Very interesting start.  I like the conflict you've built in this first chapter.  And even though Bella is almost 18, this is a sticky situation.  I'm looking forward to more.

 

Author's Response: It is a very sticky situation. I just got done writing Edward's POV on all of it and now I'm depressed haha. Thank you so much for the review ^_^

I wasn't sure about this at first.  I thought, "oh please let her be in college and not high school for this," but you have made it non-creepy, and I am rooting for them to get together. Good job there.  I look forward to more. :)

Author's Response: I know it's a really contraversal plotline. I tried to get their ages as close as I could and she is legal(or she will be). Also, it's not about the physical in this story. Obviously there will be physical at somepoint, but it's more about the emotional aspects of their relationship. I'm so happy that came across in my writing. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and I hope I'm able to keep you non grossed out, haha.

Author's Response: I know it's a really contraversal plotline. I tried to get their ages as close as I could and she is legal(or she will be). Also, it's not about the physical in this story. Obviously there will be physical at somepoint, but it's more about the emotional aspects of their relationship. I'm so happy that came across in my writing. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and I hope I'm able to keep you non grossed out, haha.

ooohhh i can't wait to see where you go with this.. honestly i absolutely love teacher edward, but something tells me this is going to be different from all the other stories i have read.. keep up the great work! and i cant wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Yes, teacher Edward is one very sexy creature ^_^ this is going to be different I think. With most of the others it mostly about the sex. With this one it's about the love aspect more. Thank you so much for the awesome review ^_^

UhOh - I see potential drama -- no, make that DRAMA. LOL.

Author's Response: Hah, yes. This story is going to have drama galore. Thanks for the review ^_^

Love it, more please!

Author's Response: haha, for sure! And thanks ^_^

Fabulous!!! 

Author's Response: Why thank you dah-ling! haha ^_^

This is the first story I have found good enough to review!  I always love stories with forbidden love, and lots of tortured angst!  I hope you update again soon!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much! Like, really! Thank you! and the next chapter should be up by tomorrow ^_^

i love it!!!

Author's Response: haha, thank you!!!

I am in love already! Don't worry about the haters, I can sense pure awesomeness here. The characters are great and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: wow, thank you so much! I think your review just washed anything that the haters would say right out the window! ^_^ TY for the review and the awesomeness that is this review!

I really like it so far. This has the potiential to have a lot of angst which is always a good thing as long as there is a worthy pay off. :) Can't wait to see how Edward reacts to her tomorrow after he witnessed the kiss.

Author's Response: Yeah, the angst is going to kill me emotional wise. But it will be worth it in the end ^_^

This is definitly promising.  They very obviously have chemistry and it will be interesting to see their relationship unfold.  I do like your writing style. And I would be smacking Jacob too!  Good first chapter!

Author's Response: haha, thank so much! Yeah, Jake doesn't know how to think before he acts sometimes. They do have chemistry. It's going to be a dangerous road for them. Thank you for the review and the compliments! They make me smile ^_^

Great idea for a story. I'm excited to see more. I think you might have to hold me back though because I'm about to do a whole lot more than slap Jacob. Seriously how is that a birthday present? Gross.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: hahahaha, I know what you mean. But Bella has always blurred the lines with Jake. They have a connection and he thought(stupid pup) that she liked him too. Thank you so much for the review!

This story has great potential--I like it a lot!  Please continue!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I most definitely will ^_^