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Reviews For DreamCatcher
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2015 08:15 PM · On: Dreamcatcher

Wowzers! So unexpected! I loved it! Thank you! 

Chyla

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2015 03:03 AM · On: Dreamcatcher

It's been a while since I've been back to this site, and so I just found your story.  It's extremely well-written, with such a perfect twist at the end.  Subconsciously I suspected that something was wrong, but I still imagined that he would just meet her on campus and they would continue their relationship in the human world (just as Bella was probably thinking). Brilliant!

(I can hear Vincent Price laughing now)

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2015 03:23 PM · On: Dreamcatcher

I LOVE the twist at the end! :)



Author's Response:

Yay!  So glad you enjoyed my Dreamcatcher one-shot!  Thanks for leaving a review.

Reviewer: jimmyd (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2015 04:57 AM · On: Dreamcatcher

Bravo! Great Job on how Edward can be both good and evil. Poor Bella did not know what it her at the end. She states that in dreams "people do what they are afraid of doing" and that you can control your dreams. It just shows how cleverly Edward turns the tables on her here. She went from being the master of her dremas to being the prisoner of sombody elses.

I have two favrite lines in the story. The first: THis is your dream. I'm just following the script." shows Bella's control bit and it shows to me at least, Edwards sense of humor at the situation he finds himself in. The second one "You ar in my dream now." shows how he completely ensnared her. Briliantly Written! I hope you continue, I wold lie to see how Bella gets out of this predicerment.

P.S.: I heard Vincent Prices Laugh, too. But I heard right when he trapped Bella



Author's Response:

Jimmyd, I so enjoyed reading your review!  Thanks for giving me something to smile about today.  Sometimes writing evil can be delicious fun.  So glad you found it worth your time. 

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2015 09:16 AM · On: Dreamcatcher

Very creepy :)



Author's Response:

*smiles wickedly* Thanks!

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