No! Jake can NOT die. You can't kill Jake!! That's worse than the world ending!!!!

Awesome chapter! My internet conked for a while, so I had three chapters to read and I loved all of them! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

What a cliffie! I hope everything will work out.
Jake shouldn't have jump to the conclusion so fast since he knows how Edward looks and that he isn't there. Still, Jake team, Jake team!
Btw, why the sudden chronological inconsistence? Bella's POV ends a lot sooner than Jacob's...

P.S.: I wanted to add "Update soon" but then I remembered that my average speed is one paragraph per two weeks. Still, I hope you write faster then me...

P.S.2: Hey, what if Jake and other wolfs forsake her now? And then Alice and Emmet would leave too. And Victoria would forget all about her and Bella would be all alone... and yeah, it would end with a suicide. Hm.
Yeah, that's what we all shall think till you update.

Author's Response:

When I said I was testing everyone, I meant it.  I simply chopped off the rest of the chapter to see what would happen.  So...yeah, I don't have a better explaination than that.

Wow, that was fantastic!

And about us lurkers-- some of us have possibly put way too many stories in our favorites and read 30 chapters all at once. 

Great story!

Author's Response:

I have that problem too :)

Don't kill Jake!  I know I have been slacking off.  I just felt like all my reviews were starting to sound the same (ie - great chapter!  awesome chapter!  I love jake!"  so I became a reader instead of a reader/reviewer.  I am sorry, reviews no matter how similar to the last review it may be are always great and show the author you appreciate their time and effort.

 

I appreciate your time and effort!  I still come to read this story :)

dude. i just started reading this and it is amazing. but seriously....wow...great cliff hanger there...you had me going when charlie asked if she expecting someone.....my heart was racing and still is. you should really think about publishing. just not this story...lol...your good...really really good.

Author's Response:

thank you so much.  to be honest, i'm not really interested anymore in writing professionally.  deadlines and agents and editors and publishers take all the fun out of it.  and i'm absolutely doing this because it's fun.  if i were 5 years old, this would be my version of recess :)

Shut the hell up!  That is the worst cliff hanger!

Author's Response:

And that is the best review! lol!

poor clueless boy

Author's Response:

lol! thank you!

I really hope you post more soon!!!  Your writting is wonderful and I look forward to see where this is headed!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

love the story so far! when will you update next?

Author's Response:

I'm not sure, but hopefully soon.  I usually just update whenever I manage to get a chapter finished.

I always review after the chapters from both points of view.  But I Have said this before and I will say it again.  I was/am team edward.  but this is the first story that I have read that makes me question if jacob wouldn't have been better for Bella.  I love your story, it is awesome.  I hope you are going to have bella explain and heal jacobs aching heart. 

angel 057

Author's Response:

Oh, there will definitely be a lot of explanations ahead.  We need Alice to explain what she saw (or didn't see), Emmett to explain how he came to be involved, Jake to explain why he's acting like an idiot....  yes, everyone has some explaining to do, don't they?  Thanks so much for reviewing!

I just found this story a few days ago and now that I am all caught up, I feel like I can review.  So, at first I was like, eh....a J/B story is not really what I wanted to read.  As I continued, I felt a real pull for Jacob.  Felt his struggles and his fears.  I liked how you made his feelings so real compared to the books.  i truely felt for Jacob.  I'm loving this and can't wait to see how it plays out.  Thanks for sharing!

Jen

Author's Response:

Ah, a new reader... I seem to have been discovered by quite a few of you recently & I'm loving it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Or Jake dies?

You cruel person! What if I have carpal tunnel in my hand and I can't type a review? Which I obviously don't because I'm typing this now but my point stands!

Btw I know you're joking, I'm just toying with you.

I really love how you have each chapter in Bella then Jacobs POV.

I'm so upset at the moment because It's like Jacob Black, TALK TO HER BEFORE JUMPING TO CONCLUSIONS! Thats what Jacobs been doing the entire story is continually jumping to conclusions again and again and creating a heap of confusion and pain that could have been prevented had he taken a few minutes out to get Bella's side of the story.

But then again I've found many boys are like that.

So yeah, as much as I've found Jacobs tendacy to jump to conclusions rather frustrating, where would a lot of this plot have gone if he didn't?

I've really REALLY enjoyed reading this excellently written story. You see, there's quite a lot of Edward never returns so Bella gets with Jacob stories out there but I think this is one of the best ones I've ever read! 

I take my hat of to you (well I would If I were wearing one)

Great Job!

Ava xx

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I read a lot of those other stories too when I first discovered Twific, and there were a couple that I really liked, but many just didn't quite come together for me.  I wanted Jacob to act like a real teenager...same with Bella...and I didn't think either of them should just go rushing into things.  I have to say I'm quite happy with the way it's turning out! Thanks so much for reviewing!

I haven't died...been busying with school :P

 

Anyhow, I'm waiting for Jake to imprint on someone else....grr...

Author's Response:

busy with school is close enough to death in my book! Or at least hell.  Thanks for reviewing! :)