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Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2013 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 4

arg. I want more. lol Is that a good review? probably not, but i'm running w/it.

Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2013 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 4

arg. I want more. lol Is that a good review? probably not, but i'm running w/it.

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

So if you want more reviews ...keep writing and don't keep us on the hook!   Thanks Xanath

Reviewer: SilmarwenRaina (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

This story is so original and completely amazing! I love it! Thank you so much for sharing your talent with readers like me! I cannot wait to read what happens next!

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is a subject I have a great interest in.  I like how you are presenting the information and how the story is progressing.  Please continur

1 Thanks - Xanath

Reviewer: TwiMom4Claire (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 4

Intriguing.  Curious about Jasper's issues.  

Reviewer: arkallie26 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh I really love this story can't wait for next update!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 4

ugh more more more love how shes finding parts of her past in her new friends...   Post again soon!!

Reviewer: crossx (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2013 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

Enjoyed.  Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: 321go (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2013 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love the track the plot is going in, I'm interested in this topic normally but to put the Cullen's in is awesome. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Southernbella86 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

omg omg omg more more more please!!! i cant stop reading this!

Reviewer: arkallie26 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 3

Good story looking forward to your story I love jasper/Bella stories

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

I am so glad to have found this story!!! Now I only wish that I had another next to click...pout!!!!!!!  Post again soon!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

omg squeeeeeeeeeee  love love love!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow holy wow so shes still Edwards singer!!!!!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 11:11 AM · On: Prologue

wow love so far and attention to detail!!!!

Reviewer: Just4Me (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2013 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

What an intriguing storyline!  I'm really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: TwiMom4Claire (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2013 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

I like how the characters are very canon, especially Rosalie's reaction to her, as well as Alice's.  So the major and Jasper, and it sounds like everyone is aware he has two personas going on there?  Still very much enjoying. 

Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2013 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 3

I can't wait for more. Love Rose. She's cracking me up.

Reviewer: mindovermadness (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2013 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 3

God bless the Major for trying

Reviewer: lizzy121202 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2013 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

I like your story.  It's interesting And I would like to see where you are taking it.

Reviewer: austoz (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2013 11:28 PM · On: Prologue

Fresh and interesting, I like it! Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: TwiMom4Claire (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

Just found this and read the first three chapters.  Fresh concept, interested to see where it is headed and how these familiar characters develop.  

Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 2

Your story is very interesting so far and I´m very curious how the others in the family think about Bella´s story.

 

Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

 I loved the chapter and can't wait for more. I'm intruigeddn.

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