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Reviews For Breathe Again
Reviewer: kkayl (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

Thank you for a wonderful Christmas present! ;) As far as finding Breathe Again, it was the first fan fic I ever read and honestly, I saw the s**t ton of awards it had won :) and decided to give it a whirl. SO glad I did!! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  You should check out some of the awards sites---they usually have a list of past winners, and I've come across some great fics that way.

Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I just found your story when I was doing a search...I love it though! love your story!!! just when I think the chapter was perfect and completly awesome in bella's point of view, Jake starts in and takes my breath away!!! I could just eat him he is sooooo yummy!!! great story!! thanks for the quick update!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Jake's POV is my favorite to write.  He's got a simpler, less introspective view of things, and it's a nice change from Bella's thoughts.  I think if I limited the story to just Bella's POV, it would be more teen-girl angsty, and we'd lose a lot of what keeps it fun.  Plus, as you said, Jake is yummy ;)

Reviewer: beatingheartbaby (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

After searching for a Jacob/Bella story on that could capture my attention, I stumbled upon a writer's mentioning of awards or a story or something on some sight called "Twilighted". Best. Discovery. Ever. As soon as I joined I did an immediated search for Jacob/Bella and found Breathe Again. I love this story. I try to review each chapter but it doesn't always happen (sorry :( ) but I do read every chapter whether it's through Twilighted or You're an awesome writer and I love your story. I cannot wait for the next update! 

ps. While I can't wait to read more I just want you to know I am seriously hoping for this to turn out Jake/Bella in the end, simply because Edward and Bella got their happy ending in the saga and I really want to read a Team Jake happy ending. Doesn't mean I won't stop reading if I don't get my way though, you're just that good a writer! :P

Author's Response:

You know, I discovered Twilighted in much the same way.  I accidentally landed on FFn, and it never occured to me that there would be more sites out there.  I saw Twilighted mentioned on a profile or in an author's note, and I ended up Googling it to see what it was all about.  And then when I read that they only accepted fics of a certain quality, that every fic had to be validated & approved chapter by chapter...well, when I submitted mine, I honestly expected to get a rejection email! 
And I certainly appreciate your trying to review every chapter.  I fail at that a lot, too, and I still have a bunch of tabs open with chapters of friends' fics that I've read and haven't reviewed yet.  I think sometimes we just get so busy reading and enjoying stories that we forget to stop and say something---at least that's my excuse!

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:19 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I love it.

I started reading it when I came across it on the site.I was just browsing through the stories and when I read the summery I thought it sounded awesome so Idecided to read it.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: KatieC (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

Awesome update as usual!

I actually ended up reading this story because I needed something new to read and after the first chapter I was hooked. You're such an awesome writer. Keep up the great work!! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm already about halfway through the next chapter, believe it or not!  So it shouldn't be too long before it's up!

Reviewer: debussey (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I found it searching through Jacob fics on the site, and I LOVE it! You've officially made me Team Jacob! Give us a Christmas present and post more tomorrow! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: CaseyDoodle (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I did a search for twilight fanfiction, and was the first result.  Then I clicked on Top Tens, and Blazing Sun was listed as 10 Favorite Series, which lead me to Breathe Again.  =)  It really is an excellent story.  One of my top 2 favs.  The other is The Hardest Thing, where Embry imprints on Bella.  If you haven't read that one, it's just as great as yours.  =) 

Author's Response:

The Hardest Thing...that's by LJ, right?  I read a one-shot that she did for a contest I co-hosted, and it was amazing! 

Reviewer: superfly99 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I was looking for a good story set around New Moon and stumbled across this one in the New Moon category, I've been in lovr with it ever since.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: smil0514 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I just stumbled upon it...and I am glad I did!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Some of my favorite fics have been accidental finds!

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I love this story.  I started reading it when I was looking for something to read. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: MKT (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

My sister told me about it :). I love Jacob and the pack-it's one of the reasons that New Moon is my fav. book in the series. So, I love to read fic about Jacob and the pack-thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

I don't think I fully appreciated New Moon when I first read it.  For a long time, it was my second favorite, and I think that's because the first time around I was just anxious to see if Edward woud come back---and find out why he left in the first place.  But as I've now re-read the books several times, I'm seeing that New Moon is a stand out.  I think it has more emotional depth than any of the other books in the series.

Reviewer: shelbug99 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I love your story. I started reading it a couple days ago- all 69 chapters in one sitting after I found it on the site. Excellent work! I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I've got a lot of readers who've been following since I started posting, but when someone new comes along and reads the whole thing so quickly, I know I'm doing something right!

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I stumbled across ya way back in the beginning when I was trolling for Jake/Bella smut.  :D  Have loved this ever since (even thought it's terribly canon in the UST! lol)

Are the new readers from the Shimmer and Bellie noms?  A little birdy at my terminal may have typed out some nom forms.  ;D  Hope it goes well for ya!!

Love the JPOV like always.  Thanks for the hot digidy x-mas present!!!


Author's Response:

Yeah, there's definitely a huge UST factor to this fic! When I started writing it, I only planned on a few chapters.  I could see all the rest of it in my head, but I never intended to go any further than Jacob and Bella deciding to give a relationship a go.  I'd only recently discovered fanfiction and certainly never thought I'd be writing it, so it never occured to me that anyone would actually read it.  Of course, I'm obsessed with details, which is why most of the secondary characters are fleshed out and more active in this story than in the books, and that makes for an awfully long fic.  If I could manage to put the main characters in a bubble and forget about all the rest, we probably would have seen Edward come back, Victoria die, and the UST come to an end a long time ago, lol!

Reviewer: Utterly Absurd (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:45 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

Answer to your question in chapter notes:  I am a hard-core Jacob fan, and intentionally went looking for a well-written, purely Bella/Jacob story on Twilighted.  I had a good feeling about your story (I have no idea when I picked it up but it feels like almost a year ago now) and you have yet to disappoint!  I'm excited so many others recognize how great it is as well.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: ssuryan (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I found your fic by going to Browse, and Featured Stories.  Your fic is the first Bella/Jacob one I've read, and I'm loving it. Very anxious to see how your Bella handles the Edward return.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  For a long time, I didn't know what those little blue ribbons were for.  Then one day my validation beta emailed me and said she'd made this a featured story.  Lo and behold, I got a blue ribbon!

Reviewer: lmb (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I started reading this because you had an interesting summary and once I started reading... well you do a great job with the writing too!  You convey emotions well and really make me see how Jake and Bella  could grow together.  I can't wait to throw Edward into the mix.  The lack of imprinting makes me a bit nervous.

Author's Response:

I think the imprinting thing is making a LOT of people nervous, lol! 

Reviewer: miah wolfe (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

omg, my... person from school (not sure what to call her) told me about this site and all your awesome work. i agree with her.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

Great chapter!  Stumbled across!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I started reading this fic because I was searching for Jake and Bella fics. I found the Jake and Bella Chronicles, and this story. I like it, and if there will be a sequal, I will read it too.

Author's Response:

There will definitely be a sequel---and maybe a couple of extra one-shots.  Wow, when it finally ends I'll have a hard time letting go!

Reviewer: blondieja (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

Great chapter.  I read the summary while browsing through the Storiesw under the New Moon section of this site.  As I said before, I am hardcore E/B but in all honesty it was the depth of emotion that you showed in Jacob.  He was no longer the home wrecker in this story, he was real and so were his feelings.  I'm still E/B, but I love this story.  Thanks so much for sharing and have a Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: grneyedhulagrl (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I saw the banner for Breathe Again while looking at other New Moon stories. The banner caught my eye immediately. It was honestly the reason I signed up to this site and I can't believe it's turned out to be such a good story.

Reviewer: Much2shy142 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I stumbled upon this story while looking for J/B fic a awile ago.  Thanks for writing cause I love reading it.

Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

You did it again! Jake's perspective always completes the picture, yet each one is perfect all by itself. I hope this story never ends! Enjoy the tamales!

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

Hey! JUst got back from NY! Sorry i haven't reviewed, i can review like 8 times if you want!


I got into breathe again when i just started fanfic and my first chapter of my first story was up and i was so excited when it was on there, and right below it was breathe again... i saw the amount of reviews and thought My God, it must be amazing, and you did not disapoint. At first i was like, you can't... don't read a Jake fic, don't... but my curiosity got the better of me and here i am, hanging on every word

Reviewer: mizkim345 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

nice chapter,but i think that u should add more in the beginning on how bella got in the truck

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