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Reviewer: britojhb (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, I sure hope this goes further than 3 chapters.  I love the way it's written, I love that Bella is a little broken and he is a little insecure.  I love that they will be able to repair each other, at least I hope they will....And wow, can they be any hotter together?!  Whew....



Author's Response:

It will be 4 chapters total, the final one to post tonight.  Thrilled that you like the way it's written.  They are definitely both struggling at the moment, but yes, together they'll be able to help each other grow stronger and more sure.  So glad you like the chemistry between them, it is pretty intense, isn't it?

Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 3

This story has an all new taste too it. I love the concept, I can't wait till Edwards finds out that Bella's a violin instructor. This should be good!



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it!  We wanted to keep it fresh and unique.  The final part will post tonight!  Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 3

Uh, that was pretty abysmal.... It would not be a small thing to fix that mess. (Love the story, but sad by the situation. I'm sure they are both feeling just awful.)



Author's Response:

It was really rough.  They're both going to have to work on communicating, and Edward certainly owes her an explanation.  They are both feeling awful at the moment.  Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 3

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it!  Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow. Can't wait to see where this goes. I am guessing further than the originally planned 3 chapters?

Author's Response:

Sorry about the confusion, that was the o/s, plus 3 chapters, for a total of 4.  So the final part will post tonight.  Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: lizde (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love this story! I think he owes her a violin and an apology/explanation among other more pleasurable things.

I like the way you've built up the tension and dragged it out a bit without over extending it. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you're enjoying the story so much.  Love your suggestions about him owing her a violin and an apology.  Not to worry, they will be will be coming, along with the more pleasurable things!

So glad you like the tension, it's so nerve-wracking trying to get it just right, and we appreciate the feedback on how we're doing!  The next chapter will post tonight! Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great story so far. And not making it easier makes the story more.....love it...waiting for the rest of the story to develop.



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you're enjoying it.  Yes, we didn't want to take the easy route for this.  So glad you are hooked and looking forward to more.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2013 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 2

THis is a very interesting story. Never read anything involving Pegging, but I like where this is going.



Author's Response:

It definitely isn't a common topic in FFn, but we enjoyed exploring something different.  So glad you are intrigued by it and looking forward to more.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: elsiemanville (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm hooked!

Author's Response:

So glad you're hooked on the story.  We're excited to have you on board for it.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: susolgi2004 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

So very, very good!!! Please update soon...

 



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you like it so much.  The next chapter will post today.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

Something's gotta give. Some sacrifice will have to be made...



Author's Response:

Yes, absolutely.  They just need to realize that the potential there is worth the risk. Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2013 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

*sniffle*



Author's Response:

Aww, yeah, it's a rough chapter, isn't it?  They just need to see that what they could potentially have together is worth the changes they're going to have to make to make it happen.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2013 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is really interesting, I'm eager to see more.



Author's Response:

Really thrilled that you enjoyed it, and found it so interesting.  The next chapter will post today. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lynard69 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2013 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 2

Bittersweet.  But that Emmett is a sly one.  he knew exactly what he was doing!



Author's Response:

It was a bittersweet chapter, wasn't it?  Emmett is sly, isn't he?  We think you'll like the way things play out there. Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2013 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

loloking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed to.  The next chapter will post today.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2013 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 2

Both of them felt the connection between them. Both want more. Both have similar interest with regards to the violin. Bella is doubting her current career because of her desire for Edward. Edward want Bella also, but not on a paying method. Neither is willing to cross that invisible line to find a solution together to be together. Both ar distracted and miserable without their connection.



Author's Response:

You are absolutely right about where they both are mentally right now.  They need to get to a point where they realize they want to be together enough to cross the invisible line and make the needed changes.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2013 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

NOT at all what I expecte but so worth eth read!!  Your so detailed and specific its liek really wow!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, we definitely wanted to do something unusual.  Thrilled that you enjoyed it though!  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: michelledale (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2013 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

<3 I find this to be absolutely awesome! Can't wait for more. :)



Author's Response:

So thrilled that you enjoyed it.  The next part should post tonight.  Thank you for the nice review.

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2013 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

this is crazy good, please update soon!!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.  The next part should post tonight.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2013 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

Delightfully evil and delicious story. Loved Edward and his vulnerability in this one.



Author's Response:

Haha, we had fun with it, that's for sure.  So thrilled that you liked Edward's vulnerability.  We really enjoying exploring the dynamic between his strenth and his willingness to be vulnerable.  So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Xerseven (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

I agree with all previous reviews!  Mmmmm, wow.  Nicely done!



Author's Response:

So thrilled that you enjoyed the story so much.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

The next chapter should post tonight!  So glad you're enjoying it.  There will be three more chapters to come.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Twilightfreak84 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG!!!! That was hot. I' m loving the story so far. Whoop-hoo. I need an ice pack.



Author's Response:

Haha.  Glad to hear you found it so hot.  Ice pack hot is quite the compliment!  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: Shadow48 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Jesus...I'm just going to sit here and be speechless for a bit...and that's about the best compliment I can give!



Author's Response:

Being speechless IS the best compliment!  So thrilled that you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the nice review! Thrilled that you enjoyed it so much.

Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yes!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

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