Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2013 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Comfort
So Jasper basically had natural 'roid rage? Yikes!
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2013 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 23 Mother Knows Best
Jasper is frigging mental! I thought there was just ego involved, but now I'm thinking he's seriously developmentally delayed.
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2013 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Telling It Like It Is
Jasper is just...pathetic. What a bitchy, whiny, self-important little child. Alice definitely got screwed--both ways.
Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 03:07 PM · On: Epilogue
Way too small for my eyes to read. HELP
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 02:37 PM · On: Epilogue
Wonderful!
Reviewer: sully53 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2013 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Stupidity
I'm enjoying your story but your overuse of him calling her beautiful makes it less special in meaning. Sometimes he starts and ends the same sentence with the word. I'm finding it to be distracting... JMO
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2013 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Regrets
Okay, not such asshats after all. Well except for Jasper, maybe.
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2013 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Mistake
Wow. These characters are real class A assholes. I hope they get better soon. :S
Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2012 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 34 - The End
Excellent job with this story! Once I got ahold of it I couldn't put it down. And then I'd read it as soon as I could after getting the notification emails. Love it!
Reviewer: twilightlover127 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 34 - The End
definitly sad to see this story go.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 34 - The End
good story. Enjoyed so much.
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Explanations
This was an awesome story it was a really sweet holiday read thank you .
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 34 - The End
wow very very nice keep up the great work and post
bye bye and happy new year
Reviewer: Real Teacher (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2012 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Shiny Around The Edges
Dump Jasper...screw Edward!
Reviewer: Real Teacher (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2012 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A New Life
Bella and Jasper? boy I hope this turn s to a b and e story quickly without hostility between j and b!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2012 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 34 - The End
sniffle omg sniffle love love love!!!! Cant believe theres no more sad face!!!!!! love love ty for sharing!
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2012 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 34 - The End
Thank you for such a great story!!!! <3
Reviewer: twilightlover127 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 33 - All's Well That Ends Well
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 33 - All's Well That Ends Well
good chapter.. love and best wishes to you for A Happy New Year.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Let's Get This Party Started
well
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Premature
She can not always think it is about her. He needs her to do this for HIM.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 25 - The Past
i wish B would say I love you back. Renee is certifiable.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Glimpses
ugh you don't have to let her in. She can stand outside and state her reason for coming then close the door if she stays call the cops. Problem solved.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 22 - A Mother of a Time
she needs to love him back. Love is a two way street..
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