gahhhh ok so the last couple updates I haven't read yet, I'm going on a 13 hour plane ride Saturday so I'm saving them! In fact I'm rereading the whole story, additions and all and I'm really excited! I can't wait to catch up on the the updates. PLEASE update more SOON :)

I read the authors notes and appreciate your clarification... unlike others I just tend to go with the flow of the story.... I don't question it...I love it!!! I figure everything is written the way it is for a reason...and all things will be revealed in due time...  Another awesome chapter... Much thanks to Emily for being the voice of reason for Jacob... Ugh Jacob just looses all his confidence when there is a Cullen involved... I am so excited he listened to Emily and went to see Bella..now I truly can't wait for the next update... soon I hope..:)

Want more jack bella time. Please!!!!!! They havent had any good smoochies in like forever. I love your story. You Rock  

I adore what you did with Emily!  Just needed to get that down before I go off on something else and forget! lol

The points you made about the scent were a great wakeup/smack up side the head.  Thanks. ;D  If it had been E, who is so hyperaware of everything about her, it probs would have been noticed sooner (and his perspective being so pervasive, I think that's why so many of us latched onto it).

Excellent chapter!  I'm loving this journey and am content to see it continue going on at the necessary pace her or in the sequel.  That said, I'm eager to see what you do with both tales!!

Ya just keep getting better, and it was awesomsauce to begin with!

Thanks for writing!!! 

OMG!  Still heartfail, but thank the good Lord for Emily! 

 

P.S. I read your A/N (the War and Peace-length one) and I have to agree, I would think that Charlie would have a more inquisitive outlook on that situation.  I mean, he doesn't hover, but still.

P.S.S. Why wasn't I invited to the "let's all ask the same question in our reviews" party? *pout*

Man, I loved the fact that your brought back the Cullens! :) Although, I am sad for Jacob. I kinda hope he imprints soon....unless in your story, Edward and Bella don't get back together....then I hope he doesn't. I'm thinking you've mentioned something about this before, but I can't remember, and 67 chapters is a lot to go back through to find the answer! Good chapter!

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Oh man!!  I have tears in my eyes from laughter.  "Take care of that branch"  HAHAHAHAHA!  LOVE it! 

 

XOXO

Ok I just discovered twilight fan fiction and your story and I just can not stop reading, it is 2:30am and I HAVE to get up with my kids in about 4 hours.  ACK  I am LOVING Breathe Again.

oh my god charlie, jake, and mike are all so stupid. im sorry but its the truth.

This was good. I can't wait till nezt chapter, but I can't believe Jake would give up so easily. He didn't wait to find out what was really up he just reacted to an assumption. I'm glad Bella has some closure now though.

i'm waiting impatiently for another chapter. and edward can just keep travelling, in your story anyway. bxj are just perfect here. plz don't change that.

Edward, Bella belongs with Edward!!!!!!!!!

                   Although your Jacob is a great guy.

i'm like half way through. i'm really enjoying this. your story is brilliant, witty, full of humour etc. i just love it. I hope thet in this bells and jake will be together, for better and for worse. of course jacob can't imprint because renesmee will newer be born. ok, i'm going back to reading.