Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
I almost didn't read this story because I couldn't get passed the ill feeling I got about the student/teacher thing. But once I started reading it, it's very good. Edward is so conflicted and Bella is pushing him not to give up on their relationship. It's amazing how you've taken such a different story and woven in the same themes from canon! I kind of feel for Edward - my first teaching job out of college was high school...and it really IS hard to separate yourself when you're only 4 years older. Luckily I was already married, but I can imagine how some teachers still relate to those older students. It's unfortunately a very believable situation you've set them in. I'm really hoping this whole thing doesn't come crashing down on their heads...but I really can't imagine how it won't at some point.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
IS THIS A LIFL UPDATE I SEE BEFORE ME? YAY!
Sorry, I'm exceptionally happy. I love how Edward was trying to make himself not be too near Bella, and his internal struggle. Charlie was SO in character. It's so like him, to not care that Bella did something wrong, just as long as he's ok. Some would call it irresponsible, I call it awesome!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
So good! So happy to revisit this story, and I'm so glad Charlie took the news the way he did. What a good dad.
Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Really good...I have enjoyed this story so far...I just hope they get together soon!!!
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Thank you for the update. I hope that you will be able to update soon. I can not wait for Bella to graduate. Update soon!!
Reviewer: Soteria (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
llloooovvvveeedddd iiiiiitttt!!!!!! :) i was getting really worried when its been months and still no update Welcome back!:) and i love ur writing
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Amazingg!
I loved this!
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
I was so excited to see an update! This story is the very first one I started to read on Twilighted. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
What a good chapter. I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the story... all the controversy over student/teacher relationships and all.. but this is a really good story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: taynemmsmama (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
I loved this - I thought that the last chapter was very itimate - I loved the comfort that both of them got from holding hands.
I hope that there are follow-up chapters - you are truly a wonderfu writer!
Lizzie
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
well it went over quite well i think!!!!!!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Nice!!! I hope you update this soon as I'm really eager to see how their relationship progresses now!!!
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
he has to wait untill she graduates. otherwise there will be lots of trouble.
love the story:)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
love it!!! can't wait to read more. can't wait until they admit their feelings even if they're not going to act on it for now
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Awsome chapter!!Charlie had just the right reaction. ;D
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Great chapter. I liked all the E/B interaction. I'm glad Edward was there for Bella when they told Charlie about what happened. Hope Rose gets better soon and I really like Tanya's character. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
totally get why this chapter is necessary. I actually like the way you're not rushing the relationship because it feels so much more real and natural. Can't wait to see how this is going to tie up, I feel like you still have some twists in there? Going off to read Controlled Burn now :)
Reviewer: TheCelticOne (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
I'm so glad you've updated! Thank you!
Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
awwww. How sweet! I feel an Alice moment. I foresee lots more drama.
Reviewer: crazygreenfrog (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Woohoo! You updated! :) Thank you so much for not abondoning this story. Life is tough and gets in the way so thank you for not dropping it. I will be waiting patiently for the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: fionia (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
thank you for updatiing! It's a great story!
Reviewer: lacyangel32 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
I love this story. I look forward to reading more!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Well done.
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Edward is such a sweetheart. Can't wait til they confess to each other. Hopefully soon? :) Thanks for updating and the story recs... definitely gonna check them out.
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Great to hear from you! I'm also glad that Tanya has turned out to be a good friend to Edward. It's always nice to have someone to share your burdens with. And poor Rose, I couldn't imagine being in her shoes right now. I hope they put that sicker SOB away forever!
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