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Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
okay soooo victoria is arm-less. that makes her much less scary.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
i do not WANT to go to the forums. they intimidate me a little. besides. i know your phone number. i can stalk you better that way.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Waiting: Jacob's POV
i could never leave you. you are my life now.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Waiting: Bella's POV
rachel's screeching bothers me. rachel bothers me a bit, if i'm being honest here.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV
at the bottom of the screen it says "who's your twilight guy?" and i laughed and said to the computer, "you need to ask?"
i'm a loser.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV
stupid stupid stupid bella.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
ysar, i really think that you need to know I love you...because when it comes down to it, that is really the only thing that matters.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
i think confrontation is the best of the companion pieces. just saying.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Questions: Jacob's POV
i just want to say that you should really love me a lot for what i'm doing here.
Author's Response: dude, i love you anyway.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
aha. mrs newton. AWKWARD! yeah.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Retribution: Jacob's POV
i love it when mean bitches get shot down.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Retribution: Bella's POV
you know, i've always wondered if you can use ?! together. I've wanted to, but I didn't know if it works. so if you did it, then i'm sure it's ok.
Author's Response: technically it is incorrect. but in creative writing it is generally accepted as a way of enhancing and illustrating outbursts within dialogue. now if only they would accept my aversion to capitalization.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
spouting shit about forgiveness. hmmm.
Author's Response: oops. is my hypocrisy showing?
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Mischief: Bella's POV
you know, i wonder if my son jake will ever have to deal with an edward and a bella. god help me if he does.
Author's Response: well, at least now you'll be prepared if he starts running a temperature and shaking. you should check his dna, see if there's any werewolf in there.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
i had been tempted by cocoa and muffins. my grammy's muffins. can't blame me.
Author's Response: now THAT is a review!
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Unease: Bella's POV
crap! i lost track of where i was. dammit.
Reviewer: twimom_la (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV
Jacob is just so darn cute to me. I love how he showed his vulnerability to Bella. Glad they talked and there wasn't a horribly angsty reunion.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
Well, I stumbled across the site kind of recently. I had never even known about fan fiction until recently. I found your story after seeing New Moon. I was always team Edward but the movie kind of soured me over Edward. I love you story. Jacob is so vulnerable and the relationship between them is so real. I do enjoy reading the two points of view but it does sometimes slow down the progress of the story. Keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Fanfiction was an accidental find for me as well, but some of the stories hooked me, and now I'm neck deep in it!
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Unease: Bella's POV
good god. i'm still not even halfawy.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV
why would i go on the forums when i can just ask you? gosh.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Rachel was giving me an evil look, as usual. I should introduce her to Lauren, I thought.
OOOO they could have a "We Hate Bella" group! I'd join that.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
Maybe I really could be good enough for her.
have you been reading rhi's fall for you again? gosh, angst and all.
Author's Response: i was thinking about just plagiarizing one of her chapters so i could be lazy and not write. bad idea?
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Curiosity: Bella's POV
seriously. here i am trying to get you to ninth most reviewed and this is taking me forever!! you should totally do something special for me.
Author's Response: now i just need like 800 more to get to 8th. i think i'm cool with 9th.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Disturbance: Jacob's POV
you've been on my favorites since the beginning. and now i'm lucky enough to be your favorite. funny how i just eked my way into your life.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Disturbance: Bella's POV
do you realize that i have 35 chapters left to review? my god you're a wordy hoor.
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