Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Lump in throat....ribbet.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 14: Cheese+Cheeks+Cake
Can I slap Edward now.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 13: God+Pixie+Closet
Citrus is my favorite flavor.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 11: Lasagna + Tricks
Tricks from that bunny are definitely not for kids.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 10: Storms and Hangings
Edward is the answer to a lot ot questions, but usually not hangman.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lasagna + Blue Van
Bella trying to outrun Edward. Priceless.
Author's Response: You're spamming me. I love it. And yes, Bella trying to manage her less-than-athletic body is just... well, ground for comedy. heh.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 8: a Note Delivered
Thank you for making me have to open a browser window for a dictionary/thesaurus for ( mercurial ). Perfect word choice now that I know what it means. See you can learn while reading fan fiction.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 7: Bella Enters + Edward Leaves
Bella moaned....Atlas shrugged.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 6: Handcuffs + Caveman
My peeps to the rescue. Gotta love our girls and one very cute caveman.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter Four: Marriage and Frogs
Love it. Starte not to review since it is a completed story, but then I thought what a dumb shit I am. Of course you need love too. Love it and can't wait to continue.
Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter One: Explanations and Fishing
I was crying I laughed so hard when the hook went through Jake's nostril. I thought it couldn't get any better than that. I was wrong! Wormy-freaking-genocide - excellent mental image there!
Reviewer: ChristiantheHeretic (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
o.o
I don't like that Edward is slightly obsessed with the word pussy, but DEAR GOD.
Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 29: End & Epilogue
Its its a fun, intriguing and overall awesome story...!
It made me happy, sad, confused, horny, excited, blissful and all the other feelings that i might've forgot I had (since I scheduled my responsibilities around to read this, it took awhile.. :D)...
Kudos to you!
p.s. I love your imagination. You are awesome.
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 29: End & Epilogue
oh my . . . read in one sitting . . . guh . . . where do I find an Edward?
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 15: All Fall Down
Sassy, sexy, long-fingered, piano playing Edward . . . uuung!
Reviewer: Ceri (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 29: End & Epilogue
i love ur story! its amaz-zing! yupyupyup! (like ducky from the land before time! ^^) I love it sosososososososososo much! i'm so sad that its over.
Reviewer: Ceri (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 24: Sharing is Caring
Please, let there be a lemon soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: IrishPeanut07 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 29: End & Epilogue
This is one of the best plotted (word?), funniest, most well-written, engaging stories I have read. Ever. Thank you very much.
Reviewer: Elizabeth (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 29: End & Epilogue
this was fabulous!! im so ecstatic to have full story, but im also sad that there is no more.... im praying for the outtakes to come soon!
Reviewer: mystichearts (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 29: End & Epilogue
This was such an amazing story! I loved every word of it!
Thank you so much for writing this. :)
I'm looking forward to your next story!
Oh btw, I voted for you for the Eddie and Bellie awards! I hope you win! Because you definitely deserve it.
~Mystic
Reviewer: bluebrise (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 29: End & Epilogue
No! This story can't be over already! Every chapter has been a blast to read and I've enjoyed all the twists and turns you've provided. Who knew that a yellow vibrator, waterfall and gnome would be so much fun in a story?
Thanks for the great story, I look forward to your next one!
Reviewer: AliceChild (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 28: Mirror, Mirror
I saw Vicky comming back when they were talking about kissing. I did a little happy dance in my chair when it all came about.... I like being right! =] You write all of these characters well! Kudos, cookies and yellow dildos to you!
Reviewer: AliceChild (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 29: End & Epilogue
So... I though the epilogue was an authors note...
I loved this fic. It was amazing! And I happened to be one of those scilent readers only because I was too lazy to go recheck my email for my password and unable to change it...
So just know that I loved it the whole way through!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 29: End & Epilogue
It IS sad that it's over. I read the whole story today and really loved it. The waterfall scene was so perfect in so many ways. Really special. I really love these characters as you wrote them. Brava!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 28: Mirror, Mirror
You're quite the poet! Well, the Victoria love interest came out of nowhere. I hate that she slept with James. Bella handled that whole thing with a lot of grace.
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