I found it on the site while looking for true-to-the-characters stuff.  I'm not a big fan of the AH/AU stuff because really, I'm into the fanfic stuff because I like the original characters.  I'm definately satisfied with this story and can't wait for the sequel!

Ahhh!  So addicting!

I looked under favourites, or most reviewed , cant remember which, then i was looking for (canon?) - as close to the books as possible - except that Jake got a guernsey at Bells, and then your intro about this not being a story where bella just forgets about edward in two tics and jumps into bed with jake - and not so much twi-porn -CLINCHED IT FOR ME - (your itro that is) AND THEN I STARTED READING AND SAW you HAD TALENT - WITHIN A FEW SHORT PARAGRAPHS  I LIKED YOUR STYLE - AND HAVE BEEN HOOKED SINCE AND LOGGED YOU AS A FAVE AUTHOR BECAUSE YOU WRITING IS GOING TO B E GREAT ACCORDING TO ME

No no no - I just love your writing - have only just got into fanfic and previous authors had lots of - wot do you call it - lemons - porn.  YOurs is much better with just enough lust to keep me interested.  Hope you are doing your own stuff - would definitely pay for this. mum, 47  of 2 girls , obsessed with Rob but totallly into your Jake!!!

good for him he waied so long and loved her so long and watched her fall to pieces and pick them up

i've been reading this story for quite a while. think i was looking for bella/jake and found it on a search of twilighted...i have made ppl read though lol

omg i LOVE it. embry is SO funny

Dear Ysar,

Just Drummer 110 replying to your anwsere to my review (didn't know how else to contact you). What I meant is that I always thought that in you fic (no offense intended) Jacob always seemed so sure that Bella would never leave him. He occasionally seems to forget that she was in love with Edward first and didn't spare him a glance until then. What I don't understand is how he could do that? And the immaturity comment I agree with entirely but it is how he thinks of his realtionship with Bella that I am having trouble with. Whatever thought. Still love the fic.

 

A couple of questions thought. What made you decide to write each chapter from both Bella and Jacob's POV? How do you distinguish their different personalities in you writting? And the final question, will you be writing in Edward's POV view when he reuturns and he will becuase what J/B fic would be complete without angst. Love the story and keep it up.

Ahaha! I loved the ending. :D

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY! I think later on in the story, you should make Edward turn up, and have Bella be mad at him and reject him for Jacob! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!

JACOB!!!!  she has to end up with jacob

LOVE IT!!

no,no, no... i like it WITHOUT edawrd ...lol