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Reviews For Breathe Again
Reviewer: JacesGirl (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 10:58 AM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

Personally I think you should just post it together. I am so excited for the sequel!

Reviewer: JacesGirl (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2013 08:29 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV

Hey so I have never reviewed before, but since you asked nicely. ;) I really love this story. I have read several fanfics about Jacob and Bella, and I have to say that is one is probably my favorite. I love how you have developed the characters, especially how you have brought Bella out of her shell a bit. I kind of don't want Edward to come back. I like how perfect Jacob and Bella are for eachother in this fic. Thank you for writing this. I love it.

Reviewer: kkunselman (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 11:46 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

Oh no!  I guess I should check and see when a story has had a chapter submitted last...I've obsessively read this story only to find it's not finished and hasn't been updated in years.  Why???  It's such a good story!  I'm finding myself forgetting that's it's not actually part of Twilight.

Reviewer: ShanaEich (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 10:42 AM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

I think it should be one. I can't wait to see what happens!!! 

Reviewer: kel_cullenn (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2013 05:55 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

I love love love this story! why did you stop writing? you are brilliant! I couldn't stop reading! What happened to the sequel? 

Reviewer: Veronica Venus (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2013 02:33 PM · On: Persistence: Bella's POV

So far, I'm really enjoying this. But I'm not sure I like how tearful Bella is all the time...she's always crying or taking a fit, Jake deserves better than that! :)

Reviewer: candledancer (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 02:42 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

Finish please!!!! Been hanging out there for over a year and the suspense is getting to be too much!

Reviewer: cymoril (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 09:09 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

I would love to see the last chapter ... please!!   finish it!!!

Reviewer: Selena Bellissante (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2013 03:50 AM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

I really love your story, I wish that you'd finish it :)

Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2012 02:47 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

You haven't updated this story in over two years.  Will you be continuing it?  I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: lizkrohn (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2012 12:21 AM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

Please post the chapters together

Reviewer: grftpl17 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 04:07 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

I loved this story, It held my attention the whole time

Reviewer: MeaganPierce (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 07:56 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

I would love to see the last chapter soon. I need to know if edward ruins the date or if everything end up fine.

Reviewer: Nerdle (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

Amazing. Keep them coming I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Nerdle (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

Amazing. Keep them coming I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Wpear (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2012 10:23 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

I love this story! Please keep going I'm addicted.

Reviewer: O2Shea (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I decided to check out series on this site and I liked the tongue in cheek way yours was advertised -- very dry sense of humor. My favorite. Sooo... I figured you were worth reading. You are.

Reviewer: O2Shea (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 08:38 AM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV

Solidly enjoying the story. Really like the side views in the one shots -- great idea. You are one of the best fan fic writers I have read. Looking forward to reading more of yours. Saw that several of your stories are not variations on canon but take the characters completely out of their original realm. That isn't really my thing... but I'm sure that they are also well written so I expect I'll give them a read also. KEEP WRITING!!! You are too good to stop and should consider a career in that direction.

Reviewer: tryates (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2012 11:12 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

I just finsihed all of the chapters. This part was wonderfuly written and I loved wasting my time after work reading the beautiful story you have created. 

Reviewer: Llamas123 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 10:57 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV

What is the sequel called and when will it come out???

Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2012 09:22 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

And here I was thinking that I only read stories that are complete! I have to wait now - crap!!!

But I gotta say, having read this series all in about the last week has been bordering on the obsessive. ;)

Pls post Bella's and Jake's chapters together (or if I'm honest, just Jake's, skip Bella's)

Reviewer: legnalive (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 09:35 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

Please write soon! I'm dying to read the next chapter. I guess writing it together would be great. I'm sure that you get this all the time, but I'm still going to say it , you are amazing! I not only enjoy the story line, but I love the humor and the natural development! I was glad to see that Bella didn't regress to her miserable self when the Cullen's came and most of all seeing how happy she is making Jake and vs is really what would have picture! Truly I love your writing! 

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 04:08 PM · On: Diversion: Jacob's POV

I have been reading this streight forthree days now and do no want to stop...post it all together!!!! PLEASE  I love this story and can not weitherto see the end.

xanath

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 11:56 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

just stumbled onto it!  Am I glad I did.

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 05:58 AM · On: Questions: Bella's POV

What I neverunderstood was how Sam and Emily could afford all the food that the pack ate.  It seemed like in all the tories that they were always feeding the pack A LOT of food.  I have gueesd that the elders somehow gave them food or money to buy food knowing that the boys needed it to phase.  A silly thing to consider butI have 4 grandsons that someone might think are wolves from the amount of food that they eat.  HA HA HA!

xanath

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