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Reviewer: tammy9901 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
Wow that was really good. I love how they progressed. I would like to see a second chapter though.
Author's Response: Should those characters ever revisit me, I'll surely add to the story. Thanks for reading.
~Jen
Reviewer: Karmabites76 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
HOT, HOT, HOT!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Hi ya Karma!
That was the intention, a little heat a little snark, I think it turned out pretty damned good. Thanks for reading!
~JEN
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
What a fun read! Talk about a slow drawn out seduction, a slow burn, I loved it!
Dixie
Author's Response: Thanks Dixie! I ral loved writing that one, it was fun and there was something very sweet about them that I had to put on paper.
~Jen
Reviewer: stella sin (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
cute!
Author's Response: Hiya,
Glad you liked it and tahnks oodles for takng the time to post a review.
~MissJ
Reviewer: badsokkaaaa (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2012 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
What a fantastic one shot. The tension was absolutely unbelievable! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I'm glad I entertained you for a short while.
~MissJ
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
From the time little Edward was akid he really liked Bella. Talk about a big tease. Wouldn't admit it was him that really liked Bella had to always make it a Bella thing. Bella you're thinking of me, a little drool at the side of your mouth. Doing anything to get arise lout of her. Any reaction is better than none. As if they were fooling anybody around them, they all knew Edward and Bella had it bad for each other. I'd say it's about time they finally got together. The two of them were about to internally combust into flames. At least now they can burn together in pleasure and eventually in love.
Author's Response: I see you stumbled upon one of my one shots. Grovey. Glad you enjoyed my little UST fuelled fling. Thanks for reading!
~Jen
Reviewer: marinob (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
Love.
Author's Response: Well thank you!
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
Well there's one way to end up together ;)
Author's Response: LOL, years of foreply, sounds lovely to me. Thanks for reading!
~MissJanuary
Reviewer: alexajaye (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
That was really cute and made me laugh.
Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: I had fun writing it. Thanks for reading it, and thank you for taking the time to review.
~MissJanuary
Reviewer: warning (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
Love it i like the development of the relationship form kids to teens never thought edward would get high butnow that i think about it it sounds totally sexy
Author's Response: Something about a smoked out Edward is kinda hot! Thanks for reading.
~MissJanuary
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
loved it
Author's Response: Hi there songii, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Thanks bunches for taking the time to review.
~MissJanuary
Reviewer: gingerhat (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
Hey Jen!
I don't know how you manage to do that - get that much 'life' condensed into basically a chapter and do it so well; not to mention define a relationship so clearly in those confines. Excellent.
You have always been terrific at the 'heat' between characters and I'm delighted to say you've done it again. The chemistry shouted out. I might have had to wipe my brow. ;)
Always enjoy your work - sorry it took me so long to get to this, but, hey, I fought thru RL to get to it. :D
Ginger
Author's Response: Ginger,
Thank you, sincerely. When the idea popped into my head I too had trouble with how this would fit in a OneShot. So I just focused in on the snippnets I got and played with them until I gist of the characters then it came easy. Thanks, as always for reading and for taking the time to review. One shot's need love too.
~Jen
Reviewer: darkstarz (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
Loved the story and the way it was put together.
Author's Response: Thanks oodles, I have fun writing this. These two just seemed to come through so easy. Thanks for reading.
~MissJanuary
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
This is why I hate one shots..always leaves u with wanting more! Great little story Miss Jan! Thx for sharing xo
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
This is why I hate one shots..always leaves u with wanting more! Great little story Miss Jan! Thx for sharing xo
Author's Response: Hello Acey,
Feeling of unfulfilment aside, I'm glad you took the time to read and to review.
~MissJanuary
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: Make Me O/S
This was great!
Author's Response: Thanks BellaC! I had a ball writing it, so I'm glad to see people are enjoying the read.
~MissJanuary
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