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Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 09:16 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Healing

I'm spoiled, I admit it....I started this fic one day, and the next day I was caught up and realized it was still in progress and had to wait for this chapter. I'm in love with this Edward, and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2013 07:07 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six: Distortion

Finally....

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 10:48 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Healing

Can't wait for the update

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 01:06 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Healing

very good chapter and now bella get edward back

keep up the great work and post soon

bye bye

Reviewer: AshesAshes (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 11:51 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Healing

I LOVE it! It turne out great, girls! I just want to hug Bella, tell her everything will be okay, and help her pack her bags. I can't wait to work on next chapter!

Love you guys,

T

Reviewer: GIJoesWife (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 11:28 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Healing

I'm really glad that she's figured things out, I just hope it's not too late with Edward. She has hurt him time and time again and not been sorry about it. I don't think that Edward is going to welcome her back with open arms again, Bella is going to have to do the chasing and wooing this time. I love this and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS

Reviewer: cookiesandcream411 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 05:20 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Healing

This is taking too long, I don't care about Riley! Bella doesn't deserve Edward at all

Reviewer: twilover77 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2013 10:52 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Healing

Yeah now we see her win back Edward!!!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2013 02:35 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Healing

Loved it. They are all over and had cleared the air. time for B to move on. can't wat to see what happens when she gets home with Edward.

merrily

Kat

Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2013 02:01 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six: Distortion

God, why is this storey dragging for so long. There isn't much of a plot and the people are pretty shallow. It was so promising when it started.

Reviewer: daisycrazy (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 01:06 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

Although, u r correct & I was hoping for Riley's gf to be there, I can also see the Bella is realizing some things, like in her talk with Amanda. I'm not sure that it will be an easy road back to Edward, when she's ready for it, but I love that your story isn't taking the easy way out.

Reviewer: Alexa Bourne (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2013 11:24 PM · On: Prologue: Nightmare

"Far more than I deserved." This is not a sentence.

"The guilt spiked like a knife" This is a horribly trite simile...perhaps the most trite I have ever read.

Please do not quit your day job.

Author's Response:

Hey there, thanks for letting us know what you thought of the prologue. We always welcome constructive criticism, especially when properly punctuated. Perhaps you should offer your grammar skills as a beta. I'm sure there are lots of authors out there who would love to provide you with the opportunity to brush up on your skills. ~K

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2013 09:26 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Five: Nerves

Alec creeps me the hell out.

Author's Response:

Wow! First off, welcome to the story and secondly, thank you for your feedback along the way. That's really sweet that you took the time to tell us what you think as you went through the story. Clearly, you felt frustration, anger, and a bit of sweetness. That is excellent and exactly what we were going for. I hope that you didn't bail when Bella decided to go all crazy again and run away when things got tough.

The story has around seven more chapters so it's winding down. We look forward to hearing what you think and if you thought it was worth the roller coaster up and down. Again, thanks for the feedback. ~K

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2013 07:42 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three: Learning

I'm getting happy, but I am a little scared that she is going to need a beat down soon for doing something stupid.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2013 06:25 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One: Perspective

Better

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2013 05:03 PM · On: Chapter Ninteen: Regression

Okay, that pic is really hot....and the things you could do on that chair, or desk.....or floor for that matter. YIKES

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 09:37 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Passion

That was nice, if she could just BE HONEST with him all the time her life would be soooo much better, and I wouldn't want beat the crap out of her most of the time.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 01:10 PM · On: Chapter Sixteen: Hope

She's making progress, but I still want to slap her.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 12:19 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen: Tension

Why would he put up with her bullshit?

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 12:08 PM · On: Chapter Fourteen: Apology

Stupid Beeotch, I am starting to hate her.....really hate her.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 10:42 AM · On: Chapter Thirteen: Reminiscing

Edward deserves better than this bullshit, he's too nice for his own good.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 11:24 PM · On: Chapter Twelve: Unsettled

I could draw her a map......

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 11:10 PM · On: Chapter Eleven: Invitation

Renee could have a reaction to the anesthisia or the botox....blow up like a balloon and drop dead, just saying.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 10:54 PM · On: Chapter Ten: Worry

Yawn.....

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 10:41 PM · On: Chapter Nine: Need

Finally, a semi-smart move. Okay, she's devastated at "whats-his-face's" move to DC, but either move out there to be with him or put on your big girl panties and enjoy the awesomeness that is Edward's ass already.

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