its after 2 am and i just finished reading this wonderful story! sorry im one of the lurkers (btw thanks for the poem ;)) i really luv the story and im really sad to see it end! :'( i luv their magical first time! me being 21yo can only hope mine is as magical as theirs was! sorry for not reviewing before but once i start reading i just keep on going untill im done (thats why i mostly read completed stories) you are a great writer and i cant wait to read your other stories... but for now i better go to bed and have some drems about edward and a waterfall ;p

Well I never would have guessed that Vicky was gay she did a very good impression of a straight person, why on earth did James stay with her?  He really must have his own issues. Above everything I'm glad they talked and Bella got her answers, I suspect Edward my have a few questions of his own now.

Jane x

Urgh! Vicky and James are there, time for Bella andEdward to put them in their place me thinks.

How has Phil survived all this time with Renee's cooking, lol, it's a wonder he hasn't faded away.  If they have a baby it's going to have to learn to cook pretty fast or it will starve to death.

Jane x

Lol, scuppered at every turn, the best laid plans and all that.

I feel sorry for Leah, not sure if I feel sorry for Jake and Seth having to look after her though, they must have done something to deserve it....it could be punishment for Jake offending the Gnome lol.

Jane x

Why do girls have blinkers on when it comes to guys? Vicky totally created that situation by being disloyal to her friend, then she blames her and throws her to the wolves.  I hope she gets what she deserves and more because the only thing Bella did wrong was be a loyal and trusting friend.  I hope Edward gets revenge for Bella.

Jane x

Detention was never that interesting at my school, lol.  Bella's certainly gone from 0 to 60 in a very short space of time, she's barely had Edward's cock in her hand 5 minutes and then it's in her mouth and she's swallowng down his cum, damn that girl moves fast,lol.

Jane x

Finally, Edward has kissed Bella, maybe not exactly how she'd like but he's making the effort, lol.

Jane x

Philemaphobia?  Never heard of it but sooo glad I don't suffer from it.  Poor Bella, how could Edward not want to snog her...ok I know, I know he has a phobia, but still.  Will Bella be able to cure Edward or will this be the hottest non snogging relationship in history? Lol.

Jane x

Lol, Bella squeaking around all day in patent leather.  Trust Emmett to come up with that idea of making Bella competion prize, he'd have got more than cheescake in his face if I was Bella, lol.

Jane x

Lol, I love how they all turned up at the diner, totally scuppering Mike's plans and saving Bella in the process.  Bella's going to need to think before she speaks and stop falling for the puppy dog face, hopefully Newton will have got the message now, although I do enjoy his torture, it's funny.

I loved Edward's confession.

Jane x

Alice and Rose are a force to be reckoned with and there's no point in resisting, lol,  At least Bella can't stay mad at Edward for long but I don't know how Jess will feel as they get closer, well I do, but you know I'll play the game.

Bella is in much need of relief from that waterfall, will the Cullen clan join her?

Jane x

Could Bella get anymore clumsy?  Lol, at least she found out what was in the note. I get the feeling that Emmett and Jasper could be frequent visitors at Bella's for dinner.  It makes a change everyone getting on with Jake.

Jane x

Well at least Emmett is pleased, bess him, and Bella did get to make some friends straight away, so far so good.

Jane x