Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Holy Fuck. That's all I can muster up at the moment. I'm rendered incoherent.
Reviewer: EclipsedbyJacob (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
This is definately my favorite, too! So, he has been watching her...Sneaky boy.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Nice. Very nice.
Reviewer: iWant2BaMonsterToo (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
FINALLY!! lol i cant wait to get into edwards head :]
Reviewer: christtt315 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
great job... Edward is definitely naughty =]
Reviewer: sasquatch (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Wonderful!
You deserve a better review than I can give you.
Reviewer: reloadme (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
um.
this story kind of makes my life.
so update FASTER!!!!
Reviewer: OneTreeHunny (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Ah-freakin-mazing! I have never loved a chapter more. I love that Bella was angry with him, as she should be, but I think that just made this chapter hotter. I love that Edward followed her to her secret spot, and him finishing the job for her, THUD, kill me now. Best chapter! I love it! Can't wait for another update, this story kicks ass!
Reviewer: xxashleyxx (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Such a lovely chapter.. haha.. It was great. And 'flick her bean' was very,very funny. Good shit:)
Reviewer: jakeward (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
You have made my day!! You knew you would, but I thought I should tell you all the same! Happy New Year!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
That was SHOCKINGLY hot! I never expected it to be like that. I knew that Edward would surprise her, but not like that! I need to calm down now....now to my detachable showerhead...(just kidding! LOL!) Post more asap! PLEASE!!!!!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
WOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO!!!! So fantastically amazingly hoooooooottttttt!!!!!
Well played! I was waiting for this to come out and play!
Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
well I don't want to be cursed......
Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Oh my gosh I almost cried I was so happy you updated and this chapter was AWESOME! Thank you thank you thank you I love every little mundane detail of this story but this was such a satistfying chapter, not forced- just right.
Reviewer: LaurenCullen (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter One: Explanations and Fishing
I would invite Edward to finish what I start any day!! I have been following this story since like chapter 7 went up. Love it....and thank you for the very nice New Year's present.
Reviewer: CliodnaWrites (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
I just found this story today, but I love it! it's fun and utterly fantastic. Exactly what I needed! Can't wait for the next update. :)
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Whoop! Finally! I looooooooooooove dirty talking Edward. That was hot. HOT!
Reviewer: amandasaurus (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Please update soon! My goodness, I loved that last chapter. Update soon, pretty please?
Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Great great great. Please update soon. Fabulous!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
hehe, knew that was coming sometime soon!
Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
HOT HOT HOT! MORE MORE MORE!
Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
ummm...wow...i knew he was spying... :) :) :)
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Guuuhhhhhh. I've been waiting for that to happen! Lol
Reviewer: WndrngY (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Holy...crow! Is it hot in here? More please!
Reviewer: flibbins (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
That was a great scene... naughty Edward. I love when he takes charge and talks dirty. I'm looking forward to finding out what they'll get up to next...
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