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Reviews For Black Swan
Reviewer: Twiangel427 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 04:16 PM · On: Smoke on the Water

Its nice you should keep going can't wait to see what happens next;)

Reviewer: Nccr (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2014 06:31 AM · On: Smoke on the Water

Hope to hear more soon.  It's really good!

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 08:17 PM · On: Smoke on the Water

This story is good. Don't let your occupation cause you to avoid writing your stories. My job is dominated by the computer too, but when I get home, I switch gears from work demands to pleasure at the computer, like reading your stories. I'm still waiting for the Twinlight sequel, but the way. Grab a glass of wine, beer or what suits you, get out of the work/day clothes into some sweats or a flannel gown, get comfortable and let your imagination fly. Now, with that said...let the world know what you've got. :)

Reviewer: Clossettwilighter (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 04:15 AM · On: Smoke on the Water

The best twilight fanfiction i have ever come across,the way you picture bella is amazing and i would say your version of Bella is better than anyone else.

Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2012 06:21 AM · On: Smoke on the Water

Breaks while working is always a plus =)

Squee I just love a bad Bella lol XD totally kick his ass, girl!

I like especially that you're generally following the actual storyline though- that's awesome.

Reviewer: Sarsacia (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2012 06:58 PM · On: Smoke on the Water

I love the "Dead Like Me" reference. I completely understand an unwillingness to be on a computer after a 12 hr day. I'll be patiently waiting for the next update :). 

Reviewer: Eris1031 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2012 02:15 PM · On: Smoke on the Water

This is very much OOC but I love this Bella.  She is awesome!

Reviewer: michelle624 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 02:50 AM · On: The Second

Hope you post soon, enjoying the story and can't wait to see what Bella is or what Edward is thinking

Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2012 11:51 AM · On: The Second

I love this version of Twilight! This is the most excited I've been to read a Twilight fanfic in a long time. Keep up the good work. I promise to be more detailed in my reviews as the story evolves.

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2012 05:27 PM · On: Alice

finally caught up! Im so ready for more!

Reviewer: Baisa (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Desert Sky

I really like your story 

Reviewer: bkhchica (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 09:54 AM · On: The First

So, jake is already phasing? And already knows about the cullens? Just trying to work it all out in my head. :) I am enjoying reading this story. its very different!

Reviewer: simplyamazed (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 10:24 AM · On: The First

Great start! I am definately intrigued!

Love the badass Bella! You go girl!

Can't wait for more


Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 04:40 PM · On: The First

I do like this badass bella XD so cool lol

Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2012 06:55 PM · On: Rain, Lovely...

I like where this is going so far... >.>


Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2012 11:51 AM · On: Rain, Lovely...

Love it! I can't wait to read where you take this, but I am a sucker for a rebellious Bella.

Reviewer: Sarah1987 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 10:36 AM · On: Rain, Lovely...

Keep posting, good story! Is it on

Author's Response:

yes, my ffn penname is kelsey_alt!

Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 04:18 AM · On: Desert Sky

Good beginning. Curious where you go with this.

Reviewer: twibe (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 04:06 AM · On: Desert Sky

Hope u update soon! Seems like a fic I'm gonna like! :)  You aren't perhaps planning on putting the fic up on fanfiction too??  


xo - looking forward to an update soon! 

Author's Response:

It is up on ffn! I'm gonna try to update them at the same pace. Ffn penname is kelsey_alt

Reviewer: bkhchica (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 06:23 PM · On: Desert Sky

This sounds really really interesting! I can't wait to see what Charlie has to say about her behavior if anything... him being the quiet type and all... Love what you have so far! :) Its totes awesome!

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