehow make it your paid job to write this story so that we can find out faster what happens in each new chapter!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!
*slowly recollects self from wildly gripping the screen sobbing against it*
*takes deep cleansing breath*
Okay, so...Is it Alice, perhaps? Or maybe Rose. Very intruiged to find out why it's Em. Love that btw.
If you couldn't tell, I'm quite anxious to see where you're going. Love the ride and your sense of direction for the fic!
I nomed you and two other wolf pack fics last week! I was really excited to see the catagory as well!
Thanks for the totally award worthy, gripping, hella well written fic!!!
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Yeah, you seriously suck for leaving it there, but I understand. You gotta' hustle for reviews and keep us interested, and it works. =] Can't wait for Jake's POV. I miss him. =/ I miss him and Bella, and I hope this Cullen family reappearance wont mess with them again. But I'll just have to wait and see. =] Update sooooon!
Author's Response: Yep, you figured me out. I was talking to a couple of other writers the other night, and one of them said that every time her reviews lag, she just puts in a cliffhanger. I thought that was kind of nuts, but when I went back and looked at how many reviews I gotten for all the different chapters, it looked like there was a pattern. So just for kicks, I decided to test that theory. I'm a little shocked by how glaring the difference is. In less than 24 hours there are more reviews on this one chapter than the previous three, and as you know, there was plenty of time for people to read and review those chapters. And it's already cracked 100 on FFn. So basically, if I freak everyone out, they'll review. If not, only my most loyal readers have something to say :(
Reviewer: sillyvamp (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
AHHH... Why are they there? It is Rosalie on th other side of the door, right?
Fun story. :)
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
damn you - to leave it here?????
Reviewer: carolinagrl789 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
this is amazing! really great job!
Reviewer: Megz_3 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
shakin' things up a bit, yeah that's right
Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
okay it is Alice, I mean Edward doesn't peer around people...lol!!! great update! sooo short though just enough to get into it then you leave us hanging...how mean!!! please update soon!
Reviewer: gldnkltz (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
OMG CLIFFHANGER!!! please update oh my gosh!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
you keeeeelll me!!!! gah! can't wait!
Reviewer: Amber_Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
I absolutely despise cliffies... D:< <========very angry face...
gahh!!! I wanna know wat happens next!!!!!!!
Reviewer: saredance (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
wow.. i just read all 65 chapters in one sitting! i love it! can't wait to find out what happens next!
Reviewer: rosy1015 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
i think its alice!!!!!
please update soon!!!!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
OH MY WORD!!! Who is it?? Who is it?? *deep breath. Act like you've got some sense* Ok... I can wait. Take your time. I know it will be fabulous, because, well, it's Ysar! So... Who is it??
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
wtf? I'm not gonna get anxious.... I mean, you have a perfectly good reason to leave this where you did. OMG... WAS IT EDWARD? aLICE? WHO? I CAN'T WAIT. I'M SITTING HERE ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT WONDERING WHAT JACOB WILL DO WHEN HE SMELLS THE CULLENS THERE... OMG
Reviewer: ShOrTy0890 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
aww..it was getting good...i hope u finish the chapter soon!!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Very good, Except for the Cliff Hanger. So not nice. But Good Story.
Reviewer: meridian5879 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Damn you!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE Hurry and post the next chapter. AHHHHHHH!!!!!! Even though you left me hanging I still love it. AHHH!!!!!!
Reviewer: norainnorainbows (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
OMG You're evil, and apparently I can't leave reviews from my phone, so sorry I haven't in a while. BUTTTTTTT
Hurry with Jacob's POV I NEEEED MOREEEEEEEE please and thank you
just thought you'd like to know, your story is my personal brand of heroine, please supply me with more!
Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Ah! It's a wonderful cliffhanger. I want more! It's like oyu can't put the chapters up fast enough. Is it Edward at the door? Alice? When will Jacob come back? A little more heat in that area is always welcome...
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