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Reviewer: Karmabites76 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 10:41 PM · On: Jake...
Awesome story...it truly spoke to me...I too was once with a man like that....if it hadn't been for my family...i wouldn't have had the strength to walk away..
Reviewer: luckyladyfla (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2012 02:10 PM · On: Jake...
Amazing story!!! It had every emotion in it.
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2012 02:14 PM · On: Jake...
Excellent story.
Reviewer: BellaEncantada (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2012 07:21 PM · On: He adores me...
Thank you for writing this story. I read it, and in it, I recognize my own from two years ago, one which is still continuing now. Thank you.
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 03:40 PM · On: I take it all back....
Way to go girl and what a man Edward.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 09:59 AM · On: Jake...
WOW. What can I say. This was overall a very touching stoyr, but this last part! It showed how Jacob would never change, but it also showed how he became this horrible person.
You really touched me a lot with such a short story.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 09:24 AM · On: I take it all back....
I'm glad Bella stood up to Jake. I also think it was the right time. If it was sooner, I don't htink she would have been ready to face him and be so sure of herself.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 09:15 AM · On: A million little pieces...
It's so sad that things needed to get so bad before Bella decided to let go. The sad thing is that I think that if he hadn't choked her and gotten arrested she would be back with him again.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 08:07 AM · On: Lost...
This story makes me wonder about the fragility of human mind. How we can be so easily manipulated into beeing someone we aren't.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 08:03 AM · On: I meet my husband...
Wow. This chapter just makes me want to shake Bella and scream some sense into her head. i'm guessing that's what Angela wanted to do too. I'm also guessing that things will be much worse before Bella gets out of this relationship.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 07:58 AM · On: He adores me...
I decided to read your story now that it's all posted.
So far, I'm really liking it. Jake gives me the chills.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2012 06:39 AM · On: Jake...
Go Bella!! Talk about taking the high road... Jacob had a real winner in Bella but he was blind to that so sad. Amazing sory thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 08:04 PM · On: Jake...
Good ending
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 07:15 PM · On: Jake...
Very nice ending!
Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 02:02 PM · On: Whispers...
This is just beautiful. Truly touches the heart and reminds you of all the little things in life that one tends to take advantage of. I teared up many times when reading. Thank you for sharing this.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 11:28 AM · On: Whispers...
Very nice
Reviewer: flagrad (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 07:36 AM · On: Whispers...
This story was written with such class and in a tastful way, such a subject to write about & you did such a beautiful job at it. I have really enjoyed this story. Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightie04 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 01:23 AM · On: Whispers...
I have been Mia from twilighted for a while but I was itching for something new to read, I stumbled across this little story. . . And I'm so glad... It's been a great experience reading it. Although its not a long ff but what it lacks in length it makes up in substance . . I love this story... Thanks so much for sharing!
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2012 10:16 PM · On: Whispers...
Love it!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2012 10:09 PM · On: Whispers...
sniffle love truly madly deeply love it!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 06:15 AM · On: Please open the door....
This is a really good story - it's very sad but I love the pain you wove into Bella's relationship with Jake. I hope she manages to reach out to Edward and be with him.
Hoping for more soon.
Achilles
Reviewer: carlislelover83 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:49 PM · On: He adores me...
I love this story, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 05:27 AM · On: Please open the door....
Oh I hope she will believe in herself enough to open the door. O'm sp glad your Edward is being open
Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 03:04 AM · On: Please open the door....
Good grief woman, have you been practicing your cliftees?! That was a good one. I've never been abused so i can't speak for the ones who have, but damn, Edward begging and pleading like that would be so hard to turn down! Who am i kidding, Edward would be hard to turn down if he never said a word! Look forward to next chapter.
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:36 AM · On: Please open the door....
Bella, don't just walk to the door, Run to the Door, Jerk it Open and Let Edward in!
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