nice chappie

Way to get rid of Jessica!!  I salute you. I wondered how that was going to work.

And the Claire moment was SUPER.  See, I want to be in QUIL's head for that one.  *grin* Don't s'pose you've got one of your famous side-shots in mind for that, hm? *looks hopeful*

Okay, back up to the top.  Charlie is really trying hard, here, and I gotta hand it to him. The little smile was a perfect touch.

And no. Shopping is like hardly ever fun. The idea of having to go with Leah and Rachel would make ME suddenly come down with some horrible allergy or sprained ankle or something... :D

:)

OK, so I figured it out.  when jacob and Bella are together, that's when the dialogue and the action is the same in the chappies.  When they aren't together, the chappies are different.

Looks like I'll have to read more than half now.  And, i've got so many more to go...

On the bright side, you are writing a really good fic that i enjoy reading.  I guess I'll just have to read more....

but, i really need to go to sleep....

 

Author's Response:

LOL! Me, too! It's 3:45 am here.  As for the POVs, yeah, there are differences once you get past the fist several chapters.  There will also be little differences when they are together but step apart for just a few minutes.  On the bright side, all my chapters are short (which is why there are a million of them), so even at 70+ chapters, the actual reading time is a lot less than some other fics.

jake is in deep trouble.

so, I read "gossip"

interesting to hear the lunch room gossip

you totally suck no shopping blarg this is a jake/bella story. Where is the love dude? they have been dating for like a million years they cant just hop into bed together there has to be a progression. Kissing, tuching, grinding, oral, sex. sorry it this is to exsplicit but dude somone had to tell you. I love your story dont stop writing. Sorry i know i suck ta

Author's Response:

lol! now how many times have i told everyone not to jump to conclusions?  shopping...yes, there will be shopping.  is it what you're envisioning?  i doubt it.  and while it may seem like a million years, it's really only been about a month.  bella intends to become a nun, so even though it hasn't been explained yet, she can never ever ever have sex.  and jake's going to imprint on charlie anyway, so what's the point, really?  okay, fine.  the truth is that there has been kissing and some very light grinding, but any more progression simply isn't going to happen here.  i've got some rather young readers as well as several who don't want explicit details, so we're not going anywhere near an NC-17 rating or even an R-rated fade to black before the sequel.

sweet.

She was honest in this chappie about the nightmares, and she let it slip "i don't hear him anymore." 

Nice

i knew it was quil and claire....great thinking on Embry's part....lcharlie's a sweetheart...felt sad for Sue...loved it, it's a great birthday present for me, so thanks...

Emily reminds me of Rose.  I like her!

Yeah, why does Bella like to dress like a man, anyway?

Thought i'd mix it up a bit and not even read Bella's POV.  Just gonna skip ahead to Jacob's POV.

 

 

Author's Response:

lol! that cracked me up. 

Nice chapter.