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Reviewer: Amy89454448 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
AH! I just found this yesterday and was up till 3am reading it. Now that I've actually caught up the suspence is killing me! ( and its not even a cliff hanger!)
As a devoted Edward-turned-Jacob fan I want Jacob and Bella to stay together but feel sorry for Edward cuz he still loves Bella...
You must be a good writer for me to be getting worked up over fictional-fictional characters (fictional-fictional because its a story about a story... if you get what i mean) Either that or its just way to late for me to think straight.
But I'm pretty sure its cuz your good :D
OK this review has gone to long and lost its point which is your stories awesome and I can't wait to read the next one :D
Author's Response: Okay, that's a LOT of reading! Thanks so much! I'm not looking forward to finishing the part of the story where Bella finally ends up with one of them because I actually love them both. But the show must go on, right?
Reviewer: rebirthfry25 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
OMG.....I've been reading almost none stop sinceI discovered this web site 2 days ago...and now I hit a stop!!!!!
This is agony!!!!!
Your talented and i'm dying over here! Please for the love of god don't keep my in suspence to long!
sigh...please continue! And Jake and Bella can hook up now.....really...it's time...she should just let him into her heart and cry out her scared emotions and go for the kill! I know there are people out there who agree! :)
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: ChinaDollz (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
OMG your such a tease...so mean to tease about imprinting for the next chap but wer the ones that have to sit here and wait!!
Author's Response: Yes, but you all make it so easy. All I have to do is mention tghe word imprint and everyone starts freaking out. I'm sure from where you sit it's agonizing, but from where I sit it's funny as hell ;)
Reviewer: rebirthfry25 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Normalcy: Bella's POV
You more than deserve top 10 status! geeze!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: lablab73 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
I think a nice imprint, not involving Bella... maybe involving Mike Newton????? would be great! Just do it quickly, pretty, pretty please. I can hardly wait to read the rest of the story!
Author's Response: That would be funny, but I don't know that it's possible. Leah's already seen Mike, and since she didn't imprint then, she can't now. Plus, he's probably a little scared of her. That leaves the male wolves...hmmmm....
Reviewer: lablab73 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I just stumbled on the summary... I had been thinking about doing a story starting from a similar point and I wanted to know what yours looked like. I'm really glad I found it.
Author's Response: I should warn you that this is a very common, almost cliche theme for the Jake/Bella part of the fandom. I'm pretty sure that everyone who devotes their stories to Jake has written something that covers what might have been if Alice hadn't seen Bella jump or Edward didn't go to Volterra or the Cullens just didn't come back. That's not to say you shouldn't write it, but it has been done A LOT. I know a lot of readers are getting into the all-human stories, though, and there certainly aren't enough of them that include Jake as a decent guy who's with Bella.
Reviewer: lablab73 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Nice twist... but I do feel sorry for Jacob
Reviewer: JB12 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
Well, not imprinting on Bella would be total bullshit, and since I hate the whole imprinting concept anyway, I would have to scream my head off...would that matter?:-) Jake deserves to make his own choices, he deserves the right to choose, he deserves free will, to choose all by himself who he is going to love. Damn I hate that imprinting shit. But if he 'has' too, it better be the one who he already loves.
I am excited to see what Jake will cook for Bella, way romantic and sexy, I bet is is something with Pasta, that always the easiest to do and it is good...
Charlie is awesome fo rletting Jake stay the night, he is great anyway, but I love how he actually really supports their relationship.
Jake in bed with an unbuttoned shirt **swoon** hell ya!!
I actually really like 'your' Bella, she opend her heard to Jake in a way I truly adore, he feelings are genuine and true...........I LOVE it!!!!!
Happy New Year !
Author's Response: LOL! I love your frankness!
Reviewer: peculiar1 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Ok i shall review~
i love the story i was so waiting for a fanfic the actually had Bella falling for Jacob and like i said before i never thought i would be saying this but Jacob is awesome now that you have showed us this side of the story and i think Bella should just keep him. I mean i love Edward but ........am SO confused now! i guess now am team Jakeward or something!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I think Team Jakeward is a great idea!
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
Awww...I love that Jake got Emily's advice about how to do something romantic for Bella. I can't wait to see how his cooking turns out!
And, I'm nervous about the imprinting! *bites nails nervously...waiting for next chapter to update*
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: lablab73 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
OK, not only do I LOVE the story, but I adore the comments. I'll try to be better about reviewing. I'm actually just so engrossed that I just keep hitting the next button.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: willow17pz (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
um...i'm not sure I'm ok with him imprinting on someone other then her...however I guess perfect dosn't exsist...but for the love of god can the poor girl get laid first?
Author's Response: Who are we talking about? Jake? Seth? Quil? Embry? Cause I don't believe I said which guy would be involved in the imprint... ;)
Reviewer: kaa (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
I think an imprint in the next chapter would be great, particularly if it involved neither Bella nor Jacob. I love the life you've breathed into characters like Embry, Quil, and others. I'd love to see Leah get some compensation for all her loyalty and heartache, but whatever you have planned, I'm sure it's going to be wonderful.
Thanks for another great chapter!
Oh, yeah, and please let Bella and Jacob wind up together (I'm just going to slap that plea on the end of everything I write).
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Normalcy: Bella's POV
im still here!@!! Vhaha i havent been reviewing latly cuz i have been reading on ma phone lol xoxo
Author's Response: Okay, I guess that's a valid excuse...kind of ;)
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
i didn't die :) but have been in my own personal hell ... am so far behind updates for all my stories :( Barb
Author's Response: personal hell sucks. thanks for popping back in!
Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
Feeling a little fiesty with that note at the end? I really loved this chapter but that comment has me extremely impatient for the next! I cant wait to read who it is!So excited!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: TwilightJoBro (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV
Your REALLY good at this! :D I looove this history ;D Continue, FAST ;D
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: KatieC (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
Awesome awesome!!! Loved the chapter, of course why wouldn't I love it!?
I'm very interested in an imprint can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Barbara Johnson (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Happy New Year! I trust you're spending it writing! I'm hanging in a state of withdrawals. Do I speak for others?
Author's Response: Yes, I believe you do. It's probably a good thing that no one knows my real name because I have the feeling they'd be beating my door down right about now! :)
Reviewer: juju5 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
The book is good but the only problem is, is that you went on too much with jake and bella and their love so that it will kill jacob if edward comes back, and will make bella extremely confused. And can you write a story about bella and jacob in the future as if edward never came back and she forgot about him. It seems pretty interesting to know what would happen if he never came back. If they would live happily-ever-after.
Otherwise your doing a great job with the story i think i might write one myself
Author's Response: Well, it sounds like the problem is with Stephenie Meyer then. If she hadn't written New Moon so that Edward had wanted to come back on his own, I wouldn't have to include that in my story. Of course, then the story would be pretty boring...Jake & Bella fall in love...the end. Nope, that wouldn't be fun for me at all.
As for writing another story in which Edward never comes back and Bella just forgets about him? I'd have to say no to that. I don't think that would be interesting or challenging enough for me, and I'm not really interested in writing what is essentially another version of this story. Edward creates the perfect conflict and drama for the story, and without that conflict, I don't see how people would remain invested in the outcome.
Reviewer: justcurious (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I am loving this story. hoping you change the rating and bella and jake get it on!
Author's Response: No can do. I've got some younger readers who want to be able to finish it without having to dodge flying lemons.
Reviewer: Zohinette (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
Happy new year for you and us!
Great chapter as usual!
(I do agree with an imprint wich involve neither Bella nor Jake...)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
No typos at all! You are the greatest! Loved it, too. I always do and it never seems to say what I mean...anyway, I will totally stop reading if Jake imprints on anybody else. Somebody else can imprint but not him!
Author's Response: Congratulations! You are the 100th person to threaten to stop reading. Sorry, I have no prize for you.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
I love when you write in Jake's POV, you just get him!!!! I can't wait for next chapter, please update soon :)
I was too busy enjoying your story to worry about typos. I don't think anyone else will either.
As always, thank you so much for sharing your gift, Happy 2010!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: BeHowlin (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
Sweetness galore again. I love how Jake wants to cook for her, but I also love the fact that, though Emily helps, she's going to let him do it himself. Power to the emancipated man!
Way to leave a little cliffie as well.... an imprint...that doesn't involve Bella? I'm on the edge of my seat again!
Happy new year!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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