This is really well written :)

I am actually intrigued by the shopping trip and upcoming surprise date... will Bella get lucky?  Will Rachael be nice?  staying tuned for the next update

 

 

Hahahahaha.  "Oh, shit."  Best last line ever. :P  Embry's kind of a jerk.  But I love it. :)

Hey Ysar,

 

I am glad to know that I am not the only male who writes and reads fanfiction. Besides the cliche summare (which you should change inmy opinion) the story was amazing. One of the better B/J fics that I have reads and I have read ALOT!!!!. One note thought. The way you write Jacob always makes him seem so confident, so self-assured. He is a teenager. Shouldn't he be slef-conscience to the least bit imature? Anyway. Besides that the story is amazing. I only dicided to review now because - well becuase I don't know why. I read the the fic from the begining and oved how it has grown. You are one of my favorite J/B fanfic writers.

 

Gamer191

Author's Response:

I don't think Jake would be self-conscious at all.  That's not really how he was portrayed in the movies or the books, and I can't really see him that way.  I would think that the "growth spurt" would have made him a little cocky.  Immature?  Sure, a little.  But he's also taking on a hell of a responsibility in being a protector, and while his immaturity was portrayed in the books, primarily in his attempts to win Bella away from Edward, that's not really an issue right now in the story.  With the way his life is at the moment, there's not really an opportunity for him to be a typical teenager. 

As for the summary, I have to say I'm surprised by your comment.  I edited it quite a while ago, and currently the summary sort of pokes fun at the cliche, and that's actually attracted some new readers.  Are you referring to the summary as it reads now? Or what it used to say?

Ewwww noooo, dont make her marry Mike Newton! I want her to marry jake & live happily ever after - Edward should just stay dissapeared! Although ive only just started reading these & I think you've already finished so what I say now isnt gnna make much difference lol

I was going through the stories on here and came across this one. Did'nt think much of it from the summary, but hey, anything Twilight related must be good. First chapter, I was hooked. :D

I added this story a few weeks ago but I just started readin it today and I couldn't stop which actually means I was reading in my college classes on my phone! This story is the best fanfic I've read so far and believe me I've read my fair share! You have a wonderful talent and the way u write is so captivating it rivals stehanie meyer herself!Please update soon I want to read the sequel sooooooo badly!

Oh....you tricky, tricky lady!!!  LOL Quil!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Can't wait for Jake's dinner!  And I can't wait to see Rachel do girl time with Bella...that oughta be interesting!

You sneaky sneak...writing about an imprint we already knew about.  Clever!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

haha! I wasn't worried about jake at all...cute chapter! loved it ofcourse!!! thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I know you are probably sick of hearing this but I having Edward withdrawal symptoms. How long until the sequel?

Author's Response:

Well, here's what I posted in the end notes a couple of chapters back. 

ABOUT THE SEQUEL: Since so many of you have asked…
*I’m not sure what the name will be---I keep changing my mind.
*I don’t know how many more chapters there will be of Breathe Again. I only know what still has to happen before the end, and it’s not much.
*There’s only one sure way to know when I post the sequel: add me to your favorite authors and make sure your account preferences are set to send you a notifications. And if you don’t want to do that, then bookmark my profile and keep checking it.

Basically, I don't know when the sequel will launch any more than I know when the next chapter will be finished.  I just write & post whenever I can.

Hello Ysar! I am so happy I came across your story. I have been Team Edward since the day I picked up Twilight. But now, I feel like I have crossed the loyalty line and it is hard considering turning back to my "roots". If that makes any sense to you. No matter how much Edward loves Bella, I feel Jacobs complete and uter love and patience for her. Jacob does not have to hold back anything when he is around her, well maybe his teen hormones, but that is the major thing that he has to fight back and Bella has been able to feel what it is to truly be loved, on ALL levels. If I was ever to come across heart ache like Bella has, which I hope never happens, I would hope for my Jacob to come and pick up the pieces. Thank YOU!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

You're story was number one when I went looking.  I like the idea of no sex in this section.  I don't think Bella and Jake would have sex as fast as many others think they would, her heart is too broken.  But that is why there are so many different stories out there.