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Reviewer: flibbins (Signed)
December 06, 2008 04:39 PM · On:
Poor Bella and Edward. Even though Edward ethically has to maintain his distance, it will be hard to watch him hurt her. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: It's definitely goning to suck. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: WinndSinger (Signed)
December 06, 2008 02:19 PM · On:
God, this is so GOOD! Poor Edward, when he cried I just wanted to hold him, poor baby. Hey, Elvis fell in love with Priscilla and she was 13 !
This is going to be brutal, when he has to break her little girl heart. Why do men do this to us? LOL He already stuck the knife in with the "It's Mr. Cullen, Bella." thing.
Please post more soon! I can't wait!!
Author's Response: Yes, next chapter Bella goes through so many emotions it's not even funny. I'm writing it right now and it's killing me. Was she really 13? No way, I totally thought she was 16. that's crazy, haha. thanks so much for the review ^_^
Reviewer: limona (Signed)
December 06, 2008 11:38 AM · On:
Oh, poor Edward. :(
And poor Bella, but really, Edward is doing the right thing... even if it doesn't feel that way.
He is doing the right thing. That's what Edward does. *sigh* it will be worth it in the end.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed)
December 06, 2008 04:31 AM · On:
This is so sad! :( I feel so badly for them both. I adored Bella's reaction to the mutt's kiss and her rant to Edward about it. Awesome!
Next chapter we get to see Edward break Bella's heart. *with heavy sarcasm* oh great! that's just what I have been waiting for! Now maybe she can go off and find the mutt again! Grrr!
So, after my reservations about starting this story, I am totally hooked. I like that their relationship has the barriers to overcome. Their teacher/student relationship serves like the vampire/human dynamic, so I think it's a really good fit.
I am a big Emmett fan, but I felt he was really harsh with Eddie. I know he had to be, but it was quite painful.
I will get through the angst because it will make the fluff all the sweeter! Right? There will be fluff at some point?
You responded to my review that this story is more about the emotional than the physical, but I cannot help but notice the rating for this story. It's my favorite rating, and I do hope you make good on that rating! ;) Even just some angsty solitary action would be really cool as they pine for each other. OMG! I have so gone to the dark side! LOVE it here! It's pretty! :)
Oh yes! I will most definitely make good on that rating ;-) haha. What I meant about the emotional was that this story isn't about their physical attraction to each other. Obviously it's there, but neither of them would have thought twice about any sort of tryst if it was only physical. Thet love each other.
I love Emmett too. Don't worry, he'll come around. But right now, he is protecting Bella and protecting Edward from himself. Not to mention that when Edward and Bella actually do get together that Emmett could get in serious trouble along with them. It's just one giant sticky mess, haha.
A lot of people have compared the struggles to those in the book and it totally does parallel it. It's going to be a rough road for Bella and Edward, but hopefully it will be worth it in the end.
And I'm going to let you in on a secret because I know I HATE when Jake and Bella get together in Edward/Bella stories: Jake and Bella will stay friends. That's it. Obviously there is a little more on Jakes side, but he will get over it and be there for Bella as a FRIEND, haha. Thanks so much for the fantabulous review ^_^ I love discussing my story.
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed)
December 06, 2008 01:16 AM · On:
Poor Bella. It's going to be a long year!
Author's Response: It most definitely is. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: COLDASICEx3 (Signed)
December 06, 2008 01:03 AM · On:
I really like this! Usually, I don't read stories until they're further along, but yours was worth it! Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Like really! Thank you! ^_^
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed)
December 06, 2008 12:55 AM · On:
Eh, but he's doing the "right" thing. What a sucky situation. This may actually be worse than vampire Edward falling for human Bella! Well, maybe not, but pretty damn close!
Author's Response: hahaha, thanks so much ^_^ It is a horrible situation. To think that they could be together no problem if he weren't her teacher, but then where would the story be? haha. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: HopelessRomantic (Signed)
December 06, 2008 12:38 AM · On:
Oh no! He's gonna act like a douchebag, isn't he? Please continue, and post soon!
*sigh* he can't help it. Think New Moon, where the only way to do it is to be completely cold. But he'll try, he's Edward.
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed)
December 06, 2008 12:21 AM · On:
i love it. wiktt in bellaland, awesome. thank you.
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks so much. And you're welcome, haha.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed)
December 06, 2008 12:09 AM · On:
oh no! stupid edward...
im intrigued and i do want to read more. keep writing!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much! I'll keep writing, I promise ^_^
Reviewer: kewlbubzlouise (Signed)
December 05, 2008 11:47 PM · On:
aww... poor edward
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: bethann2103 (Signed)
December 05, 2008 11:46 PM · On:
I love this story!!! You have me totally obsessed after only two chapter. I love your writing style and I love how the plot is moving along. The forbidden love plot is always a favorite of mine and I love the student/teacher aspect of it. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: OmyGosh, thanks so much ^_^ It's like compliment of the century haha.
Reviewer: valelf (Signed)
December 05, 2008 11:35 PM · On:
Happy Early Birthday
I have been lurking on this site for a couple of weeks. After reading your story, I HAD to register just to tell you how fabulous it is! I am truly loving it! I am completely hooked and will be waiting anxiously for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so very very very VERY much! That is so awesome to hear ^_^ It seriously makes my day ^_^
Reviewer: mary jane88 (Signed)
December 05, 2008 11:10 PM · On:
W0w l0ving it already . keep up the great w0rk and update s00n please^_^
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I'm trying to get it up before monday ^_^
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed)
December 05, 2008 10:23 PM · On:
My heart aches for him... Poor Edward. Poor Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: It is uber sad. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: pipergirl (Signed)
December 05, 2008 09:31 PM · On:
You mean the boy doesn't let himself have what he wants... *sigh* Poor boy gives us all a headache :)
Great chapter, once again!
Author's Response: Exactly! You don't know how many times I was like damn it Edward! And I was writing the darn thing haha ^_^ Thanks so mych for the review!
Reviewer: vjrick (Signed)
December 05, 2008 09:23 PM · On:
keep the chapters coming!! love the story so far, i can tell it's going to get extremely interesting! i can't wait!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll keep writing as fast as I can ^_^
Reviewer: paleblueeyes (Signed)
December 05, 2008 09:10 PM · On:
Happy Early Birthday
omg i'm dying here. update please!!!!
Author's Response: hahaha, I'm trying! ^_^ Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Lina (Signed)
December 05, 2008 08:44 PM · On:
Author's Response: hah, ditto!
Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed)
December 05, 2008 08:13 PM · On:
I'm not so sure telling Emmett was such a good idea. Sure he needed someone to talk to but when something does happen between them (and I say that because of the rating), Emmett could get in trouble as well.
You know if it was anyone else in Edward's position I would definitely be creeped out, but I keep thinking that he just has to wait until she graduates until he can do something about his feelings. Dammit I don't want him breaking her heart. I feel terrible for Bella. I mean besides Alice, Jasper and Edward does she even have any other friends? And he's doing it one day after her birthday...
Love the angst. Can't wait for more!
Actually, her birthday is a little less than a week away. And it's going to be bad. Bella has the usual 'friends' from twilight, but because she has Alice, she's even more closed off from them. Angela is more or less a friend too, but we don't know it yet.
You're right about the teacher thing. That's why I was worried about writing this story, but because of the mentalities surrounding Bella and Edward, it's slightly more acceptable. And she is legal(more or less). You're right about Emmett. It was a bad idea in the long run, but Edward isn't expecting to be with Bella which is why he needed help and he didn't think of any consequences.
Thank you so much for this review. I love discussing my story like this ^_^
Reviewer: Esme (Signed)
December 05, 2008 07:44 PM · On:
Happy Early Birthday
I am so loving this story. Please update soon because I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm planning on updating tonight or tomorrow ^_^ Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: kkho1711 (Signed)
December 05, 2008 07:37 PM · On:
"Next chapter we get to see Edward break Bella's heart."
I'd probably be more devastated by this if we hadn't been let in on Edward's thoughts. He'll never be able to handle zombie Bella. It's Edward's tragic flaw or something.
I'm still loving teacher Edward. I'm just so excited about this story! Even if next chapter makes me cry....
Author's Response: You're right. He won't be able to handle it, but Bella won't let him see it. *sigh* I'm so excited by everyones excitement! I never expected this story to do so well. I'm in shock, haha. Thank you so much for the review ^_^
Reviewer: natlee (Signed)
December 05, 2008 07:14 PM · On:
This story has great potential! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! *adds to faves*
Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thanks so much ^_^
December 05, 2008 07:12 PM · On:
Above and beyond expectations. I was just heartbroken right there with Edward. Great job getting the emotion right. I loved that he called Emmett and then fell to pieces. I love this man. I'll be holding my breath for more.
He is amazin isn't he? I'm so glad to hear you say that. I work so hard to get the picture right for the reader that it's nice when I get the raessurance ^_^ Thanks so much for the wonderful review.
Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed)
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December 05, 2008 06:55 PM · On:
I love this so far! Great writing. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! And I will ^_^
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