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Reviewer: hammie09 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
keep righting ohh please iw aht jacob too pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!1im begging
Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Aw! Poor Bella! Oh well, she has Jacob! What more could she want?! But I'm glad she got a little closure, and she now resents Edward more! I just hope that when (if), you bring Edward back she'll remember that resentment! Now please hurry with the next chapter! Even though all it will be is a heartbroken Jake.. :(
Reviewer: colleencullen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
loveeeee it! keep em coming!
Reviewer: leebell (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
I think that it was nice for Bella to finally get some closer on the family that she had come to love. I do wonder what their reactions would have been if Bella had told them that she was dating Jacob. lol. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Hekki (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
She shouldn't have left out Jake but other than that I guess they had a good little catch up session. Now what's she gonna say to Jake?
Reviewer: Hekki (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Clever experiment. And good threat too though in the future make it bigger.
Ok, did the pack turn around b/c they thought bella was switching sides on them and now don't think she's worth it? Or b/c they lost victoria? And why's jake have such a gloom and doom out look on his and bella's relationship. It's a little annoying.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
i am bumbed she didn't say anything about victoria or the pack. I can see why but i still want edward to come to her rescue. they better visit again and maybe have jake spill the beans. still excellent chapter and i will be looking forward to more!
Reviewer: kochanski (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Poor Bella...that is all i kept thinking this entire chapter. They were her family and now Jacob is...I would have such mixed feelings right now.
Reviewer: lisonkat (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
I love your interpretation of Emmett. This chapter was healing to the readers, but I'm secretly glad they left so soon - it means we can see B & J's resolution soon...right?
Reviewer: vwbuggin1 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
I hope that dumb Edward comes to his senses. I can't ever decide who I want her to be with. When I first began this story, I wanted her to be with Jacob..but now I keep going back and forth. I assume this is a Team Jacob story through and through, but maybe not. Keep up the good work. I get very excited when you post a new chapter. (BTW, I am a farmville buddy on fb, Kerri Green:) Have a good week!
Reviewer: pricel (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Not a Team Jacob fan but just felt had to review last chapter so you know that your efforts are well done. I love how Emmett and Alice stop in to check up on Bella. It was a def surprise. Loved it. Cannot wait to read more.
Reviewer: pricel (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Excellent story that has never let me down. It started out strong and has never waivered. Well done. Well written and very thought out.
Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
THANK YOU! an other amazing chapter. we can't help it. your jacob is so worth going crazy over! :) love it! thanks again!
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Real life stuff isn't important right now, not when the Cullens make a pop-in! :L Loved this chapter, it was nice to have alittle Emmett. (:
Reviewer: kkayl (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Excellent chapter! I love that Emmett was worried enough about her to want to check on her. And I like that Bella got a little closure, knowing at least that they still care about her and that they miss her too. I also liked that she didn't say anything about the werewolves or Victoria, it was very loyal of her. Now hopefully Jacob isn't gonna be too difficult! :)
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
I"m sad for Bella now that they are gone again. I wonder if she will feel any better now. Can't believe she didn't spill the beans about Vick and the wolves. Couldn't they tell she was lying?
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
I just love Emmett! I’m glad Alice is going to keep in touch with Bella. But you need to up-date fast with Jacobs POV, I want to see how Bells gets back in his good graces!!!!!! I’m so impatient when I like a story as much as I like yours!
Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
you did a great job weaving emmett and alice and their feelings on what edward did to bella into this chapter. I'm glad bella got angry!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
I'm so glad you were guilted into updating quickly! It was worth it. Loved getting to spend time with Alice and Emmett. They were wonderful!
Reviewer: loveforwild (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Forget the housework, your talent is too good to be buried under such frivolous tasks!!
Reviewer: JB12 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
That was a good chapter. Nice touch to have Emmett involved with Alice’s nice little ‘visit’, I really did enjoy that.
I am worried about Jacob, he must be feeling so hurt, in addition that I missed the heck out of him in this chapter…..yup I just really did.
I am still debating with myself if I like or dislike it that Bella did not mentioned it at all that she is seeing Jacob to the Cullen’s….in any case, I am looking forward to your update again!
Love, JB12
Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Guilt! Guilt! haha. Kidding. I'm dying to know how Bella is going to track down Jake and explain this to him. He's so hot headed! But still hot.
Reviewer: never fading scars (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
love love love i promised you you would get it now if jake is an assi will understand but if he does that this where he keeps it over her head for ages then i may be a lil mad :)
love you more than ... my xmas lights (and they are cool)
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
I really should stop reading your stuff at work! I was near tears the whole time and with this being the week before Christmas, all the kids in my classes are bonkers anyway. Don't feel guilty because my computer lab is down and they're having free day. Anyway, fantastic! Loved how you worked this into the story line and so far into it. PLEASE tell me you aren't getting anywhere near ending this thing!!! It's my addiction!
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