lol. Fourteen years for the author's notes? Hmmmm...hehe. Sorry everyone gave you crap. If it helps, I didn't notice any of those things because your story is so engrossing. And IDK about Charlie. Maybe he suspected something was up with Edward being AWOL but he's a man of few words. He probably doesn't think it's important enough to mention, especially in front of his coping daughter. And, ugggh! Thank God for your "boy mind"! lol. I just love Jacob's POV. He's so boyish and adorable. *Squee* I loved the talk with Emily. I always thought she was so sweet. Can't wait for their talk! I miss them together!!! =[ 10/10 as always.

Author's Response:

Yep, fourteen years.  I don't think people realize just how truly awful my typing is!  It's funny you should mention being so engrossed in the story like that---I think that's why Charlie's non-reaction never struck me as strange when I first read New Moon.  I was too busy dying to see what would happen next!

well so you know i had none of the earlier questions but i have a lil nit pick if i remember rightly bells house/forks was in the "safe" zone so it was like no mans land. 

and the charlie thing in your question good point i never noticed hhmm i shall think that over and give you my thoughts in the next chapter.

Wonderful, I am so glad that Jacob isn't just going to go off w/o talking to Bella.  Emily is Awesome, thanks for updating and for the Authors notes. You make a very good point about Edward being in South America, that is curious Why would a Senior in High School be traveling and why wouldn't his family know where he is?? Bad Parenting?? Runaway?? OMG, Carlisle and Esme should be reported!! LOL

look iknow im not readin stephanie meyers story this is ur story. therefore i dont mind u 4gettin anything or not writing bout it yet. the story is meant 2 be changed around a lil thats the point 2 this website isnt it. 2 write what u want and how u want. its still a very good story and would not have u change anything. ur doin a wonderful job and i wanted u 2 know that...now maybe if u didnt have 2 write what look like another story in author notes the chapter could been longer...lol...ur poor fingers..lol..ty again cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!

look iknow im not readin stephanie meyers story this is ur story. therefore i dont mind u 4gettin anything or not writing bout it yet. its still a very good story and would not have u change anything. ur doin a wonderful job and i wanted u 2 know that...now maybe if u didnt have 2 write what look like another story in author notes the chapter could been longer...lol...ur poor fingers..lol..ty again cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Ok, so I went to see what I asked or said in my review last chpt. and evidently it didn't get posted.  First I would have never caught everything people are asking about in your authors note.  Things like that don't bother me.  I am so entralled in the story that I take it at face value and just take what you write and don't worry about the differences.  I guess because I like that you aren't spending time to pan that out and just getting to YOUR story.  Isn't that what fanfiction is all about anyway...what the fan wants to write. So here is one reader, evidently a nonobservant one, who is loving this story as always.  I am definitely not nonobservant to the fact that you rock however.  Thank you for all the fast updates. And if in Jake and Bella's reunion we could get some well needed loving it would be appreciated!!! I love the fact that Emment came with Alice and there wasn't the drama in the end like in New Moon.  I want this story to go on forever so that part helped.  So can't wait for what happens next!!

Hugs, and squeezes,

Stephanie

 

Wonderful chapter.  I can't wait for Bella and Jake to talk.  I just want happy endings for Jake.  Pretty please?  :o)

Oooo and I forgot to say I LOVE how you have made Emily play a big role in the story..she is exactly how I imagined her to be! Whats the saying- "Behind every good man is an even better woman???" lol That's Emily...and I think you have done an amazing job of creating her in this story. I love this story because it's 100% believable and the characters stay true to their form. You don't change their personalities just to fufill some fantasy in your head. *cough* unlike some sick *cough*sex obbsessed writers I've seen on here! Lol... Your story is like what could have happened if Stephanie Meyer wrote it which is why I think so many ppl love you. So keep it up..in my Team Jacob eyes you are a legand!

xoxo <3

Yay! Jakeys slowly coming to his senses!!!!!....Ooo the suspense is killing me *start hyperventilating*  I liked your Authors note :P Talk about karate chopping all those annoying readers into place! haha They'll be to scared to diss you again..haha.. As usual LOVE IT... I kinda wish I didnt discover this story till you finished so I could just read it start to finish because I'm running out of nails to bite back...

I'm so looking forward to the make up kiss!!!!!!!!! haha

poor jake love him but i still want bella to want edward. you know i was thinking what if they were about to fight and a girl walks by and he imprints stoping mid dispute. ha ha that would be funny.

love this story update soon please

I love Jake! Don't get me wrong, I love Edward in the Twilight Saga but for this story I really want Jake and Bella to be happy, Edward can piss off as far as i'm concerned!

You are a really talented writer and I adore this story!