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Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:13 PM · On: That Song

Meh, who cares about tension with Jasper. Make her pregnant :)

Great chapter. I'm glad everything has sorta been figured out. Now everyone knows what's going on and how everything is linked.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

P.S Like the new banner.

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:04 PM · On: That Song

Hmm, not sure if a pregnant Bella would be a good or bad thing.  And I'm so glad things are coming together more.  Good chapter!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 05:48 PM · On: That Song

2 "crazy" lovers on the run? Of course she should get pregnant and there lies the turning point for not running anymore.

Reviewer: Sleuthy (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 05:40 PM · On: That Song

I really like this story, you're doing a great job with this plot, it runs really well. I'd like to give a large vote for no pregnancy at this stage. Unplanned pregnacy tends to just get thrown into stories as soon as you add darker elements to the plot. Often people use it purely as a plot device to add complications. Your story already has a lot of complications perfectly woven together, I think that Bella being pregnant would not only be cliche, but also unnecessary. I'd worry about it cluttering the awesome plot you've written. Swim against the stream!

Reviewer: twihards_unite (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 05:08 PM · On: That Song

gah, wow this is really intense. are we going to hear from the serial killers any time soon?

Reviewer: Denisechi (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 05:05 PM · On: That Song

I think you need to give these two people a break no pregnancy at this time.  I love Rosalies role in this shes a good gal. Laurant and james definitely need to get caught and soon.  Looking forward to next update. The lemons rock bTW

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 05:00 PM · On: That Song

That chapter was awesome, action packed and sex filled.  I love how they realized they were each other's sanctuary in the mental institution and how they told each other they are in love.  Of course the end is frightening and traumatic and a really small fucking world. 

You are really creating an incredible story.  I love every chapter.  As far as preggo...I'm usually not into the whole preggo thing...but in this story it works beautifully.  They love each other, they would go to the ends of the earth for one another, Bella is devastated by the loss of her child and would love to have a child, and yes it would piss of Jasper.  I never believe a child is the answer to solve problems...but B/E have solved so much by finding one another...a child would just intensify their bond.  Just my 2 cents, whichever direction you take the story will be fabulous.

Reviewer: purehazel (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:59 PM · On: That Song

wow this is interesting cant wait for your update!

Reviewer: purehazel (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:59 PM · On: That Song

wow this is interesting cant wait for your update!

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:56 PM · On: That Song

I love the story. This has been a great read.

I vote that she isn't pregnant. Really the whole pregnancy thing kills so much of a story IMO.

 

 

Reviewer: Crista Irene (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:09 PM · On: That Song

Awesome chapter! So so so good! I vote no on the B/E  baby... for now. Can't wait for the next post!!

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Introductions

Very interesting first chapter. I'm curious to see where this story will go.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:45 PM · On: That Song

I think if Bella was pregnant it would cause more tension with Jasper, but I also think that Bella and Edward being in love with each other after a few days might be enough tension for him.

This was a great chapter and I can't wait to read more. I wonder what Edward will do now that he knows that Jasper was Bella's ex.

Please update soon?

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 02:58 PM · On: That Song

Bout time they found out, now they need to get their asses in gear and get in contact with Jake.

Reviewer: angiepie02 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 02:57 PM · On: That Song

Aww let Bella/Edward have a baby! It would be great for the plot! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 02:51 PM · On: That Song

wow this is getting complicated. its awesome! more!! pleeease

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 02:35 PM · On: That Song

Great story!  I just read it all in one sitting.  I don't think Bella should be preggers.  I think it would be too much for Bella and Edward.  Let them heal more first and then go on to make babies.

Reviewer: FalconFeathers (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 02:01 PM · On: That Song

GO FOR THE TENSION..... I like how you have played out Jasper's personality it is quite different then how most have.

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 01:19 PM · On: That Song

I like the Bella preggo idea (I thought only people from Dublin said preggo!), but it seems like she's up the duff (more slang for being pregnant) in a lot of your stories. Or would be. But that's just me. And I like pregnant Bella!

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Light Up My Life

soo much angst in this whole story i like it but i still feel bad for them both when are they gonna realize there lives are so connected. lmao Jasper is the key.

Reviewer: teamedward77 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:40 AM · On: News

i dont understand...if edward is suppossed to be mourning the death of tanya...then why is he messing with bella...i think they shood have waited before they started having sex....its moving too fast....=[

Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Light Up My Life

This is the third story of yours that i've read and i love it. You're a really good writer and very creative. Update Soon to all your stories!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm currently reading Flight of the Phoenix, Subject: Edward Cullen AKA the womanizer, and this story. I'm curious as to why you named the story Flight of the Phoenix, does it relate to the story, or was it a random name?

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Light Up My Life

I like how Alice wants to help them... no wonder she wanted to come along with Jasper andJacob and such! so she could help!

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Light Up My Life

Mental institution, huh?  Do tell! 

Reviewer: SadisticStacy (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Light Up My Life

w-o-w!

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