LOVED getting Emmett's pov on the whole situation. Rose is one strong woman and I am so glad she punched that Asshole James! Loved that Emmett comforted her and that he loves her. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, hun! I'm so glad you liked it,

Yep.  Emmett POV is cool.  Poor Rose!  I knew that's what she was gonna do.  I think you totally hit it with her not being able to say anything beforehand.  Totally what you do when you are hanging by the thinnest thread. 

Okay, this is good, but can I have more Edward and Bella please?  I miss them! :D

Author's Response:

Haha, you and everyone else, my dear ^_^ Yes, Bella will be back next chapter and I've got some cute scenes between the two of them. Thanks so much for the review!

I looooved the chapter from Emmett's POV...and just how much he cared for Rose....who was awesome in the chapter by the way! But as much as I loved the chapter and you know I did...I miss E & B!

Author's Response:

haha, I think everyone does ^_^ I got Bella coming up next! Thanks so much for the review Catie!

I loved this chapter. It was completely necessary in that it helps solidify Emmett's character and allows us to fully appreciate his understanding of Edward's love for Bella, and now his growing love for Rosalie.

It was just wonderful. I can hardly wait for more. Actually, I can't! Please post more ASAP!

Author's Response:

Haha, I'm trying! I have a doc appointment later today, so cross your fingers I get clearance to stop electro treatments ^_^ I'm so glad you liked the chapter! I was really gambling with it. I was pretty sure it would go over well and I think it's necessary to the story, but it's hard to tell without and outside eye. Thanks so much for the review!

wow.  crazy turn of events.  i like the different aspects of this story!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

You totally faked me out with Bella's dream at school--I was completely stressed out and didn't even see that it was a dream coming.  Good move!

Author's Response:

haha, thanks! Yeah, a lot of people really freaked out on me and I honestly thought it was obvious ^_^

*jumps up and down and claps* Yay! James is in jail the bastard!

 

Now we find out what happens with Bella right?

Author's Response:

haha, yes we do ^_^

I liked Em's POV for this chapter. I think it worked quite well. I'm just concerned how long Rose has known about James 'cause um, I certainly wouldn't want to keep hanging around a possible serial rapist. Unless maybe she was scared for her own life or ?? IMpatiently waiting for the next chapter. :)

Author's Response:

Okay, so I promise to explain this in more detail in the next EPOV, but I didn't realize it was super unclear. Everyone thinks she's like a super spy, lol ^_^ Rose has subconsciously known that James was bad for a while, but because she didn't have anyone but him, she refused to see it. When Edward called and James did another disappearing act, Rose ran his fingerprints through AFIS(sp?) but never looked at the results. That night in her office she looked at the folder and paired all of the nights they went out with the nights of the rapes/murders. So she knew, but not really. It took Edward coming back to open her eyes.

Thanks so much for the review everwondering! And I'm really glad you liked the chappy ^_^

I'm generally not into the whole AU genre for Twilight, but this really works.  I like it. And, BTW, it should be "pEEked" into the car, not "pEAked."

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I try really hard to keep them all in character even with it bing an All-Human fic and I think I do alright, lol. Thanks for the CC. I try to catch all of that stuff, but then I go back and reread and I end up seeing even more. Really though, thank you. I'l try to look out more carefully in the future ^_^

Wow that was such a great chapter and I love that you alway leave notes at the end to explain your point a little better.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like that. I get a lot of questions and I just wanted to be sure that people new that Rose wasn't just trying to make Emmett sweat, haha. Thanks so much for the review!

This is a great story and that was a big shock with Rosalie pulling that out on James at the last minute.  I am looking forward to seeing what happens at the hospital with Edward and Bella.  Wonderful writing!

Author's Response:

Rose is a woman scorned. You never mess with those ^_^ E and B are coming up next!

Awww. Em, you big old teddy bear you. I love you so much. Not as much as I love Edward, but you're second. ^_^

Author's Response:

I agree with you there ^_^ Bella's POV is coming up next and we get plenty of Edward!

Ugh, what a scumbag James totally was!! I'm glad Rosalie turned out to be a strong woman--i couldn't understand why she was with him in the first place!  I really can't wait to see him and Rose get together :)  Her like semi-undercover thing totally took me by surprise--nice job.  Can't wait til the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! She wasn't REALLY undercover, but she did start to figure things out and when Edward can back in her life, she found the strangth that she needed to put the bastard away.