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Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Wow... what a hanger! Really enjoying your story and the POV's.
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Reviewer: gldnkltz (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
silly jake. when will you realize what a hot bundle of deliciousness you are? :)
Author's Response: lol! thank you!
Author's Response: lol! thank you!
Reviewer: Haniyah (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
You are such a meany, jake can't die! And i am wondering who the other cullen is that came along with alice, is it jasper or emmet?
As always, looking forward to an update!
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Argh, poor Jake... :) I'm so happy you updated! And don't worry, I don't need a cliffie to review! ;) Keep up the great job!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: cdettmann (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Awwww poor Jacob :( *pouts bottom lip and then sighs* I just want to go and give him a big cuddle..... I only started reading this 2 days ago..infact up until 2 days ago I had no idea fan fic existed! I knew it would be Alice with Emmett but it still didn't stop me from checking my computer every hour on the hour to see if you'd updated! Lol I may or may not be slightly obssessed with ur lil story :P
But since I've read my Twilight books a million times over and still need MORE this satisfied my reading needs...well that and I am hopelessly in love with Jacob (Shhhh don't tell my husband lol) Ok what the hell it's no secret! My husband is well aware but since he only exist in story books doesn't feel threatended haha!
Can't wait for the next installment..poor Jake please don't break his poor little heart, he hasn't even made it to 2nd base yet... :P hahaha
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: tru_light (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
ouch, what a threat! great story, the short chapter kind of kicks me into really feeling the abruptness of jakes feelings. keep it, cant wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: never fading scars (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
hello im sorry for not reviewing i will review a thousand times if it make bella choose jake <3<3<3<3 please please please please please please please
btw great chapter even if it is short
Author's Response: lol, thank you!
Reviewer: grneyedhulagrl (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Ahhh! You wouldn't do that to us, he hasn't even imprinted yet :p I have to agree though, even if I wasn't already scared of you, I would've made a review because of the cliffhanger. Nifty.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: yari09 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
DAMN THAT OTHER WRITER FOR GIVING U THAT EVIL IDEA! I DONT APPRECIATE THE DEATH THREATS TO MY JAKE, BUT IT HAS ENCOURAGED ME TO REVIEW SO U WIN!
POOR JAKE CANT CATCH A BREAK! THROW HIM A BONE! LOL
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you :)
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
:D am so glad Alice and Emmet are back :D just aint a story without them :) only better thing would be for Bella o fall in love with a love lost Emmmet :D see how my mind works?? LoL Update ASAP Please
Barb
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you :)
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
You kill off Jake and we're sending the Volturi after you.
Love the update. Can't wait to see what happens next, ma'am!
Author's Response: lol! Thank you :)
Reviewer: IHOWLATTHEMOONTOO (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
don't kill my Jacob. or no reviews ever again!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: ok, fine. damn. gotta come up with a new plan ;)
Reviewer: Elisabethe (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Short and sweet, but oh so sad.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: novelista26 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
omg please please please update soon!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Not dead. Just lazy. Please don't kill Jake!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Don't u dare kill JAKE off!.... I have loved your story since I started reading it. I enjoy the fact that its not just fluff... I like the action, the BELLA/JAKE moments, and even the cliffhangers.
I'm glad to know you have your story mapped out. just don't give up on it. its too good to be left unfinished
Author's Response: As if I could give up on this story! pshaw!
Thank you :)
Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
When will Jake learn to quit jumping to conclusions?
Author's Response: as soon as my readers do! lol!
Reviewer: desertmama2 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Poor Jake!!! I love Alice, but I want Bella to go see Jake and tell him she chooses him!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
i loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: CkKollman (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
HOLY CRAP! HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP! okay you definitely have my attention....whats next whats next??? oh my bah!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: seeraEJ (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
aaaah I love you. haha this was an awesome chapter...
however, I also hate you. the cliffhanger? why? why would you do this to me? bringing emmet back was brilliant. the way you left the cliffhanger was brilliant, the fact that there are more cullens in forks now (or at least i assume its a cullen considering the gold eyes) is brilliant & everything else is brilliant too.
the beginning of the chapter, in which bella is doing her usual inner monologue bit, was kind of boring for me, but thats simply because the whole concept annoys me, not at all because of your writing.
please, please, please keep it up
much, much love x (:
Reviewer: Hekki (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Oy Vey, I can't believe I read 65 chapters in two days. There's something wrong w/ me. And how could you end it there?!
I know you responded to my first review by saying you wanted to keep this realistic and take their relationship slow but this is a little painful. Plus Bella's kinda pathetic (but that's who she is as a character so I guess it's not your fault).
Are you going to tell us what Alice saw? And who is coming in? Edward? Alice? Victoria?
My first guess is edward but I thought you said he wasn't coming back until the sequel (which I can't imagine you ever writing b/c I'm beginning to doubt that you'll ever end this).
Reviewer: Lou Lou (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV
Oh my gosh, I think I need to take a cold shower.
Reviewer: Jeana (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Love this story!!! I sure hope Edward does not come back and ruin everything for Bella and Jacob!!!! Go Team Jacob :)
Reviewer: colleencullen (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
hurry! i need more :)
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