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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 22
holy crow 3 very unexpected pov!!!!!!!!!!! love love love post again soon..
Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 22
Spent all day reading this, and I love it! Update soon-jamie
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2013 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 21
all caught up and what a story!!! Holy Crow I cant believe they did it they split bt then again you made ite asy for them not to fit into each others worlds.. Post again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Sarah - glad you're enjoying it - hoping to update more regularly
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2013 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 21
Well they are both moving along and not in a good way. Glad to know that she is not prego. I like how she can keep an eye on him via facebook. And ther is Jacob still longing for her. Can't wait to see what happens now.
merrily
Kat
Author's Response: Thanks Kat - hope to update soon
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2013 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 20
This is just heartbreaking. I remember leaving my first love because of a move--thought I was going to die. We were no Bella and Edward, but I was in love with him for months before he noticed...
Author's Response: Thank you, I hoped I had captured the feeling of teenage breakup
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2013 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 20
Well that was painful!! I know it had to happen but ............ Looking forward to the next chapter so we can suffer in silence with them.
merrily
Kat
Author's Response: I'll try to get the next one to you a little quicker. Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: pinistersis (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 18
Please send next chapter.....,thanks for writing...its a great story. P
Author's Response: Thanks for your patience. Sorry it's taking so long to update
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 18
Evil mr. Cullen!!!!
Author's Response: Or maybe doing what he thought was the right thing but misguided?
Reviewer: pinistersis (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 16
Well written.. you had me worried thru the hole chapter.....Bella needs a friend, an Alice maybe?
Author's Response: Lol - all in good time. For now she's going home and she has a plan.....
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 15
So he took her out to meet his friends. Some of them are not very friendly. Glad he did it though.She needs to get her confidence back.
Merrrily
Kat
Author's Response: If they are going to be together, she needs to be able to cope with his world. They're not all bad - Bella's lack of self confidence is colouring how she sees them.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 15
umm awkward I was hoping to meet the cullen clan not this...ugh hate rick snobs...
Author's Response: To some extent they are being rich snobs but this is Bella's viewpoint so it's partly that that is how she is seeing them. Hope you stay with it
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 14
ugh what an arse!!!
Author's Response: Sorry, I'm afraid it was a shock to him to discover that she wasn't this pure being after all and he reacted without thinking.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 13
lol too cute young love lol
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 12
squeeeeee ty ty ty lol
Author's Response: Hehe!
I think it would be fun to tickle Edward
Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 11
Poor Girl...so much going on inside her head...
Author's Response: It's a lot for her to process but Edward is there for her.
Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 15
Love it. Please update asap
Author's Response: Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2013 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 14
I am loving this story but I need more!!!! :)
Author's Response: I'm on the case, I promise. Glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: pinistersis (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 14
Uhis story is growing on me...please update soon..
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can, I promise. The system on Twilighted means that sometimes I'm waiting for work to be approved but it does mean that everything on the site is quality controlled.
Thanks for reviewing
Happy Christmas
Reviewer: Tifclark69 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 14
Glad to have another chapter. I want to like Edward, but it's not always easy!! I am enjoying your story and look forward to more.
Tiffany
Author's Response: Thank you. He will get better, I promise. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reviewing. Happy Christmas
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2012 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 14
He didn't do that very well did he? She should for sure try to get into the great colleges and be all that she can be. I guess he'll figure it out and it was a bit of surprise for him. It made him more protecting ?
Looking forward to more.
Merrily
Kat
Author's Response: Yes, he really cocked that one up. I think he'd had her on a pedestal as some paragon of virtue so it came as a shock.
Glad you're enjoying it - sorry about the wait.
Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: Joan (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 6
He kissed her!! Yaaaaaay! Im feeling all sappy and gooey now. I absolutely DO NOT want to put this story down, P. You've written such a lovely tale so far. Iam simply in love with it and your characters!!!
Author's Response: I have to say, I really enjoyed writing the kiss - thanks for the review
Reviewer: Joan (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 5
Mmmm hmmm....I tasted a hint of citrus in this chappie! :D Im really enjoying them falling for each other. It's written so sweetly. So innocent. Makes me feel 17 again. Poor Bella and her secret,though! Great work!!
Author's Response: Awww! Thank you and thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: Joan (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh YES! You described Edward/Rob perfectly!! Michaleangelo's David has got nothing on him!!! You truly do have a gift with words. You can certainly tell you work hard and are a perfectionist....which for me....makes the story all the more enjoyable,knowing it truly is a labour of love for the writer. <3
Author's Response: You have no idea - lol - I can't believe how long it takes me to complete a chapter!
Reviewer: Joan (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow! A Jacob I actually really like. What a good friend. And I had to laugh at Edwards cat and mouse game with Bella in the kitchen,I could just picture it. I have only good things to say about the story and your writing. Im very impressed by both. If I were forced to say anything remotely negative,Id just say I want longer chapters.....I don't want it to end!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much and really kind of you to post regular reviews
Reviewer: Joan (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh No! Poor Bella! Now Im wondering if it was gross Mike or scummy James! Im really loving the story and could stay up all night....must pace myself! Again your imagery is fantastic.
Author's Response: Thank you *head swelling* really kind
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