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Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 02:36 AM · On: Words of Wisdom
No! You ended it there?! Gah! I am dying here! Thanks for the early update. Can we have the next chapter on Friday?! :) lol. I find it agony waiting for you to update this story, so well done! It is compelling and emotional. The scene in which he found her in the woods was so tender. Good job! And please, for the sake of my sanity, update again soon! Thank you! :D
Author's Response: you are the second person to ask me for an updat on friday, lol. I will most definitely try, but I'm making no promises! And, wow, thanks so much for all of the kind words! Your review is awesome ^_^
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Words of Wisdom
wow. lots of angst...which i LOVE! =) more please!
Author's Response: more is coming soon ^_^ Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 11:43 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
Good stuff! GO ALICE! LOL I adore her. And Emmett! He's such a great friend, Edward is lucky to have him. Definitely not as heartbreaking as previous chapters, but still hard to read Edward's pain. Poor guy. :( Loved that he put his forehead to hers and his "God, I thought I lost you." comment... awwww.... so awesome! I'd love to know what she tried to say back, so I hope we're going to get a bit of Bella's POV on that. Loving this, and can't wait for more! Keep it coming! :)
~Cat~
Author's Response: Bella will most definitely look back on what transpired, but we might not see everything that happened from her POV. Edward's pain is always tough and I'm so glad you liked that part. It made me get all fluttery when I wrote it ^_^ Alice is amazing. In this chapter specifically, haha. She and Emmett were my favorite parts and I'm so glad you like Emmett. I like him too ^_^ Thanks so much for the amazing review!
Reviewer: emmettsbutterfly (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 10:56 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
WOW. This is AMAZING! it is definatly the best FF that I'm following right now! I love Alice's speech in Words of Wisdom!!! I was shrinking away from her!! Please keep the updates coming!!! It is SOOOOOO good, and I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you so very much! That means the world to hear, thank you! Alice was pretty awesome in this Chapter ^_^ And I'm writing as fast as I can! haha.
Reviewer: HopelessRomantic (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 10:47 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
AHHHH! Just tell her!
Author's Response: hahaha, but then we wouldn't have a story! Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: pwtf (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 10:40 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
I don't know about not as heartbreaking...reading Edward's thoughts through that has my own heart bleeding. And I'm shaking right along with him. Though that might be the cold... He's definitely between a rock and a hard place. Although that phrase just makes me laugh now ever since the Simpsons movie... Probably a good thing since your chapter was so beautifully depressing that I'm completely heartbroken. Great job. I am so addicted. I'm already needing another update! Love it!
Author's Response: rofl!!! As inappropriate as this probably is, that is EXACTLY what I was thinking about when I wrote that line. hahaha. I'm so sorry you were extremely heartbroken. I really didn't think it would be that bad and I chalk it up to reading over the chapter so many times and falling asleep at the computer when I posted, haha. Thanks so much for the awesome review and the next chapter will be posted by sunday at the VERY latest. ^_^
Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 10:35 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
I adore this story! This is pretty much the only story I get extremely excited for. I love.love.love it! I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: oh wow, thanks so much!
Reviewer: Arrayofcolours (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 10:04 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
Once again a fabulous chapter! I love this story so far. It's much more realistic than others with this plot line I've come acorss. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Author's Response: I try really hard to get the emotions and charactizations as close to real as possible and to hear that I've achieved that so far is amazing. Thanks so much for the wonderful review!
Reviewer: bspest04 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
oh my, this is so good! when are they just going to get it on though? they both want it so bad ;)
Author's Response: hahahaha, that they do, my friend. That they do. Jsut a little more angst and then we get some sexy times ^_^
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 09:22 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
afklj!!!I'm so glad he was the one to find her. Brilliantly thought out,.... and I'm glad we didn't have to wait until Friday, but does that mean we have to wait even longer for the next chapter?? :)
Author's Response: haha, no, no. I post the chapters as soon as they are done ^_^ So as soon as I'm satisfied, you will see Edward and Bella's talk. Thankls so much for the review!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
OMG!! GAH! THAT WAS SOOOOO GOOD I love Alice! She really put him in his place. Love how Emmett could see how much Edward loves Bella. I cannot wait for the conversation between Edward and Bella!! Please update again soon.
Author's Response: I'm already writing the next chapter ^_^ Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
Yeah Alice leave it up to her to set Edward strait and Emmett has his back as always. I like this story a lot
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, Alice and Emmet were my fave parts of this chapter ^_^
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 08:46 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
Yeah, fan girl squeal alert....YAY! I was a tad excited to see you updated...and earlier than you thought you would! :) So...yes, this chapter didn't tear my heart into shreads like the last one...but still heartbreaking none the less...when he was frantically searching for her(and crying on top of it)...dang girl! LOL! But my absolute favorite part was Alice giving him a piece of her mind! AWESOME as always! :)
Author's Response: haha, Alice was most definitely my favorite as well with Emmett coming in at a close second. It was a little heart wrenching, but in a defferent way. I expected it to be a little break from it, but I guess after reading it so much I just got used to it because everyone is like "You LIE! Is so IS heartbreaking!" hahaha ^_^ Thanks so much for the awesome review!
Reviewer: Inwen (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 06:49 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
Great story...love the tension, can't wait to read how you work it out.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope it lives up to everyones expectations ^_^
Reviewer: COLDASICEx3 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 05:54 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
Aw, Edward, just tell her. Wait for her to graduate, follow her wherever she goes, and it'll work out!
Author's Response: Ah, if only it were that easy. But alas, Edward can never make things easy, can he? Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 05:40 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
I have to say that I like your Emmett. He seems like a great guy and a wonderful friend for Edward. So glad that he waited for him. And I like that he's kind of trying to get Edward to realize that he could be with Bella... just not until June or whenever graduation is. Of course, it sounds like Edward's going to be discouraging that idea kind of like how vampire Edward wanted Bella to remain human. I was a little confused about the "jail" reference. Would Edward really face jail time? She's 18, so I would think that the most that would happen is that he'd lose his job and credential or something. And plus, it's not like they've had physical contact other than the recent hug. Anyway, just my 2 cents. Obviously, I'm no expert on the topic as I've never had a relationship w/a teacher. lol
Author's Response: Edward would be going to jail for sexual harassment, not the whole underage thing. Bella would never do that to him, but that would be a danger if he spouted his feelings to anyone else. It is very vampire Edward of him isn't it. I keep making all of these correlations without meaning to, haha. I'm really glad that my Emmett is going over so well. I always see him as a dumb sex fiend in most stories and he's just not like that to me. Thanks so much for the awesome review!
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 05:31 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
damn!!! ...That is all :)
Author's Response: haha. Why, thank you!
Reviewer: missjanelle (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 05:27 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
great chapter! your emmet/edward stuff was played out really well. looking foward to more. x
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Emmett and Alice were my favorite parts of this chapter.
Reviewer: kkho1711 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 05:19 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
nope, not as heartbreaking, but still as frustrating! which door will Edward choose? although, I'm pretty positive he'll choose the one with Bella...at least, eventually. like Edward can actually stay away. even Emmett knows that. good chapter! also. I really liked that Edward found her in the woods; that way he got to see first hand exactly what he did to her.
Author's Response: Yeah, Edward is going to talk to Bella at least. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 05:19 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
wow, go alice!
Author's Response: I agree whole-heartedly ^_^
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 05:01 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
Go Alice!
Author's Response: haha, Ditto!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 04:06 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
This was excellent! I love Alice - she rocks! Can't wait to see how their talk goes!
Author's Response: Alice is all kinds of awesome ^_^ Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2008 04:05 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
Wow. You're right. Rock and a hard place. Poor Edward. :( They love eachother so much. But she's 18 now. It may not be 'ethical' but it's downright legal now. I'm completely captivated and very interested to see how they work this out. It's very sexy.
Author's Response: Haha, it is a tough situation to be in, but Edward will follow his heart...eventually, haha. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 04:00 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
Why arent there any hot teachers in my school????
Author's Response: hahahahahahahahaha....I know what you mean *sigh* haha
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 03:58 PM · On: Words of Wisdom
oh thank you jesus for the beautiful person that is alice. thank you thank you thank you. someone had to tell edward and im glad alice did it - blunt and all. kep writing, xoxo
Author's Response: Alice is rather amazing ^_^ Thanks so much for the review!
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