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Reviewer: la_bella_sera (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I love this story and I think you are fabulous! Double points of view usually bore me but I think you have such an accurate voice for each Bella and Jacob that I have no chance for boredom...My poor hubby has been abandoned this week as I have just discovered your awesome writing this past weekend...oh well, he has Call of Duty and I have you! Yea
But seriously I do very much enjoy your writing...it's all very believable and natural, very flowing...
And NOOO love for MIKE...ew
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Oooh! will you be to 100% this week??? I'm sure your tired of hearing from me but I truly love this story ;and it is fantastic. So keep up the good work.
angel 057
Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Holy Smokes! What a chapter! I havent reviewed in a long time and Im sorry about that but this chapter gave me no choice!! I loved it... and I cant wait for your next update.
Reviewer: Hekki (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
What was the point of the fires though? I mean did she really think they wouldn't see through it? And what does Charlie want to talk about? What specifically about Jake?
Reviewer: Moonless Night (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Wow. I don't usually enjoy reading Jacob/Bella, or stories with alternating POV's but this is fantastic. Keep up the good work, and I hope that's Alice. I love Alice. - Moon
Reviewer: burnsobrightly (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
I just started reading your story.
AndI just have to say that I'm at a loss for words as to how amazing it is! THIS is what I would've liked to have seen happen! (prepares to be shot)
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Reviewer: JaneS345 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
great job
Reviewer: Hekki (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
What did Mrs. Newton say?
Reviewer: Hekki (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
very good question on leah's part. I mean I suppose w/ no Bell/Edward = Nessie Jake won't imprint but he doesn't know that.
Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
finally!!! stuff is happening whoo hoo where's is it ?????
Reviewer: Hekki (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Unease: Bella's POV
then who is it?
Reviewer: BeHowlin (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
I have to admit that I used a really bad word at the end of this chapter....quite the cliffhanger!!!!!!! I will now go and nominate your ass because this story kicks serious butt...but only if you promise not to keep me waiting too long, cause I don't think my heart can take the suspense!!! Thanks for the update though.
Waiting impatiently....
Reviewer: Hekki (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
Well since you asked for a review I guess I can supply one. Bella should have had more faith in Jacob but I guess I'm glad they're able to talk about these things w/o having to do any damage control later. I'm looking forward to lauren finding out about jake and Bella though. I kinda hate her, even if I shouldn't.
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
OH....MY....GOSH! OMGOMGOMG!
I started out reading this chapter feeling depressed for Bella. Alone and Zombified again. Poor girl and them BAM!
Emmett? I SO LOVE that it's Emmett! I adore Emmett.
I can't WAIT for the next chapter. Golden eyes means it's a Cullen - maybe Rose is with him? Or maybe Alice? I think I'll guess Rose though, because I'm sure she wouldn't let Em go anywhere by himself, and she would definetly stare down Bella.
Ahhhh...........I'm SUPER excited right now.
Also, I would just like to let you know that I think you have made me fall in love with Charlie. I watched New Moon again the other day after having read your Charlie POV and I kept saying how much I love Charlie (and I think Billy Burke plays him so well). So thanks. You Rock!
Much Love!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Aaargh! I'm guessing that other pair of eyes is Alice's...
Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
ARRGHGHGHGHGHGHGHGH!
oh lord let it be alice! :)or esme. not stinkin edward. AMAZING chapter once again! man do you know how to leave us hanging!
Reviewer: lisonkat (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
That's a little cruel. Obviously perfect. But cruel too.
Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Retribution: Bella's POV
I think that the Embry chapter is hilarious. I loved it. He's adorable.
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
np fair!!!! lol
Reviewer: mazarin (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Reviewer: elsye (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
OMG!!!! You really did leave it there didn't you!!! AH!!!! It will probably be Alice or Edward. I am thinking Edward due to the fact that I know he has to come back some time and if you were going to bring Alice back it would have been her instead of Emmett...right...I hate cliff hangers!!!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
ok you did not just do that what didI do to deserve this no no no.
Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Disturbance: Jacob's POV
I am really enjoying this. I like the way you have written Jake. Despite how his body looks, he's still just a teenage boy who doesn't get girls yet! It's cute and sweet, and yes I'm totally jealous.
I am also enjoying the outtakes you have added. They are juicy bits of extra info!
The funniest part in this story that I have read so far is the scene where Jake and Paul are talking about imprinting. Paul is describing his feelings towards Rachel. I laughed out loud when I read it.
"Sounds like you're whipped," I laughed.
"Sounds like you're jealous," he countered.
"Whatever. I got Bells, and you got a crazy woman," I joked, taking my seat.
"Maybe I like crazy," he whispered as Mrs. Rivers began class.
Reviewer: lmorin (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
ok i love it!!!!! all of it! sorry im only now reviewing the story i wanted to read as much of it as possible, i started reading Breath Again three days ago. i just finished chapter 65. the twilight saga is a fantastic world, thank you for build on that world. Breath Again is the first story i read on here and i want more. i want more of your world. please tell me that i just didn't read the last chapter. a lot of fan fics i read online just stop, and the writer doesn't finish. PLEASE FINISH. and if it already is please let me know where to find it. im new to this site, ive only accessed it all of three times, the first time i found your world and got hooked and read the 65 chapters. i haven't done anything else on here yet. after i submit this ill look around and get a feel for the site. i would love to hear back from you, i dont know if i can send messages on here so my e-mail is lmorin87@yahoo.com. fantastic story
Reviewer: Covenmama (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
I have to say..I love this story, and truly hate having to wait so long for updates ! yes...i am impatient!!
;)
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