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Reviews For Breathe Again
Reviewer: Cyablo (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

Love this fic just read right through till now it might actually be turning me to team jake *shock horror*

I like reading fics that have a good few chapters already up before I start reading,i`m so impatient waiting for chapters coming up lol, liked your summary and thought i`d take a chance on a jake fic

Some fics can have a great summary but the way the author writes doesnt catch your attention but yours did and here I am and I cant wait for the sequel either :D



Author's Response:

Thank you!  

Reviewer: blushmuch (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV

jacob needs to stay with bella! they were meant to be from new moon i think, thought it wouldnt have been a very good story if bella just went for jacob in the real books but with this you can make fantasies come true! jacob needs a chance

Reviewer: Beca (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Hahaha love it!! Keeping with sm's plot but making it better .. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Cynali (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

HAHAHA! That was great! I so loved the way he got rid of Jessica! And, as promised, the iprint did happen! LOVED IT! Keep then coming!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: WhiteLily23 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:33 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

Oh!  And to answer you (again) -I personally think Edward is a prick.  He is also an idiot.  A controlling idiot prick.  I don't really like him.  SO, if you screwed him over the second story, I wouldn't be upset in the least.  I always thought Bella should have put up a bit more of a fight when he glided back into her world.  Kinda dumb if you ask me.

Reviewer: willow17pz (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

you really are evil huh?  placing worryingthe hell out of us all on that list! :)  Glad to see it was Quil and had nothing to do with Jake and Bella.  Amazing as always, and whil I know the purpose of girls day I am very interested to see what its like to go shopping with Leah for the afternoon...something tells me she'd kick my ass!

Author's Response:

Yes, I believe evil has been used to describe me quite a few times ;)

Reviewer: WhiteLily23 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Okay, so I just read the entire before reveiwing...for a couple reasons.  One, it seemed weird to reveiw when there were still so many chapters left to read.  Two, I couldn't make myself take the TIME to reveiw when all I wanted to do was read more.  And three...I don't remember.  But there was a third.

You are an AMAZING writer!  I laughed, I cried, I snickered, I giggled, I wonderful.  I noticed something really are NOT a fan of Jessica are you?  I have read other stories with Jessica in them, and I do not believe that anyone has portrayed quite the same hatred for her that you do :)  Well done.  I enjoy her.

I will be stalkerishly checking this story, hoping for more :D  To answer you (a couple chapters ago)  I stumbled upon this, and I liked the comment you made in the summary.  So I gave it a shot.  Greatest idea of my life.

Author's Response:

Actually, I like Jessica a lot.  I just think she's got a lot to offer in the comedic relief department, and I figured someone had to show Embry a hard time ;)

Reviewer: ShandyAnn (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV

I am very much Team Edward. I think in the books (and most fanfics) that he and Bella just "belong" together. even if hes a giant prick.

HOWEVER Breathe Again turned my sky orange and i now see the reason behind Team Jacob. even through i know how much its gonna hurt edward, i want Bella to end up with Jake.  maybe it would be better if Edward just didnt exist (in the fic).

Reviewer: Much2shy142 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Great chapter! I look foraward to Jacob's POV throught the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: kazi (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

Dear Ysar,

I gotta tell you I'm addicted to Breathe Again.

I've been up almost all night reading this, running up and downstairs between kitchen and my computer to read maybe one chapter then come running down checking on my stove. I even thinking about getting a wi-fi so I can bring my laptop with me everywhere in the house.

What a shame for a woman my age!!!

This is not gonna be an actual review of this story though.

I just wanna tell you about how I found this site.

Well, I stumbled on this site after I finished Eclipse, and I didn't want to read Breaking Dawn simply because I'm a dog lover :-)

All jokes aside, I guess it's that I just can't get over the fact that a Vamp can have baby and all. So I decide to google Jake and Bella, and WHAM!!! here I am reading Breathe Again.

Thanks again, Ysar, for this heavily addictive story. It really gives me peace of mind. I can go to bed with a smile and a very sweet dream each night instead of feeling bad for Jake like when I finished Eclipse.


Reviewer: dropheart (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Great chapter! Can't wait to read about Bella's shopping experience with Rachel and Leah.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: peculiar1 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:30 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

cool chapter! bring on some more!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Siobhan Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV

Well I've already pretty much answered this in my previous review but I'll go ahead and answer: I have always been and always will be TEAM matter how likeable the Jacob might be (and yours is pretty likeable) in my mind & heart Edward is always the one Bella should be with.  How's that? lol :)

Reviewer: Siobhan Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV

Okay, okay...I've been reading for a while now and haven't reviewed yet so since you're asking, I'll oblige lol  I'm liking the story...but I'll admit I'm waiting patiently (or not so patiently, depending on how you look at it) for Edward to come back.  I'm not a big fan of Jacob, the only reason I like him at all is because of Taylor Lautner's portrayal of him.  I couldn't stand him in the books.  Why am I reading this story you might ask?  Because I like reading the what ifs...and after reading a bunch of fanfiction, I've gotten to where I don't mind Jacob & Bella long as Edward comes back at some point or another lol  That being said, your story is very well written and I also love the one shots you write to go along with the chapters.  I'm all about different POV's...they explain a lot.  It would be great if more authors did them but that's just wishful thinking on my part.  Anyway, I'm going back to reading the story now...thanks again for the great writing :)

Reviewer: caimera (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

What a fantastistic story.  I have not stopped reading all night!  Please update soon! 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mrsbyrne03 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

I just wanted to say I LOVE your story!!! :)

Over the past few days I've read it from the beginning & I absolutely adore everything about it! AND that's saying alot since I'm very Team Edward :P But, this side is always something that's interesting to read & I've never read one that was actually pulled off well until yours! You've done an amazing job & this is definitely one of my top 5 favorite fan fics! :) KEEP IT UP!!! ♥♥♥

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:29 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Lmao! I wonder how embry got claire to call him daddy! lmao! Oh i loved this chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Quil imprints, that was awesome I love Jakes reaction. Perfect. Bella shopping with the bitchy girls that will be scary I am looking forward to it.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Oh my, I didn't even think it was going to be Quil and Claire (I guess I thought they already had, but your story hasn't progressed that far) 

Embry, that was the perfect way to get rid of Jessica, how funny! 

Poor Bella, having to do the girls shopping thing with Rachel and Leah.  That must be Jacobs way of getting Bella out of the way so he can suprise her! 

Can't wait for Jacobs POV (I like his best)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  And yes, you're right---Jacob has enlisted Leah & Rachel to distract Bella so he can go play chef.

Reviewer: jacks5jl (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV

You're stupid too HAHAHAHA

Reviewer: superfly99 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

I love this story, can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Another great chapter. Loved Jessica and Embry! Embry is too funny. Can't wait for the Bella, Leah, Rachel shopping expedition. I'm with Bella on that one. Yeah, sounds like tons of fun.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

You scare us all with the possibility of imprinting, but this was great. Nothing frightening. :)


Keep up the awesome writing for us addicts!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

Looks good so far.  This will take me a while to read.  I have a long ways to go to get caught up. 

Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

I really like the way this story is going. It keeps me entertained. :)

Author's Response:

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