I'm a new reader and not one for posting, but I really enjoyed Breathe Again and now can't wait for more.  I think the characters are really great and that you have captured SM's Bella and Jacob well while maintaining an original feeling to them (I'm not sure I'm explaining myself well).  Suffice to say I am really enjoying reading and haven't been able to get away from my computer for two days!  I'm almost glad I have to wait for the next post so I can resume some sort of life! 

I'm not sure why everyone refers to 'lemons' but I know I like it lol!  Can't wait to read the new stuff. Keep up the great work.

Awesome, Amazing,wonderful,great, fantastic,incredible,mavolous, delightful,incredible are words I could use to discribe Breathe Again!!!!!

Jake and Bella's chapters should be posted together. . . . Just so That It can come out faster. Out of all of the fanfictions I have read (which is A LOT) you have the most realistic Jacob. The one that acts most lie Stephanie Meyer's Jacob. Which coming from me is a high comploment seeing how I am the #1 Team Jacob Fan. I hope  you have Bella end up with Jacob at the end of all of your sequels.

I'm very exited for your sequels by the way. . . I wish I had a fastfoward button so that I can stay up even later and read them now. It's 4 in the morning and I'm so tireeeeed, but I wouldn't let myself fall asleep before I finished reading Breathe Again. Wonce again, FANTASTIC job....  

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This story was the first ever I reviewed. It continues to be my favorite. You are a fantastic author. Thank you. Keep posting - Your loyal fan -deep blue green

I waited until getting caught up before leaving feedback...which is my silent way of saying I was absolutely intrigued and impressed with the story.  Your writing ability is exceptional, and you have a way of keeping a reader's interest (even without cliffhangers)

As far as separate chapters, while I have enjoyed reading the individual points of view, I think that in writing the final chapter, it might diminish the importance if you separate them.

I'm loving this side of things, and as much as Edward is my obvious choice, in this story, I want Jake to find his happy ending.  I do find myself wishing Jake was with someone else, but I think that's only because I have already decided in my mind who he should end up with ;)

Can't wait to see where it goes from here, and I'm silently looking forward to the lemons. :)

just one quick question does she ever run into the Cullens again? oh and just so you know i am all Jacob i just wanted to know if she is ever going to see the rest of the Cullens.

1st...I prefer the chapters together. 

2nd...OMG I can't wait for Edward to return. If I'm remembering correctly, he would come back to check up on Bella to see if she was "happy". soooo

3rd... He'll be back...will see that she is "happy" and leave for ever!!! 

4th...I'm curious...will Edward just come back and spy on her to see how she is doing? or will he actually let her see him again? hmmmm can't wait to read this...AWESOME!!! still an Edward fan but Jake has captured my heart in this story and I'm starting to see that she can possibly be happy UNLESS....he imprints on someone else hmmmmm very possible indeed...

Love your work...HURRY UP PLEASE....in the meantime I will clean my house and do my laundry Oh and catch some ZZZZ's LOL 

You made a good point about favoriting and not reviewing and I'd like to do all in my power to prevent Mike from getting Bella. So here it is.

1. Cutos to you for not being one of those writers who has Bella end up with Jacob and a chapter in they're going at it. Kind of ruins the whole going slow, damaged goods scenerio, right?

2. Also you are VERY VERY good at keeping the characters IN CHARACTER. I hate how everyone seems to turn all of their characters into roués and whores. Not that sex isn't a good thing in a story but the best kind of sex is the in-character kind.

3. Is there any possible way to post a link or something to Pursuit in the chapter that it was related to? I had to open a new tab and actually search for it to find it to read.

Thanks, and I thoroughly enjoy this story.

 

AHHHHH!  Please, please, please write more!   I LOVE this story.  I stayed up til 2AM 2 nights in a row to read it.  You are a wonderful writer!

please post something new you are killing me

hope we get the next chapter soon!  I can't wait!  I also can't wait to read the sequel!  I almost wish I hadn't found this yet over the past weekend so that I wouldn't have had to wait for the end!  LOVE IT!

HAHAHA!  Getting rid of Jessica that way.... GENIUS!

OMG!

LOVE IT!  I especially love getting to know Sam!