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Reviewer: turtle1954 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2017 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 14

Please update

Reviewer: ellery (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 14

PLEASE continue this story.  It is really well written and intriging!!!  Finish!!!!


Reviewer: brooklynnjack (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more

Reviewer: Bonibella (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 14

I really really love your story. Can't wait for mean Alice 😄

Reviewer: Brittany08forever (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2015 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 14

Aw not sure I like mean Alice lol

Reviewer: ellery (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2015 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 14

Please update, this is sooooo good.  Well written and interesting!


Reviewer: jalee1118 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2015 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 14

SO will Alice and Bella not be "best friends" in this story?  This is getting good and I can't wait to find out what happens next!  Please update soon!

Author's Response:

You are correct in you assumption lol - Alice and Bella are definitely not going to me "best friends" in this story. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2015 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh please update soon!!

Reviewer: twifansp (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2015 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

Love this story.  Hope you can update again  soon. 

Reviewer: ellery (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2015 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

update soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: kimmiesan (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2015 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

I really love this story

Reviewer: curl_ninii21 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2015 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

loved it can't wait for your next review!!! (: 

Reviewer: jalee1118 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2014 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

When it rains it pours exes!  I hope Edward will be faithful to Bella, but you never know.  He seems hooked and I hope all works out!  Please update soon!  I just love this story so much!


Reviewer: gabella2423 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2014 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

Love this story thanks for the iodate can't wait to read the 4th of July party 

Reviewer: teamjasmett (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2014 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

Enjoying it so far, but getting a bit bored of all the "lemons" - not trying to be rude or anything, but just giving you a heads up :)

Really nicely written, cannot wait for the next chapter. Favourited and following! x

Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2014 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

Ah hell!!!!

Reviewer: ellery (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

This is terrific!  Keep updating!


Reviewer: RavenFlyer (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 13- Unleashing the Beast Within

post more soon!!!

Reviewer: snilla01 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2014 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

dont stop now need ti know the end !!!

Reviewer: RavenFlyer (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2014 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 12

plz write more soon!

Reviewer: CosmicTwilight (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2014 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 12

Wow, Jerkward moments, I do have a feeling that he's building everything up to a proposal so it doesn't seem crazy. But I god damn hate push over Bella, I can't wait for her to develop some balls! Update soon.

Reviewer: sheagirl (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2014 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story.  Cliff hanger Realy!  I hope you write more soon.

Reviewer: iamcuterthanu (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2014 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 12

I can't believe you stopped there!!!

Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2014 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 12

Love the story. Hope to see another chapter soon. Thank You for your time you put into writing. I really enjoy reading it.

Reviewer: snilla01 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2014 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

write more please :) 

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