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Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Fallout
Awwww. Loved the visuals on how Alice and Rosalie tried to persuade the stubborn twins that they needed each other. So these two are hopefully heading towards each other. Edward knows what is important! Bella! Reading on!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 18 GIrls Night
Damn....man...damn! I can't believe she heard tha conversation, well, part of it! This is heartbreaking! I hope happiness is near. They both deserve it! Reading on! Loving it!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Altercations
Amazing to see now jealous Edward was feeling when he saw Jacob staring at his Bella. I felt the pain for poor Edward when his wrist was locked up like that, yikes! Loved how Edward went immediately to Bella, to soothe her, when he saw her. Can't wait for more! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Rough Times at the Rodeo
Damn....caught! The boy is persistent! Staking his claim on Bella in front of Jake, hahaha. Love it!! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Pancakes...and Pills
Damn Bella. Needing to tell the medic about that in front of Esme. Damn! Not happy that Rosalie told Edward the truth before his ride. Should have waited!!! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Old Friends
So Jacob is into our Bella, hmmm? Well Edward has other plans. Renee is right. Love can come on quickly. Adored that he didn't want to be without Bella. He was willing to let things be, if she was pregnant. The boy is in for the long haul! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 13 - What now?
Loved the conversation between Esme and Bella, and the other mom and Bella. Hopefully making Bella feel better about a relationship with a rodeo cowboy! Can't believe Edward had a bad ride like that, and hope Edwafd doesn't take it out on Bella. She's already kicking herself! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Reality Check
Yes...go to Texas! She hates her job....she can still see her friends....I would do it! Bella...he cares so much for you! Reading on! Loving it!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Late Nights Early Mornings
Aww, that was so damn cute! Poor Bella. Ding embarrassed at the beginning, but damn, these two were hot together. Loved the description of Edward's ride. Perfect, and then to see how he runs to find Bella, and hugs her, damn perfect!! Reading on!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 10 - A Day At The Pool
Loved the visual of Pool Time! So funny and cute! This Bella is so cute with the teasing, and it looks like she finally got her cowboy! Yippie ah Yay!!! Reading on!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 9 - A Wild Afternoon
Intense but good. Love how she fits with the family. Not glad that James and Victoria were there, but glad Edward knows the truth. Fated loves!! Reading on!
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Final Day
Loved IT ! That was so much fun and I really enjoyed the location and the history of the Calgary Stampede. I thought it was well written and liked your E&B and the rest of the family.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Final Day
I Loved It!! Thanks for making us that know nothing of the Stampede feel like we could have been there. Looking forward to epi.
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Date Night
Great date night. Honorable date....paying for her dinner. Loved how they sat together, front to back, and he behaved. The questions were great...and Alice waiting for him...lol....Reading on!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Final Day
Awesome! that was close for Edward....Great day for his nephew to be born...lol
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Morning After
Loved how Edward grew a bit of a clearer mind after talking to ever protective Emmett and smart Alice. The boy wants more than a one night stand....loved how feisty Bella was ready to tell Edward off when it looked like he had a change of heart. Adore the new love! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Late Night
Love this hot and feisty couple. How Edward asked her to stay, awww. The way they ran through the rain, and how Edward pulled her on his lap on the train....them their hotel time....damn hot!!!!! Love it! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 - A Night Out
Love flirty Edward....drunkward!! YAY!! Bella is perfect for him! Bareback huh?? Love the idea od Bella bull riding! Take his training, I'm sure it would be hands on! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Sneak-a-Peak
Love the visuals of the park, and all the crazy food and rides. Funny the meeting up of Alice and the girls at the ferris wheel....loved the little conversation between Alice and Edward. Blunt but good! The little visual of Edward and Bella meeting face to face through the train doors, perfect! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Almost Time
So interesting to see how big the Stampede is...and how much planning goes into it.....now they are there and greasy food fest begins.....can't wait...reading on....
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Final Day
good story
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Preparations
Well ww have a bit of a visual on how Bella's body has changed slightly since the pregnancy, and wow, Edward seems hot! Can't wait for more!!! Reading on...hopefully more than a quick minute encounter coming up between Bella and Edward.
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Final Day
Thank you for such a great story I knew hed win Hope to see more from you congats on a really good story Love@Light
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Special Summer
Interesting story. Love the details that starts the story on the right page. Love how Bella teases her mom. Adored the car conversation, and how Emmett entered the picture, passing his brother, haha. Reading on!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Little Surprises
Bella's mom puts everything into perspective. Bella realizing that Edward is her happiness. She needs him and to find out that he has left from the competition to find her to prove she is number 1. Bella goes in search of him. Too bad she didn't stay where she was for Edward to find her. Would have saved a lot of running around and almost being arrested. But they found each other and told each other how they felt. Bella had Edward compete and he's number 1 for the day. Yeah. Then Rose goes into premature labor and a baby boy has been added to the family. Loved Edward's shock at being not only the godfather, but having his name being the baby's middle name. Edward and Bella both realize and have admitted they are better together in spite of what may come for them. Looking forward to the last day's competition and for them to finalize where they are going from here.
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