So Jake and Bella, they're okay?  Or is something bad coming? (Besides Vicky)

I am loving your story. I think this chapter was great and very clearly showed the pain and confusion that Jacob was feeling. I can't wait until they talk it out. I would like to see some from Alice and Emmett's pov on their visit with Bella. I know it might break the flow of the story but I would like to read that also. I was a little sorry to hear that the Edward return was to be in a seperate story. I was kind of looking forward to seeing Edward in some pain after all of the suffering he caused.

I THINK YOU ARE MAKING JACOB GO CRAZY NOW. JUST PUT HIM OUT OF HIS MISERY ALREADY.

IS CHARLIE WONDERING WHAT IS GOING ON WITH JAKE OR WOULD HE RATHER NOT NOW. EDWARD WON'T COME BACK WILL HE?

I HOPE NOT

I have am still Team Jacob! Luv him xD

Christmas must've came early because we already have a chapter! Thank you :o) It was a good one too...just like all the other ones. And thank goodness Emily's around to talk some sense into Jake...he gets so depressed :(

Thanks for the quick update! I shall fertilize your farm for this!

Author's Response:

LOL! Now THAT's an awesome trade-off! 

Wow great story I found it today and couldent stop reading it. Can't wait for more but I'm still so team edward LOL poor jake though hope he imprints soon. Now that would be intresting hehe

Wow great story I found it today and couldent stop reading it. Can't wait for more but I'm still so team edward LOL poor jake though hope he imprints soon. Now that would be intresting hehe

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  You're not alone in the Team Edward thing either.  I'm honestly surprised by how many Team Edward people have given this story a chance.  I always assumed that they'd take one look at the banner and just keep scrolling.  Oddly enough, a  lot of them have said that they now hope that Jake and Bella are together in the end---but only in this story, lol! 

Holly hell! You crack me up! Now that I'm clear about who you are and how you handle the people who question the Godess author that you are........ Loved the chapter. I won't say "poor Jake" but really it kinda made me sick to my stomach, feeling his pain. If the POVs had been reversed I may have really vomitted wondering and worrying with him. That position is horrible-- "I know they love me but do they love me enough?" Heart wrenching. So as usual I bow to you..... carry on.

Author's Response:

LOL!  I just told another reader that I've been hiding a bit of my true personality for a while now, mostly just not wanting to scare off any readers before the fic really had a decent following.  But now the fic's doing well enough on its own, and a lot of my readers have gotten a glimpse of me on Twitter and Facebook.  I think most people have realized that I'm pretty sarcastic and blunt, and they either don't care or they just expect it of me ;)  I don't so much mind the questions.  They actually are a pretty good indicator of how involved people are with the story.  But there's only so many times I can respond to someone with, "No, I didn't forget that.  You'll see when you reader chaper #whatever," before I want to pull my hair out. 

wonderful, as always. how many more chapters are you going to post before you start the sequel? and what is the sequel going to be like? do you know what you are going to call it? i dont want to miss it when you start posting!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I honestly don't know how many more chapters there will be.  I know exactlly what has to happen before it ends, and I've got sections of it already written out, but every chapter just kind of makes itself, so I never know where exactly one will end and the other will begin until I ger there.  I'm not sure about the title to the sequel either.  I have a title in mind, but I have a tendency to change things at the last minute.  As for not missing it, you'll need to add me to your favorite authors and make sure that within your account preferences, you have the box checked to receive emailed updates.  That's really the only guaranteed way to know as soon as it's posted.

I'm so anxious for Jacob and Bella to talk! I really love them together, and Jacob is such a hot-headed teenager sometimes. You do a really great job getting inside his head in a way we didn't get unitl Breaking Dawn. Now get to writing the next parts please! =)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I think getting a look inside Jacob's mind was one of the few things I actually liked about Breaking Dawn, and when I started writing this from Bella's perspective, I couldn't help but delve into Jake's side of it to. 

Poor Jake...I loved his comparison to what a "normal" boyfriend could have done in this situation.  It really hit home for me the fact that what he's going through is so incredibly difficult.  I can't wait to see how his conversation with Bella goes...Jake needs answers.

Thank you so much for this story.  I have such a soft spot for Jake.  I am really looking forward to your sequel...I'm dying to know what will happen when Edward returns to Forks!  Jake will have to be ready to defend his "territory" with all he's got.  I admit that I am Team Edward, but I really cannot decide who I want Bella to end up with in this universe!  I can't wait to find out.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!