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Reviewer: noddin (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:35 AM · On: How Deep Is Your Love?

Awesome job for your first slash attempt!  The lemon was excellent, but the buildup and background were equally wonderful.  I could realy feel Edwards' feelings as he moved from being totally isolated and alone to being more.  I really loved how he blossomed with Jasper's help.

Wouldn't it be great if everyone who felt so isolated and alone could find someone to help them bloom?

Came to this story through a recc from Robmusement:  http://robmusement.blogspot.com/2012/07/one-shot-reccs_22.html



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the lovely review. I've been having a rough day and that perked me right up! And thank you for letting me know about the Rec! I always like to know when someone is pimping me!

xoxo,

moirae

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2012 08:37 AM · On: How Deep Is Your Love?

This was very different for me - a chance I felt ready to take. I've never ventured to read a slash fic before, and I was a little afraid to do so - I mean, I absolutely adore Edward and jasper! I didn't know if I was ready for such a different experience.

I think you handled the subject of same sex love in a very respectable way. I felt these characters were true mates - friends and lovers. I appreciate the fact that no one seems to judge their choice. They just...are...And it's cool... 

The only thing I struggled with is the fact that there seems to be people outside the door listening in on such an intimate moment.. That is totally realistic in college dorms, but it's a little disturbing for me.

Thank you for sharing your creativity and talent. Very well written!

Chyla



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for giving this story it a chance.  I know it's difficult to go outside of our favorite pairings (and add in the slash and it's a whole new level!)

I'm so glad you felt they were good together. 

And if it makes you feel any better, my thought was Edward's laughter drew the attention of people in his dorm, and they took the oppotunity to tease him—they weren't standing around with ears to the door. ;)

Thank you!

moirae

Reviewer: maia smith (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 04:32 PM · On: How Deep Is Your Love?

Sweet.

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