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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 49: Fragrance Overload

Edward didn't believe Bella when she mentioned Austin's intentions. Enjoyed the gala and the performance on the platform. Can't blame Bella for being disturbed with the photos quite sensual with her man. What a way to earn 12 million with a perverted freak.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 49: Fragrance Overload

Yeah, if I was Bella, I doubt that I would love that campaign and those sexy pictures of my man either, but hell, twelve million dollars, I would deal with it for now, haha. Very visual through the whole campaign. Poor Bella needing to deal with that twisted Stephen, gah! Twisted man. Skanks everywhere, lol, but I was so glad to see that Edward is just commited to his Bella, his family and his baby! Hope they get their shower soon to wash off that skanky fragrance. I swear I can smell it here, and it's giving me a headache, lol. Love it!! Time for showers!!! xoxox

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 48: Charlie's Here

I never tire of your story....it is always just what I love to read. Every word!! Your Edward is so sweet,, and honorable, and to see him so changed, so absolutely set now in life, with the love of his life now by his side, and a new life being born soon. Charlie is so great, and to see him letting Edward know that he is trusting him to take care of his little girl and the baby, so sweet. Edward is so devoted, and clearly lets Charlie know that he is there for Bella and there baby, awwww, made my heart so happy. Love story so much ! I went back recently and reread some of the beginning of your story, and it made me remember so many happy moments. Awww, such a great story!!! xoxoxo

Author's Response:

Ah, thanks. You're going to make me cry.  do think that there are some celebrities who just want to live a normal life and not get caught up in all the drama and excesses. At least I hope there are. These two met under extreme circumstances but it helped them realize that their lives could change for the better. Thanks for being a loyal reader and reviewer. You make it all worthwhile. :)

Reviewer: Undercover415 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2013 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 48: Charlie's Here

That was nice. It's funny to think of Charlie lounging by the pool drinking beer watching a game. Great chapter

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 48: Charlie's Here

I love Charlie.  He's so protective and sweet.  I loved how he grilled Edward and then laughed about it but also having his serious moments with him.  Awww, he wants a granddaughter, he'll spoil her rotten if he gets his way and no doubt a little kitten would appear sometime in her future, lol.  I hope Charlie becomes a regular visitor, I think Bella misses him more than she lets on.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2013 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 47 - On the Red Carpet

Bella did amazing on the red carpet, I'd be scared to death and blind from all those camera flashes, lol.  Tanya is everywhere, I'm glad that Bella told her what's what although I'm not really sure it'll stop someone like Tanya.  I'm amazed Bella could get Spanx on at all, lol.  I'm with Bella, Stephen Austin creeps me out too, eccentric really doesn't cover what he is and was he dressed like Austin Powers?  Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: BeingANobody1997 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2013 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Airport

I just started reading your story, and I LOOOVE it ! :)

Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2013 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 48: Charlie's Here

Awesome! Keep it up! Bella1

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2013 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 48: Charlie's Here

I LOVE your Charlie!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2013 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 48: Charlie's Here

Loved this chapter with Charlie visiting our favorite couple. Dad had to get Edwards's intentions verbalized. I think day's have to make sure their little girls will be Akeem care of. Can't wait for the next chapter and crazy Stephen Austin..

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 47 - On the Red Carpet

Tanya.. the ho.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 46: Making Up & Moving On

I thought she was not to walk the red carpet? Only at the awards shows could they be together in front of the public. Oh well.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 45: Losing It

well there will always be those skirmishes. Try not making them into wars.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 40: Christmas in London Part II

I am behind times here but how about a wedding say when they get home or stay there and just fly her parents over and invite those friends you want to be there. Have the reception in California with your friends there at your home. Casual and yet very much like they are.

English names for a girl. Katherine Isabella and a boy Charles Edward

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 37: Guilty

That was a Tanya situation. I wonder if Edward ever did that? He said no but he was all worked up and with the motivation he might have done that. Glad my husband is not Hollywood material.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 33: On My Tail

See that is what is wrong with the laws concerning this. When someone even a celebrity is in their own home or in their back yard with fencing and protection from visuals from the public and the paps do this they should be sued. Everyone needs down time and a safe place.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 32: The Interview

Obviously Tanya is not going away. Perhaps it would be good to always have a witness.  Too bad she can not tape her.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 31: The Secret

Confidence is always good. It will help with the nerves. Hannah we knew she would be a problem.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Tabloids

Plastic fake Hollywierd. Yep that is what I call it.  You see what some of those actors go through to keep a private life. Promote a picture walk a red carpet then go home.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 23: Out Shopping

I really like your story. I am waiting for a shoe to drop or will it be a bomb.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 20: By Myself

Jeff won't call again now that he knows she cheated on him. He will take his pride and get nasty with lawyers and bs. She said take it all.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 19: You Have Been Served

well Jeff was desperate with that knowledge. He never cheated but he is all about himself. That is what did him in.  Too bad perhaps with the next wife he will learn. maybe not.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Psychiatrist

to maintain the front of everything is normal she has to do everything.  Your story just write it and don't appologise.  Good story

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Display

He has treated her like a whore. How horrible

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 9: Going Home

Yep old Jeffie has been with Jessica.. Maybe in more ways than one.

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