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Reviewer: pricana (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 12
The boys are so sweet :)
I feel so bad for Bella and the boys but they do get to stay with Edward and hopefully make it permanent.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I love this fic!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 12
I KNEW there was going to be a fire! But I'll admit I thought it was the boys' faults.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 12
So wonderful....
Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 12
:)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 12
sniffle I hope they get alot out of teh landlord. They should be able to get some state assistance too. My Aunt lost her home in a fire and she had insurance but not enough the state stepped in and made sure she had gift cards to replace clothing and personal stuff tehy will all need and even found a really nice 2nd hand shop to get free furniture.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
oh how devastating...... i hope they can sue the homeowner
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 8
I just started this story last night so I'm still catching up. I'm not sure how I'd feel dating a guy that much younger than me so I get Bella's apprehension.
On a side note, Bella's C-section scar would be much lower; just above her pubic bone if it was lateral; rather than under her navel. (I've had 2- one emergency & one planned C-section)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
Squeeeee I am all caught up and its a shame I was loving teh flow of chaps its an amazing story with such detail love and care put into every chap!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!! squeee love love love!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 10
Squeee who couldnt love Bella and those boys! I loved it! I see Alice and Jasper are hitting it off and Esme and Carlisle don't seem to be freaking out about it so ,..huh!
Love love love!!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 9
squeee I was hoping the kiss would have made it on the jumbo tron there for would have been on tv and certain people would just so happen to see a certain game..... lol love this
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 11
Hmmm... Heidi,huh? Sounds like trouble to me.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 8
OMG I love yous and oral woot muth fuckin woot!!!!! that was just holy hell lucky girl teehee!!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 7
woot woot squeeeeee Alice is Amazin can't wait for her to meet Jass
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 6
wow oh wow that was just something Poor Bella I know she doesnt want pity but its sad shes lost so many years to her youth for misguided mistakes... I am glad she kept the boys... sniffle poor girl needs to open up her heart to Edward
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 5
squeee wow they are getting somewhere inch by inch but good for him woot woot
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
Omg the kids are just wow who would have throught amazing!!!! and Edward is just to die for!!!! wow! squeeee love it!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
Squeeee omg wow just wow Ifeellike Edward should be in the end zone slamming teh football down screaming touch down but she had to put a flag on his play hahahahha love love love
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh I am so loving it!!! The length is amazing for a chap truly just wow!!!! I wonder how Edward is going to handle Bellas kids I mean they have done major damage to people that financial restitution could be required and Bella might not be able to handle that finacially. I really really like this story so far! I am glad we dont have to worry about some angry Bella ex!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 11
hope their time apart goes fast....that Heidi will be trouble, won;t she?
Reviewer: pricana (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
They are so sweet together. I just love them. I'm nervous about Heidi coming into the picture. Edward sounds like a typical guy that doesn't see a potential problem.
Can't wait until the next chapter :)
Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 11
i see trouble brewing! as in Heidi of course. Just a bump in the road i hope?
Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 11
:)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2012 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
whew!...lucky for him...lol but how will she take him leaving for 2 weeks???
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2012 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 10
Well that was awfully sweet. I am curious where you came up with Ted. I can't figure that one out... not that it really matters. More soon, please! Bella didn'teven read the card!
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