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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 18
squeee omg omg omg love this story and I bet Edward wants to buy Aros house!! Post again soon can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: jemappellegenevieve (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh my god. I have been trying to laugh silently so my family doesn't think I'm insane but its becoming more difficult with each chapter! Love it!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 17
squeeee holy hell I need a cold shower!!!! that was beyond wow!!! please please please post agai soon!!
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 17
Haha, I was so worried that Aro or someone would interrupt right before Bella got hers. Yay!! It's official -- they're both hooked.
Reviewer: ShanaEich (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2013 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 16
Can't wait to read more!!! It was just getting to the good part lol!
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 16
Edward thinks it's ruined, but he and Bella will look back on how wonderful that first date was :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 16
squeeeeee their "parking" squeeee love love love you better post again soon!!!
Reviewer: rna84 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ive only read the first chapter so far but I like it. Im glad your characters wont be having sex 24/7 that drives me crazy and honestly...I usually cant even finish a story when its all about sex .
Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2013 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 15
Excellent
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 14
Loving this story!
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad to hear you enjoy it
Reviewer: ChannyMaddy (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 14
Excellent chapter. I can't wait to see how their relationship plays out. He's such a hottie'! ;p
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. BOB xx
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 14
Just found this and read 'til I caught up. Really enjoying it :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Glad to hear you are enjoying it so far.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 14
lmao!!!!! love love love!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 13
This has had me laughing so hard that my husband wanted to know what was going on...so I read it out loud to him9The bit about the waxing) and we both cracked up. He had an experience with at friend in college(a young frmale fellow student) that was almost the same. She was waxing her legs not her bikini line. She did not try to was it off, but did call him and go over to his house to get some help with the removal. They were both material science engineering students and she thought that they couldwork out the correct materila to remove the wax. That bit had him in stitches since he had been there and he says that you gave a good discription of the problem.
Thanks so much and I cant wait for more - Xanath
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow his boat is even better then I imagined!! I just love love loved this chap it was absolutley one of my fav chaps!! Lets start with teh length LOVED nice long deatiled and just wowo it flowed amazingly nothing I would change 1 bit I love how Edward assumed she would just run and then when she agreed with her girl buts and started lol I was smiling like a silly teenager thinking oh my if they only knew hahahahahha Perfect I am begging you for more I cant wait I am so excited I feel I should sit on my hands before I resort to begging and pleading....oh who am I kidding
PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE Pretty Please with a naked Edward on top of that boat PLEASE post again soon!!! hahahaha
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2013 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 12
noooooooooooooo u tease evil evil tease! post again soon omg now now now
Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2013 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 12
love - love - love this story! *.*
Reviewer: groveysgirl (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2013 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi! First of all I want to say that I love the story so far and have been reading it since you first posted it as a one-shot. The only thing I would say about it is that these last few chapters seem to be moving really really slow. I'm guessing its for buildup, and I don't want you to think I'm being mean with my review, I just wanted to leave my two cents :). That said, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: ??? This story has never been posted as a one-shot. This story started as a drabble over on FFN and has 145 chapters over there.
Sorry if you think the updates are slow. I have no control over how fast chapters are updated here. It's up to the validation beta. As soon as a chapter is updated here, I send the next one and have to wait over two weeks for it to update. It's just the way things are on this site. If you want more of this story you will just need to look elsewhere ;) BOB
Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2013 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 12
ah! you can't stop there! I want to read this twisted little explanation!
Reviewer: MelanieHeleyna (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2012 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 12
And..... we have a cliffhanger. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!
Reviewer: EmziBob (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2012 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 11
Damnit, update, update, update lol I am totally loving this story so far :)
Reviewer: Antoinette (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2012 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
This story is awesome! Keep up the good work :D
Reviewer: Antoinette (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2012 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
This story is awesome! Keep up the good work :D
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. Glad to hear you are enjoying it so far. BOB xx
Reviewer: LaceyBlack (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 11
This is like the third time your story has popped up on the updated list but it's not been updated. I'm sad. Just sad. I always get so excited to see an updated chapter's available. Just saying... 😊
Author's Response:
I have no idea why people are receiving multiple update notifications for a chapter that was posted four or five days ago, and I'm sorry this is dissappointing to some people. I have not altered any of my previous chapters in any way.
After being alerted to this problem, I sent an email to Twilighted to ask them what is going on, and they have responded and told me they will look into the issue.
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