ok i love it!!!!! all of it! sorry im only now reviewing the story i wanted to read as much of it as possible, i started reading Breath Again three days ago. i just finished chapter 65. the twilight saga is a fantastic world, thank you for build on that world. Breath Again is the first story i read on here and i want more. i want more of your world. please tell me that i just didn't read the last chapter. a lot of fan fics i read online just stop, and the writer doesn't finish. PLEASE FINISH. and if it already is please let me know where to find it. im new to this site, ive only accessed it all of three times, the first time i found your world and got hooked and read the 65 chapters. i haven't done anything else on here yet. after i submit this ill look around and get a feel for the site. i would love to hear back from you, i dont know if i can send messages on here so my e-mail is lmorin87@yahoo.com. fantastic story 

HOOOOOOOW?????

HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE?

OMG UPDATE SOOON! tHE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!

ive really enjoyed reading this!  when will the next chapter be available to read? haha

Sam and Jacob's conversations made me laugh :)

I WILL BE VERY UPSET IF ITS EDWARD-THERES NOTHIN BETTER THEN JACOB AND BELLA!!! LONG LIVE TEAM JACOB!!! BUT BESIDES THAT GREAT CHAPTER AND STORY SO FAR-I GIVE IT A 10!!!

Ohhh your too cruel lol. I was not expecting of all people for it to be Emment who walked through that door. Things just keep building up in this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next.  

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! is it Alice or Edward! ugh! god! no!!!!!!! lol update soon!

Jake's just so chill about everything it so funny and Bella's the opposite, too much emotion.

I thought her rant was kinda funny actually.

IM TEAM JACOB ALL THE WAT AND I LUV JACOB AND BELLA STORIES-THIS A GREAT STORY-I LUV IT-UR AN AMAZIN WRITER!!!

I guess the nice thing to do it review huh?  Ok, I'll give it a shot.  This is my first review here, I've only been registered to this sight for like, ten min anyway.  I know how these sights work though, my entire life revolves around a sight kinda like this one.  Sorry I'm rambling, I get off topic a lot when I'm on like and never actually say anything useful.

So... your first chapter (are you actually gonna see this?)...

I like the set up, it goes along w/ new moon well.  I like the internal battle Bella's fighting.  I feel like things between them could heat up pretty quickly if she lost it but her attachment to edward is hard for her to let go of, even w/ the clear implication that Jacob is the one who can heal that wound.

Author's Response:

Yes, I get a notification every time someone reviews, and I read each one of them.  This is actually one of the tougher sites for most writers to get reviews on, though I have yet to figure out why, so you're off to a good start!  I started writing the fic because I'd read a few where things between Jake and Bella were rushed, kind of like she just instantly forgot about Edward, and that just didn't seem right to me.  It's a slow progression as far as relationships in fanfic go, but I think Bella's internal struggle with moving on with her life is an important piece of the puzzle, and I'm so glad that seems to be going over well with my readers.

i'm so curious to know whose there too. Cant wait for more.

more please... I I I neeeeed More! what did alice see?!? why Emmett? I would have thought Alice... just hurry please.