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Reviewer: cherrytree (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 22
omg omg omg this story is amazing! so well written and paced. I love it!!!!! arghhhhh next chapter needs to come out asap hahah
Author's Response: Hey there!
Your excitement delights me! Thank you so much for reading, loving, and reviewing--you've made my Sunday! Stay tuned, the next chapter is in the works. And don't be a stranger; I'd love to see your feedback again :)
~A
Reviewer: cnehren (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2013 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 22
Oh my gosh! you had to stop writing there? You are just mean! I love your story! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! Yes, I'm quite the meanie when it comes to cliffie endings, mwahahaha! The next chapter is in the works, so stay tuned. And don't be a stranger! I'd love to see your feedback/reaction again!
~A
Reviewer: epm0001 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2013 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 22
Super!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm working on ch 23 now!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 22
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks, lanigirl! I'm working on chapter 23 as we speak!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 21
looking foward to more
Author's Response: Thanks, girl!
~A
Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 21
L.O.V.E. *.*
Author's Response: Your review makes me squee, lol. Thank you so SO much for your l.o.v.e and support! I'm fervently working on the next chapter so please stay tuned :)
~A
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 20
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks!
~A
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2013 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 19
Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks, lanigirl! Keep an eye out, the next chapter should be up within the next week. *crosses fingers*
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 18
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: Cessan (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2013 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 15
Juicy!! Great story!!!
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Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 17
looking forward to more
Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 17
oh my god - oh my god! xo
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Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 16
Looking forward to more
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Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2013 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 15
loved the chapter it had its ups and downs looking forward to seeing what becomes of alice and how they get her back
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing; I'm glad you're still on the crazy train with me. Sorry it took so long to respond to your review, but I truly appreciate it :) I know it's been a killer wait, but I'm sending chapter 16 to the betas today, so hopefully it will be posted in the next week or so. Hang in there with me, lanigirl!
Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2013 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 15
i'm caught up; really looking forward to the next chapters. still thoroughly enjoying it. it's unusual to read a story without POVs, but i like it. happy new year.
Author's Response: Yes, as you can probably tell by my use of OC's, I do like to be different :) I'm so glad to have you on board; I only hope you can bare with me as I struggle through the writing process in real-time. I'll try to make my brain squeeze out the next chapter soon, lol. Take care!
Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2013 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 9
just ran across this, plowing through all 15 chapers at one sittting, I hope. fine way to start the new year since i have a flu bug. enjoying it very much, lovely characters, thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! I'm sorry to hear you're sick; that's no fun at all. Take care of yourself and enjoy the rest of the story. Don't be a stranger!
Reviewer: truerosey (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
I hope she doesn't leave! Great story so far ....
Reviewer: truerosey (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like it! Bella doesn't always need to get Edward, I'm glad you're giving someone else a chance. =P
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 14
I think she should listen to him and go to Edward. I think Edward is afraid to get to close because if someone took Holly he really won't be able to survive. Great story good writing and I wish I was Holly.
Lilly
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! My story is not wildly popular but reviews like yours always make the roller coaster ride worth while. I'm still working on fifteen, so please bear with me. I'm so glad you like Holly. Being my first fanfiction, i wanted to do something different, and Holly has been a character of mine for a long time now. It makes me tear up when people show her some love. Take care, and don't be a stranger, Lilly!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 13
looking forward to what happens nexgt
Author's Response: Good to hear from you again! I'm currently getting my ass kicked by chapter fourteen but, hopefully, I'll be posting soon. Happy Monday!
Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2012 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 13
Ahhhh! This is the best story I have read in a long time!! I love that you didn't use Bella...it makes the story feel fresher. I am seriously addicted and just read all 13 chapters back to back, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I'm thrilled that you love it--thank you so much for the glowing review! Chapter 14 should hopefully be up in the next week, so stay tuned and keep reviewing :)
Reviewer: cnehren (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2012 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 13
So I am officially in love with this story! It makes my day when I see you have updated! So, how in the world did they get Alice!?! :)
Author's Response: You have no idea how happy your words make me ... seriously! Thank you so much for reading and taking this journey with me and Holly--we need all the support we can get, lol. Please don't be a stranger; chapter 14 should be up in the next week or so and you'll soon have all the answers you need ... Muahahahahaha!
Reviewer: kherisma (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2012 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 13
Excellent chapter, very nicely done for Holly's first lemon.
This is by far my favorite line of the whole story to date: "Getting caught sniffing Edward’s clothes like an animal in heat, would be a perfectly embarrassing grand finale to her exceptionally shitty night."--Uh, ya think? Too funny!
*Hugs and phalanges*~K
Author's Response: Lol, phalanges! As for the line--well, you never know what will come flying out of my phalange-tips when I'm exhausted and my validation beta is pushing me for more ;) Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Cessan (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2012 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 12
Awesome chapter!! Cant wait till next one!!! Loving the story!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the continued love; I'm glad your still reading! Have a great holiday!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 12
Hah. Even since I started reading a bit of girlie popular stuff going around at the moment out of curiousity it's consistent. Guys are thoughtless and stupid but girls are intentially vicious and vendictive as in RL. It's a nasty world.
Well hoping Holly works this out.
Author's Response: Hey there. Thanks for reading; I'm thrilled to have a male perspective! Keep reading and don't be a stranger.
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