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Reviewer: Hyla (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2012 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

Loved reading the first chapter had me at the edge of my seat. Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

Aaaaw... sweet. I definitely want more. Need to know what James is up to....

Reviewer: ECgirlforever09 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

I love this chapter and the fact that our favorite couple are back together again.

Reviewer: missameilia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

I am thoroughly enamored with joy to be reading one of your stories again! Great 1st chapter! Thanks for sharing.

Lynn

Reviewer: allybearsmommy8 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

Love it and can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

I can not wait until you get this going. Most of the mystery stories poop out. I hope you can keep this one updated and interesting.

thanks,

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

The intensity, the clarity, the romance, the seduction, the angst, the visual way you do things...girl...this story had to be yours.!! I was stamping my feet on the floor after I read it for the contest. I wanted MOOOORRRREEE!! I was so excited to know that it would be continued. From the intensity of the loss of love, the reconnection of love, the psycho chasing them. The heat between Edward and Bella...dammmnnnn! I LOVE IT! Hell, not Love isn't a big enough word...I am OBSESSED with it! Just like Room W/A Vu. Can't get enough. This story put's such different elements out there, but the passion that your characters share, and then the listing of Jessica as the troublesome girlfriend...yeah! Time to kick the bitch out. Bella, stand by your man! Can't wait to see what happens next! YUMMY!! Thank you AG!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

Thank you!

Reviewer: LilyJean (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

This is good. I like it. I'll be anxious to see how you develop this story.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

good start

Reviewer: PJAustin (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

Oh yes! Please, please, pretty please with sugar on top... MORE!

XOXO

Pam

Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

I love your writing and your stories! You truly have a gift for storytelling and it's always a pleasure to read... You never disappoint!!! You always draw me in and of course you did again! Love the story and can't wait for the mystery to unfold. Thx :)

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

This was great! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

Just wanted to let you know how much I loved this. I read it in the contest and really thought it was wonderful. Great chemistry, and nice premise for a story. I voted for it!

I am so excited that you're going to continue it, I look forward to reading it!

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 1. Reunion

YEAH!!!!!!!!

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