Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
Embry is a genius. I'm sure that kid isn't even his.
I can't imagine a shopping trip I'd rather avoid more than one with Rachel and Leah. Fun isn't the word I'd use to describe it.
I love Seth, he's so cute. I wish I could pinch his face.
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
Loved the imprint! Looking forward to the girl-time shopping, haha! (:
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
I always found Quil's imprinting very wierd in the book. You did an excellent job of discribing it as a paart of normal activities. The only thing with the format of your story is that now I have a long wait for the story to continue because the next chapter is the same thing but from Jacob's POV. I really am enjoying your story aside from that aspect of it. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
HEHE - that was a fun chapter to read. I love little Claire Bear.
Reviewer: Baby_twi (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
Amazing, amazing, amazing. I couldn't stop laughing. First there was Charlie and Jake in the morning, then Bella and Jake found Embry on the side of the road because he was running from Jessica. Then there's Sue playing dumb, Embry with his lies and Jake with his 'shit' bacause we all know what just went down. I just love the way you took that pushed that in this chapter. You're so gifted!!!!
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
you better fucking be thankful for all the reviews. it took me FOREVER to review every single chapter to get you up to 9th most reviewed. I think I deserve something special.
Reviewer: cdettmann (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
Good Riddens Jessica! haha..... I like how sneaky Jake is being, making Bella go shopping has to be a diversion! Oh and nice imprint..another one bites the dust!
My favourite part of the chapter was the start where Jake pulls Bella back into to bed, something so simple but so Jake! *sigh* He's so cute he makes my heart melt :) lol
Can't wait till he cook Bella dinner!!!!!!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:34 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
nice imprint.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:29 AM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
Yah. So, I'm all caught up.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:29 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
oh yeah... shopping. oodles of fun. -_-
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV
:)
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
they left her again.
Reviewer: Kiwi-as-bro (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:10 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
Lol i can't believe none of us obsessive twilight fans saw that imprint coming.
I'm thinking this shopping trip is a diversion set up by jacob... Maybe... maybe not.
I was reading some reviews and your replys. In one reply you said something like for reasons yet to be explained bellas gonna become a nun and jacobs gonna imprint on charlie. I laughed.. You funny as. That would probably be one of the biggest twists in fanfic history... not to mention some awesome cliff hangers haha
Cant wait till the next one :D
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Well, at least you can say this for jess. She has quite the imagination.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:57 AM · On: Confessions: Jacob's POV
charlie is one cool dad
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Panic: Jacob's POV
well done.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:48 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
he knew?????????
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV
tease much?
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
jessica actually stalked over to the rz?
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Quiet: Jacob's POV
I like how you used the word "imprint" as a noun.
As in "you are an imprint"
great job there
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
I am smiling picturing vicki with one arm.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Waiting: Bella's POV
did one of the wolves die?
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV
fires? are the vamps burning?
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
college in forks? sounds like a great idea
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:11 AM · On: Questions: Jacob's POV
good for mrs. newton to alert charlie and for charlie to confront jake about it
well written
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